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Thief of my heart – chapter 16
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They both smiled and held each other. It was comforting for both of them and another example for their great friendship.
‘Tina you know that I did a lot of crazy things in my life. There is nothing that could surprise me.’
‘I am a thief!’
‘You are what?’ Shane looked flabbergasted
‘I am a thief. The nights I went out and told you I was for a walk…I was breaking into apartments.’
‘Wow…okay…this is…wow’
‘See…I knew you would freak out!’
‘I am not freaking out. But this is a huge bomb you just dropped and you have to give me a moment to digest this information.’
They sat side by side in silence for a few minutes until Shane said
‘This explains why you never had a problem with money.’
‘Yeah’
Silence fell again but this time Tina was the first to speak again
‘Shane?’
‘Yeah?’
‘Sorry about earlier. I was totally out of line.’
‘It’s okay….I mean you scared me a bit…don’t do that again!’
‘I promise’
‘So care to explain why you freaked out? It has something to do with Bette Porter, right?’
Tina didn’t answer. She just looked down on her hands in her lap.
‘Tina?’
‘Yes it has something to do with Bette. Last night when I told you I would meet an old friend…’
‘Anna was a lie…I know’
‘You know?’ Tina looked shocked
‘Of course…it was kinda obvious. I just didn’t know why you lied to me’
‘Well I couldn’t tell you that I was about to break into Bette Porter’s apartment, could I?’
‘You did what? You broke into Bette’s apartment last night?’
‘Yes and it seems like at the time I was there you told her my name. She left early right?’
‘Yeah’
‘Well she caught me. I could have escaped but she saw my back and somehow she recognized me and said my name. I was frozen on the spot.’
‘And when I told you today that I have given her your name you freaked out.’
‘Yes. I mean I escaped but I wasn’t sure if she would call the cops. Without my name I would’ve had a good chance. But now she knew my face and my name.’
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Bring on the date! PPS:)
jay…so very jealous of the Pink concert..I adore her and unless I go somewhere else in the world I have no idea when I will be able to see her. She is definitely not in the States this year. Great chapter and bring on the date…pps
Thank you for the update! It was really good. Can’t wait for the next chapter. You mean so much to me my friend. Take care of your back. I loved the Pink pictures.
So Pink was awesome? Glad you got to have some enjoyment. Happy that Tina came clean with Shane. Can’t wait for the date to take place.
first :D haha this is so funny! loved the chapter! you’re doing well, keep this up!! thanks
I like your story a lot. I hope you will have time to write a new chapter soon. BTW I don’t think it was wrong to go to a concert. Maybe your back would have appreciate the comfort of a couch, but now you have definitely enough wonderful memories to go through therapy. I wish you all the best.
Like your story… can’t wait to see what happens at the dinner date. Take care of your back. Thank you :)
Wrong to go to a Pink concert, NOT. How could that be, your back was going to be bitching at you anyway and regardless of the price of the ticket you still had a priceless experience, so says Md. Ok the story was great, like how they are both looking forward to the date, so am I. Thank you, Md aka Oma
Loved Bette’s ‘neglecting your best friend’ comeback, made me laugh! Always fun to read this story!!! … I’m a Pink fan too and can understand your excitement to go to her concert, but you’ve got to take care of yourself! (said in my stern nurse voice *grin*).
I’m shocked that Tina told Shane the truth. I love Alice, she is so funny. It’s nice to see Bette excited about her date with Tina. I hope Bette wears a HOT, little SEXY black dress. Delicious, Tina would not resist her. Good post. Continue, I am enjoying the story.
Hey Jay – Hope you hang in with your back — they are stubbornly slow to heal (and dancing/jumping don’t tend to help :>) – but heck who could resist for Pink!!!) I am anxiously awaiting “the date” between our lovely thief and art collector — there should be a lot of fireworks. So Shane had no idea what Tina was doing – that would be shocking. I still think that Bette will ultimately be the thief of Tina’s heart! More soon please…
OMG i was fooled by the 5th page..”shaking a finger” that just not right.. excellent update even with the missing 5th page.. LOL
Fun – bring on the date!
well worth the wait ;) thanks for thee shout out! my feelings are mutual as you know
Hi Jay! Wow! It was great to learn you had the chance to go to a Pink concert. That woman is a wonderful performer. We completely understood your enthusiasm. However, you also have to take care of your back, sweetie. Go easy on that. Health cannot be replaced with anything, dearest friend. Please keep it cool. We want to have you around for the longest time! As for the story, all the scenes you brought to life were fantastic. Tina’s confession to Shane about her “secret life” was really needed, as she shares a room with her. Bette’s reaction to Al’s comments was an absolute hoot. We laughed so hard when Bette cut the phone convo with her. Can’t wait for your next chappy. Get well soon, dearest friend. PPS Hugs & kisses on both your cheeks. – Lucero & Marsha (Proud Salsa Aunties to the ever loving JC and Eunichick and Tias Adoradas to Patpez)