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Thief of my heart – chapter 13
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Chapter 13
At Bette’s Apartment
Bette sat on the sofa with a book in her hand but she didn’t really read a word. She was waiting for Tina to show up. I hope she comes…
Downstairs
Tina parked her bike around the corner like the night before. She used the elevator, climbed up the stairs to the roof and walked over to the same roof light. Fortunatly it was still open.
Seems like someone is expecting me. She climbed down like the night before and looked around. Bette was sitting on the sofa with her back turned to Tina. She walked over as quiet as possible and put a hand on Bette’s shoulder.
‘What took you so long?’ Bette stood up and turned around.
‘How did you know it was me? I could have been a murder or…’
‘A thief? Unlikely that this would happen two nights in a row.’
Tina throws her backpack on the sofa
‘Guess you forgot something in my room’
‘And here I was thinking that you forgot this in my room’
‘What do you want?’ Tina asked coldly
‘I just wanted to bring you a gift’
‘So you break into my apartment?’
‘No that is what you did to me. I don’t even know how to break into an apartment. Maybe you could teach me!’ Bette smirked.
‘Then how did you come in?’
‘That is my secret. Do you always prefer a rope instead of a door?’
‘Depends on my mood’ Tina smiled seductively and walked around Bette
‘Are we talking about the same thing?’ Bette said in a low husky voice. She could imagine to have her way with Tina tied up AND against a door.
‘Not sure…’ Tina walked around Bette. She checked her out until she stood in front of her. She is gorgeous…oh get a grip…you broke into her apartment…but she is so hot. Tina fought an inner struggle and she really had to leave before her knees gave up on her. ‘Sorry but I have to go.’
‘Don’t you want to take this with you?’ Bette held up the backpack.
‘No…I like to earn it. To sell gifts is not my style!’ Tina tried to act cool
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”the doctor told me to rest for the next few days. I think I could use the time to write” – Great Idea!
If they are this feisty standing up, imagine how they will be horizontally!! PPS
Oh…I was soooo happy to see you had posted (I had thought about sending a PM to encourage more of this lovely story). Sorry to hear about the back but I do hope you take some time to write…we will certainly treasure each and every chapter! This chapter gives us a little more understanding of where Tina is coming from – she certainly seems to use her hostility as a shield to maintain a false sense of control (particularly when Bette’s present!). I’m so looooking forward to more!
thanks for updating…our little Tina can’t say no to Bette for long
Oh wow, now we’re making some progress! PPS I missed this story!
Oh Wow, the legend that is one Bette Porter strikes again and gets her woman. Tina may not be a notch on Bette’s bedpost but she sure in hell is one fine specimen of someone that Bette keeps around for quite a spell. Did not expect that to occur. Can hardly wait for the next chapter. PPS
Oh wow, i was wondering where this one went, glad you’re back jay.. hurry with the next one!!
that was over way to quick! pps. i am sorry your back hurts but glad you get to post more often. i know i know i am being selfish
What a feisty confrontation, they are like two lionesses checking each other out. I love their dialogue. Great chapter, can’t wait for more.
Hi, dear sweet Jay! *waving with enthusiasm* We are sorry to hear you hurt your back. Hope you heal nicely. Follow doc’s orders and yes, it will be wonderful if you can have other updates under your sleeve. ;) As for the story, we SO love your Alpha Tina. She’s really great! Ah, Bette can’t help being smitten by this incredible woman. Ah, Tina being feisty, due to Bette’s player background brought a wide smile to our faces. You are doing such a great job in describing the situations and emotions running thru both women. We were delighted with the last scene. As for your dislike on S6, we definitely suggest you to take the best scenes we got from all the Episodes of our fav B&T couple and delete the rest of the undesirable ones. We are certain that the magnificent Authors of this site will mend our broken hearts, sweetie. They will all express another point of view in the FF world and we will have some great stories doing justice to this Season. ;) Hugs and kisses on both your cheeks. – Lucero & Marsha (Proud Salsa Aunties to the ever loving JC and Eunichick and Tias Adoradas to Patpez)
My dear Friend thank you for the chapter update, I will be looking for another one soon I hope :) I am always here for you my friend. You mean the world to me.
I miss this story. And am I glad to see it again! I think you’ve been absent on the writer’s chair for as long as I have been. :) A very, very nice update! Thanks! And as for S6, welcome to the “we dislike S6” gang!
What a great chapter, jay! I think they are both in big trouble. pps
A new chapter – YEA! I love the witty feisty banter between these two! Sounds to me like Tina is jealous – I am so glad Bette stopped her at the door – but what’s next – please tell me somebody is going to make a more?!? PPS