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The Power of Suggestion Chapter 2
"Dude!" She grunted…her way of telling him how good it felt. "Can you hear that…oh yeah dude!"
Henry could hear the smacking sound of Max’s strap on, and felt his own excitement increasing. Opening his eyes, he looked down at the woman on all fours in front of him, and for a moment felt a wave of…of…affection. What! That stopped him mid thrust, causing Max to whip her head around in frustration. "What the fuck dude!!!"
Shaking his head, he tried to get those feelings to leave. After all, this was about sex…pure, raw sex…nothing more. Reaching around the small woman, Henry enclosed his fingers around the rubber shaft that was hanging between his sex partner’s legs, and moving in time with his hips, moved up and down the shaft with his hand, like he would do to himself. "DUDE!!!" Max squealed with excitement, watching his hand move up and down her shaft, swearing she could feel it as much as she could feel him inside her. Once again she twisted her head to look at Henry. They both just grinned at each other, then started whooping and hollering, Henry lifting his other hand in the air and swinging it around like he was about to lasso something.
"Yee haww…ride em cowboy!!!" That’s right, they had their rhythm down now!! Max bucked her hips up, then slammed them into Henry, wanting to give him one hell of a ride.
"Oh fuck yeah…whoa there little filly," Henry moaned in ecstacy, not believing his good luck. "Settle down there now." Then he slapped Max’s buttocks, which caused another happy squeal, followed by what he swore sounded like a horses whinney, and then, "DUDE!!!"
And, there they were, in a hotel room in Canada, a straight man who just had his girlfriend leave him for her female ex lover; and a woman who wanted desperately to be a man, but was still enjoying her female body parts…fucking each other’s brains out, enjoying the other much more than they ever thought possible. In fact, they were enjoying themselves so much, that Max totally forgot about the deal that they had made…which was, Max would let Henry use her woman body, but then Henry had to let Max be "the man" and use his body like a woman’s.
The question is…will Tina be able to prove to Bette that she is no longer possessed and is ready to be with her forever? And, will Henry follow through on his end of the deal, and let Max put his "thing" in "there?"
Or, is the question, do we even care???? LOL
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I almost fell off my bed when Bette told Tina she needed her autonomy! Priceless! Yes, and then I spent the last bit of the story grossed out. Do what you want with Henry and Max; I hope you exorcise Tina soon. ‘Til then!
Yeehaw! Giddiyup! You know Seahurst, you SEEMED pretty quite when I met you in SF, but I guess we know better. I’m sorry I didn’t get to talk to you more.
Well Tina need to get her shit together and prove Bette that she will be with Bette forever and love her the end of time. About henry and max is funny and crazy and hope you will let those 2 be together like a couple and see how that work. OK post soon please, thanks!
LOL..you must continue this story for however long it can go for. I see potential!!! Bette’s autonomy…classic!
LMAO…..U ARE IT SEAHURST….THAT WAS AWESOME……ITS DEFINATELY PRICELESS!!!!!!!!!!
DUDE that was great, can’t wait for the next one
ha well that was a alot of fun!! my jaw fell onthe floor while bette was talkin to tina bout autonomy!! yes yes please relieve tina of this crazy demons so she can go back to better…i mean bette
lol tina’s words came back to bite her in the ass. Yea tina hurry up and get your asss home!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You’ve got to continue this!!
Ah, Seahurst, still waters run deep. Your writing is fucking amazing. Loved this alpha Bette…kicking Tina to the curb until she gets her shit together. Autonomy rules! Max and Henry….some funny shit. They deserve each other. Uno mas, por favor.
Yeah, continue. Max & Henry (LoL). Good Job.
Bette rules, well done girl. Seahurst you’re one hell of a writer, I love you.
bette and autonomy was so funny…this is such a crazy story LOL…i need another chapter because i want to see a happy ending for B&T and even for H&M LOL
Yuck-o!…Maybe Max will relocate, and take Henry with him…All power to Tall in the Saddle Bette Porter! Pullin’ back the reins – Yee-hah! Ride-em, Cowgirl!!!!
Alpha Bette is so damn sexy and the just about fell off my chair when she said that she’s maintaining her autonomy!!! So, Henry sure isn’t what Tina thought he was and good riddance. Time for her to “get her sh*t together, and then go home where and with whom she belonge…with Bette Porter.” The part with Max and Henry was actually hilarious in a weird sort of way. What a sense of humor you have, Sea.
I meant I almost fell of my chair when Bette mentioned keeping her autonomy. I think I was still laughing too hard to be able to type correctly. ;-)
I am so glad that you continued with this story and yes continue on until the end. Henry and Max so deserve each other-LMAO!! Your sense of humor is fantastic. Glad to see Alpha Bette back even stronger.
Yea Alpha Bette!
So Porter want Her Autonomy,What goes around come back to slap you in the face. Let a truck run over Henry and Max who cares. Let Tina comes to her senses. When Bette told Tina that she could take her away from any man. I believe that thanks
Bette maintaining “her” autonomy couldnt get any funnier than how you wrote it Sea…WTG!! Henry & Max…ewwwwwwww!
Wow…Bette gave Tina quite a lesson there. Good stuff Seahurst…let’s see what Tina’s next move is…after she recovers from the shock! Glad to see your posts again.
sea – I love your writing and I know you are just punishing Tina for having gone to the dark side in season three and yet dare I say it – I really hate it when people do this whole “I claimed you by making you come and come and come and now you are mine so…” do real people treat each other that way??
That is totally twisted-Ilove it. Couple of more chapters would be cool.
LMAO!!!!!!! The Max/Henry thing reminded me of a cheapass homemade porno a college kid would do. Fuckin’ hilarious! Alright Tina needs to get her shit together and go home to her woman and have wild sex all over again.
Nice play Bette Porter! Wow, did she catch Tina off guard or what??? That is awesome, Bette owns Tina. She fucked her brains out and called it a day. I think this is a great place to end this series, but you should right anothe series about Tina trying ti straighten her life out and get Bette back all the while Bette is dating other people and really enjoying her AUTONOMY………LOL
WOW!!!!! i was totally not expecting that yeah please continue with this story. It showed the much overdue alpha bette back
yeah you did it, i always said Max with Henry..they deserve each other sssoooooo much; and way to go Alphabette..Tina loves that womyn, she’ll get her act 2gether for the return home..if only IC had your creativity and writing skills…
lol…you are crazy…thanks for the day pass into the mind of the great Sea
What fun! “Tonight was … nice.” !!! Payback for Tina’s line in Ep9 S2? I hope Henry & Max go far away, but would so like another chapter with a Tibette reconnection. Please!
Hey Sea – I love alpha Bette even when she is wrong…but this time she was very right…and HOT! Yes, I want to know what happens with BnT. As far as Max and Henry, I only care to know if Tina walks in on them :)
Love the B/T dynamic in this story. Not so crazy about the Henry/Max thing, but I skim that part! It would be great to have this as season 4 opener. Thanks for writing. More, please?
SWEET!!!!! HILARIOUS!!!! Sea you are hoot, love ya girl! Keep up the great work. Miss you also!! T
OMG! … LMAO :)) Sea, u’ve got to continue!
Hahahaha poor Tina, that had to be a lil embarrass even though she was highly turned on…way to go Bette