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Thief of my heart – chapter 17
Chapter 17
Shane and Tina’s apartment
Tina was in her room trying on everything that she found in her closet. Which was not much. Most of her clothes were jeans and shirts.
‘Shane!’
‘…’
‘SHANE!!!’
Shane came running into Tina’s room.
‘What is it? Did something happen?’
‘I…I have nothing to wear!’ Tina said pouting
‘Oh for christs sake…please…don’t do that to me!’
‘Do what?’
‘The I-have-nothing-to-wear-crisis! You are not the kind of girl who wears uncomfortable clothes just to impress a woman.’
‘But she is so…so…hot whatever she wears and I feel like the poor and ugly girl that broke into her apartment.’
‘Hey! Stop insulting my best friend. You are beautiful and hot and you have a killer body by the way! I have seen you often enough working out. Not easy to watch sometimes. I always have to remind myself that we are friends!’
‘You mean you would hit on me if we weren’t friends?’
‘Of course!’
‘Interesting….so what do you think I should wear?’
‘What are you guys doing?’
‘I am not sure. She invited me to her place.’
‘That means something casual would be good.’
‘You think?’
‘Sure…what about these black pants and the red shirt. You look good in that outfit and you feel comfortable, right?’
‘I look good? Good is not enough…I want to look hot and sexy…’
‘Ok ok…put on your slutty boots and she will take you right on the doorstep.’ Shane smirked
‘These beautiful boots are not slutty!’
‘I was just kidding…since when are you such a wuss?’
‘Sorry…I don’t know what is going on with me.’
‘Oh I think I know…you are nervous!’
‘No I’m not!’
‘Oh yes you are! But don’t worry. It will be fine. So go get changed!’
Shane was about to leave the room when Tina said
‘Shane?’
‘Yeah?’
‘Thank you!’
‘You’re welcome!’
She left and Tina got changed. After she was finished and checked herself in the mirror she went to the bathroom and applied a little bit of make up. She wanted it to look natural since Bette told her that she liked it that way. She grabbed her purse and jacket and knocked at Shanes door.
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Can’t wait to see how the evening turns out. PPS
You cannot leave me hanging. PPS
And just as we heard the knock, jay ended the chapter umm PPVSI hope u back gets better.
Jay thats just wrong to stop there…either can still my heart anytime
no don’t stop here please!!!! to late ok no problem please come back soon.
Can’t wait to see what happens. Thanks for posting and hope you’re back gets better :)
I hope that your back gets better and surgery is not necessary. Love how both women are nervous. Can’t wait for the next post.
Jay! Good chapter but it ended way to early. I know you will have a great date chapter. I hope the working out helps your back. I want you to be able to have your dream. Just take it easy on yourself. Ok my friend take care.
Hi, dear sweet Jay! Awww sweetie, please keep taking care of your back, would you? You have us worried, here. Hope the exercise will work. As for the story, we loved the anticipation on both sides, for the dinner date. Ah, the typical phrase that all of us women use: “I’ve got nothing to wear”. Hahaha Yep. SO typical. B&T are so sweet, that they both want to make this time special for each other. Thanks for this update, dear friend. PPS Hugs & kisses on both your cheeks.- Lucero & Marsha (Proud Salsa Aunties to the ever loving JC and Eunichick and Tias Adoradas to Patpez)
I trust in you, you will come up with a wonderful date-chapter. I can’t wait to see it, so please post soon. Happy Easter, enjoy the wonderful weather.
hmmm that was a bad place to stop, you simply must continue! lol
Great update ;) I was wondering when you were going to post this!! Worth the wait great job! Talk to you later ;)
Get a second or third opinion and avoid surgery if you can…Love this story it just gets better and better. PPS.
Get a second or third opinion and avoid surgery if you can…Love this story it just gets better and better. PPS.
Get a second or third opinion and avoid surgery if you can…Love this story it just gets better and better. PPS.
jay…that was not nice to leave us hanging there…I sure hope you post soon. Glad to hear you are starting to feel better.
jay…that was not nice to leave us hanging there…I sure hope you post soon. Glad to hear you are starting to feel better.