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The Real Deal Ch 10
Previously…
Shane: I pick up a pen and take out the diary that I bought earlier today. I still have no idea how I am going to win Carmen back. But I have a feeling that over the next six months, I have a journey of self discovery. From now to 20 November, I have 185 days to figure out what I want.
Ch 10
Day 7, 26 May
Dearest Carmen,
I had a chat with Jenny and Alice today. They asked me what happened between us at home last week. I told them that I wanted a second chance with you but you needed to be able to trust me again.
They helped me realised that I AM in love with you – with all my heart.
There is another thing that they made me realised, I need to be able to offer you more than before, otherwise, we are not moving forward in our relationship. I have some soul searching to do, I don’t have all the answers right now, but I hope that when the time comes, I will be able to provide you with some. And I hope they will be good enough for you.
Love
Shane
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Day 13, 1 June
Dearest Carmen
Have you seen the new Hugo Boss ad yet? It is strange having to shoot it with Cat, I would have avoided it if I knew. But I think we make a hot couple, don’t you think? We kinda look sexy and provocative. Maybe I should chase her instead – just a joke!
Seriously, how does it feel to see me and her together in bed?
Are you jealous? Of me or her?
I know I am jealous of her every day.
Good night, sweet dreams.
Love
Shane
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Shane’s house
Paige is standing at my doorway. Here we go again, to Hugo Boss new underwear launch party. Since I did the photo shoot, I have to finish the job properly now – meet the press. We got a baby sitter to look after the kids this time.
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(21 votes, average: 4.19 out of 5)
Loving the drama in this story! So sad about the tattoo though! Looking forward to reading more.
This fic is really good keep up the great writing and PPS!
ohhhh this is torture, shane adn carmen belong together soooo much that this waiting thing is killing me. i love your story and your writing great job capturing all the characters. loved it but please mroe happy sharmen sooooon one down , one mroe g/f to go….pps
Amazing =)I liked the thing with the tatto!Nice =)PPS!!!! ASAP….!!!! Please
I love it! I love it! I love it! Please update soon.
I love it! I love it! I love it! Please update soon.
Yeah matching tatoos are “a Kiss Of Death” my bf got her girlfriends name tatoed on her back and she has no clue what to do with it becuz they broke up but any ways…..I Loved it keep it going…good job!!!
This chapter was just…….freaking AWESOME !!=D Much better than the last one. You always make your story so suspensful and funny at the same time. It’s never boring.Keep posting =)
I love this story…keep it up. Just hurry up and post some more…please.LoL
Another great chapter girl. I supose that Carmen will read the Diary at some point. Well keep the nice job. This is getting better and better.