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The Real Deal Ch16 – Finale
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“One for each time you came!” I grin at her.
“Did I really come so many times?” She asks with her eyes widen.
“I don’t know. Who is counting?” I hold my hands up.
“No wonder I feel sore down there!” She giggles.
“You do?” I pull her closer, feeling the need to for no reason at all.
“Don’t you?” She answers my question with a question.
“Actually, a little bit too.” I smile ever so shyly. This is embarrassing for me to admit.
“You are going to pay for this!” She points at her hickeys, pretending to be angry and kisses me feverishly. The next thing I know, she is biting and nipping my neck.
I tilt my head to let her have more access to my neck. I knew this was coming, and I am strangely enjoying this, letting her ‘brand’ me.
“Hey, how many do you want to give me?” I ask playfully.
“Until I am tired!” she laughs. “Don’t know how you manage to place so many on me!” She adds.
I look at the mirror, there are at least 8 on my neck! I roll my eyes.
“At least I look good with them.” I laugh.
“I am starving!” She declares.
“You want me again?” I widen my eyes.
“I want real food! Aren’t you hungry?” She asks.
“You scared me for a second. Still sore, you know…” I give her a painful look then continue, “Let’s heat up some of your mum’s food.” I suggest.
“Good idea.” We giggle.
I lace her hand with mine and walk downstairs together.
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Shane’s living room
We enter the living room and see Alice, Jenny and Helena sitting comfortably on our couch, watching a movie!
“Why are you guys here?” I ask shockingly.
“It’s movie night, don’t you remember?” Jenny asks.
“What day is today?” I ask.
“22 November.” Helena answers.
Carmen looks at me, whispering, “No! We have been fucking non stop for 3 days?”
We giggle for few moments.
“Guys, we are still here. We knocked, but you two were so busy upstairs. So we let ourselves in.” Alice says, grinning at us. Spare keys, I should never have given her that!
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Whoaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!A M A Z I N G ! ! ! ! !Thank you so much for this!!!!!! =)
Nice job! Great story! Took my mind off my life for two whole days. Who would have thought I’d find another good story on this page. Luved every single minute of it. Gotta go. I need to check ur other storrys. Oh and u know… I’d lke to see Shay come back or something.
Heart-warming. It’s got everything anyone could ever deam of for Sharmen. I just wish we’d see this on TV but first we gotta have Carmen back. Well done catseye! I’ll expect greater things from you.
You are the best!!!!! Thanks alot for this chapter it was the greatest ever. I hope you find a little time to do the sequele =) LOL. The HOT scenes were soooooo intense. Thanks again. Hope to hear from you soon.
Great Job! Thanks for this story. Please DO continue to write more, ASAP!
*applauds* nicely done, hot scenes too ! Thank you for this !
clearly and easily the best ive read in a long long time * claps* this whole story was amazeing and mezmerising at the same time the whole time. You were and are amazeing. I hate to see it end but wow what an ending i lvoed this post it was long but not long enough i might add, and it was perfect. thank you for the Real Deal.
Applause!! The best fan fiction I’ve ever read. I hope you’re going to write a sequel, cause there are not enough Sharmen-stories =( …
what else can i say? i applaud you! i worship you! haha! the love scenes are perfect and amazingly hot! the storyline is by far, the greatest i have ever read about sharmen. thanks a lot for making The Real Deal and i sure hope, despite your uber busy schedule, that you’ll still write more stories for us to savor. you have a hell of a lot of fans catseye! and i’m looking forward to more of your stories! thanks again!
catseye!! You Roock!!! Thank you so muuuch for this amazing reunion and finale! I soo loved the very well writen sex scenes lol =) they sure brought me some good memories about Shane and Carmen togheter on tv. Keep on the great job you’re doing! Sharmen forever!!
Wow you did an amazing job with this. Somehow I missed the last update but now that I’m all caught up all I can think is WOW! I’m so glad Shane gave Carmen the diary,there really was no other way to make sure Carmen knew how she felt. Three days of marathon sex is pretty much how I would expect the reunion of these two to go…*hint hint IC, take notes on this fic for ideas for season 5* You did a totally kick ass job on this fic, it was a pleasure to read. Thank you!
Wow you did an amazing job with this. Somehow I missed the last update but now that I’m all caught up all I can think is WOW! I’m so glad Shane gave Carmen the diary,there really was no other way to make sure Carmen knew how she felt. Three days of marathon sex is pretty much how I would expect the reunion of these two to go…*hint hint IC, take notes on this fic for ideas for season 5* You did a totally kick ass job on this fic, it was a pleasure to read. Thank you!
just want to say thank you. you are really wonderful writer and loyal sharmener. thanks again. waiting for your another gift.
Loved it this is a great story wish i could write like it. x
Loved it this is a great story wish i could write like it. x
ONE OF MT FAV STORYS!!!! LOVED IT