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Thief of my heart – chapter 13
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‘Really now…hey are you hungry?’ Bette asked sweetly
Something snapped in Tina. She was on her way through the living room when she suddenly turned around at Bette’s words. Does she think she could save me? Typical rich girl…bored with her life and in need of a toy to play with…oh no, not with me Porter!
‘Do you want me to be your charity project or something?’ Tina snapped
‘What? What would make you think that? I’m just being nice’ Bette asked puzzled
‘Are you some kind of freak? I broke into your apartment last night and you offer me something to eat?’
‘I am not a freak…I…I just want to…get to know you!’ Bette rambled shyly
‘What? Why?’ Tina was totally confused
‘I just do!’ And she had really no explanation because she didn’t know herself what was going on.
‘Well you know what…why don’t you just ask Shane or anyone else of my so called friends. I am sure they give you some information. By the way…who gave you my address?’
‘I won’t tell you my source!’
‘Well then tell your source if I ever find out who he or she is…’
‘Why are you so pissed? I mean you broke into my apartment, stole my sculpture and insulted me. I should be the one who is pissed. But here I am, asking you for a date and you call me a freak. What is wrong with you?’ Bette got pissed herself. She tried to be nice and got rejected. That never happened to her before.
‘You just want me to be another notch on your bedpost!’
‘What?’
‘I know more about you than you think.’
‘And what do you think you know?’ Bette crossed her arms on her chest
‘You are the biggest player in Weho and everyone knows it. Apart from your normal encounters you also hook up with every female celebrity you meet.’
‘That is so not true!’ Bette got defensive
‘Caroline Miller?’ Tina arched a questioning brow
‘She is very nice and we are friends…but I never slept with her’
‘But I heard something else. Shane told me that you beat her on the chart.’
‘Well leave it to Alice to ruin everything:’ Bette mumbled
‘What was that?’
‘You shouldn’t believe everything people tell you’
‘Does that count for you too?’
‘Yes…I mean No…I mean…Tina would you let me explain?’
‘What is there to explain? You are the creator of the four F’s’
‘The four what? I don’t even know what this means!’ Bette was now beyond confused.
‘You find them, feel them, fuck them and forget them!’
‘No I don’t! I never did such a thing! Alice made this whole story up for fun!’
‘Sure…nice try but I don’t fall for that!’
Tina turned around and wanted to leave but Bette grabbed her wrist and spun her around
‘NO! Don’t go!’
Bette pulled on Tina’s arm and brought her close.
‘Let go of me’
‘No!’
She grabbed Tina’s waist to embrace her and brought her head next to Tina’s. She was able to smell Tina’s hair and perfume.
‘You smell like heaven’ she whispered.
Tina wasn’t able to pull back. Bette smelled wonderful too and the feeling of her breath near Tina’s ear made her week in the knees. She brought up her hands and put them around Bette’s neck. They stood there for a few minutes until Bette leaned back and looked at Tina’s hazel eyes.
‘You have the most beautiful eyes I have ever seen!’
‘Is that your way to charm a woman?’
‘Does it work?’
‘Maybe’ Tina smiled
‘Good’ Bette smiled back at her.
TBC
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”the doctor told me to rest for the next few days. I think I could use the time to write” – Great Idea!
If they are this feisty standing up, imagine how they will be horizontally!! PPS
Oh…I was soooo happy to see you had posted (I had thought about sending a PM to encourage more of this lovely story). Sorry to hear about the back but I do hope you take some time to write…we will certainly treasure each and every chapter! This chapter gives us a little more understanding of where Tina is coming from – she certainly seems to use her hostility as a shield to maintain a false sense of control (particularly when Bette’s present!). I’m so looooking forward to more!
thanks for updating…our little Tina can’t say no to Bette for long
Oh wow, now we’re making some progress! PPS I missed this story!
Oh Wow, the legend that is one Bette Porter strikes again and gets her woman. Tina may not be a notch on Bette’s bedpost but she sure in hell is one fine specimen of someone that Bette keeps around for quite a spell. Did not expect that to occur. Can hardly wait for the next chapter. PPS
Oh wow, i was wondering where this one went, glad you’re back jay.. hurry with the next one!!
that was over way to quick! pps. i am sorry your back hurts but glad you get to post more often. i know i know i am being selfish
What a feisty confrontation, they are like two lionesses checking each other out. I love their dialogue. Great chapter, can’t wait for more.
Hi, dear sweet Jay! *waving with enthusiasm* We are sorry to hear you hurt your back. Hope you heal nicely. Follow doc’s orders and yes, it will be wonderful if you can have other updates under your sleeve. ;) As for the story, we SO love your Alpha Tina. She’s really great! Ah, Bette can’t help being smitten by this incredible woman. Ah, Tina being feisty, due to Bette’s player background brought a wide smile to our faces. You are doing such a great job in describing the situations and emotions running thru both women. We were delighted with the last scene. As for your dislike on S6, we definitely suggest you to take the best scenes we got from all the Episodes of our fav B&T couple and delete the rest of the undesirable ones. We are certain that the magnificent Authors of this site will mend our broken hearts, sweetie. They will all express another point of view in the FF world and we will have some great stories doing justice to this Season. ;) Hugs and kisses on both your cheeks. – Lucero & Marsha (Proud Salsa Aunties to the ever loving JC and Eunichick and Tias Adoradas to Patpez)
My dear Friend thank you for the chapter update, I will be looking for another one soon I hope :) I am always here for you my friend. You mean the world to me.
I miss this story. And am I glad to see it again! I think you’ve been absent on the writer’s chair for as long as I have been. :) A very, very nice update! Thanks! And as for S6, welcome to the “we dislike S6” gang!
What a great chapter, jay! I think they are both in big trouble. pps
A new chapter – YEA! I love the witty feisty banter between these two! Sounds to me like Tina is jealous – I am so glad Bette stopped her at the door – but what’s next – please tell me somebody is going to make a more?!? PPS