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The Power of Suggestion Chapter 2
"Come on Tina…ride em like a cowgirl!"
"I’m…ttrryinggg…bbbaby," Tina mumbled, her body jerking up and down, even though her lower extremities were screaming at her to stop, her whole body at a breaking point from pure exhaustion. Straddling Bette’s lap, her knees ached from constant pressure as she used them like a door hinge…up and down…up and down…her thigh muscles were starting to spasm in protest, not able to continually push her weight up much longer. But, she couldn’t stop…not now. It felt to glorious everywhere else, and those exquisite feelings made it all worthwhile…made it easier to ignore to pain of discomfort roaring through the rest of her body.
After leaving a stunned audience in the chapel, Tina practically carried Bette up to her room, desperate to make up for her past sins…desperate to feel the tongue she had missed for so long, lick her from head to toe, and every place in between. Now, five hours later, Tina was at the point of almost passing out…her body having been brought to one orgasm after another. The brunette had been insatiable, seemingly unsatisfied no matter how many times Tina screamed out her name. In fact Tina had no idea how she was even still moving. She had never see Bette like this…relentless in her lovemaking…determined and focused in her goal, which seemed to be to draw as many orgasms out of Tina, using as many different positions as possible.
"I don’t know if I can do it…" Tina’s voice was almost a whisper, as her hips crashed down on the fingers inside of her, slowly raising up again, only to crash down again. She was so tired, her head hung down to the side of Bette’s, her hair matted and wet with sweat..her arms listlessly dangling down Bette’s back.
"Yes you can……watch this." Bette slammed her thumb down hard and fast against Tina’s clit.
Tina screamed her surprise, and immediately felt her body explode. "Oh God yyyee…" The rest of the word was cut off as Tina’s throat closed, and her jaw clamped shut…her head thrown back as her whole body undulated in full orgasm.
Bette felt Tina collapse against her, all of her weight falling onto Bette. She struggled to not fall backwards, smiling with satisfaction as once again she brought Tina over the edge. How many times had she accomplished that already tonight? She had lost count there were so many…and there was still several hours of darkness left. Plenty of time to completely and totally exhaust the blonde, who at that moment was struggling just to catch her breath.
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I almost fell off my bed when Bette told Tina she needed her autonomy! Priceless! Yes, and then I spent the last bit of the story grossed out. Do what you want with Henry and Max; I hope you exorcise Tina soon. ‘Til then!
Yeehaw! Giddiyup! You know Seahurst, you SEEMED pretty quite when I met you in SF, but I guess we know better. I’m sorry I didn’t get to talk to you more.
Well Tina need to get her shit together and prove Bette that she will be with Bette forever and love her the end of time. About henry and max is funny and crazy and hope you will let those 2 be together like a couple and see how that work. OK post soon please, thanks!
LOL..you must continue this story for however long it can go for. I see potential!!! Bette’s autonomy…classic!
LMAO…..U ARE IT SEAHURST….THAT WAS AWESOME……ITS DEFINATELY PRICELESS!!!!!!!!!!
DUDE that was great, can’t wait for the next one
ha well that was a alot of fun!! my jaw fell onthe floor while bette was talkin to tina bout autonomy!! yes yes please relieve tina of this crazy demons so she can go back to better…i mean bette
lol tina’s words came back to bite her in the ass. Yea tina hurry up and get your asss home!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You’ve got to continue this!!
Ah, Seahurst, still waters run deep. Your writing is fucking amazing. Loved this alpha Bette…kicking Tina to the curb until she gets her shit together. Autonomy rules! Max and Henry….some funny shit. They deserve each other. Uno mas, por favor.
Yeah, continue. Max & Henry (LoL). Good Job.
Bette rules, well done girl. Seahurst you’re one hell of a writer, I love you.
bette and autonomy was so funny…this is such a crazy story LOL…i need another chapter because i want to see a happy ending for B&T and even for H&M LOL
Yuck-o!…Maybe Max will relocate, and take Henry with him…All power to Tall in the Saddle Bette Porter! Pullin’ back the reins – Yee-hah! Ride-em, Cowgirl!!!!
Alpha Bette is so damn sexy and the just about fell off my chair when she said that she’s maintaining her autonomy!!! So, Henry sure isn’t what Tina thought he was and good riddance. Time for her to “get her sh*t together, and then go home where and with whom she belonge…with Bette Porter.” The part with Max and Henry was actually hilarious in a weird sort of way. What a sense of humor you have, Sea.
I meant I almost fell of my chair when Bette mentioned keeping her autonomy. I think I was still laughing too hard to be able to type correctly. ;-)
I am so glad that you continued with this story and yes continue on until the end. Henry and Max so deserve each other-LMAO!! Your sense of humor is fantastic. Glad to see Alpha Bette back even stronger.
Yea Alpha Bette!
So Porter want Her Autonomy,What goes around come back to slap you in the face. Let a truck run over Henry and Max who cares. Let Tina comes to her senses. When Bette told Tina that she could take her away from any man. I believe that thanks
Bette maintaining “her” autonomy couldnt get any funnier than how you wrote it Sea…WTG!! Henry & Max…ewwwwwwww!
Wow…Bette gave Tina quite a lesson there. Good stuff Seahurst…let’s see what Tina’s next move is…after she recovers from the shock! Glad to see your posts again.
sea – I love your writing and I know you are just punishing Tina for having gone to the dark side in season three and yet dare I say it – I really hate it when people do this whole “I claimed you by making you come and come and come and now you are mine so…” do real people treat each other that way??
That is totally twisted-Ilove it. Couple of more chapters would be cool.
LMAO!!!!!!! The Max/Henry thing reminded me of a cheapass homemade porno a college kid would do. Fuckin’ hilarious! Alright Tina needs to get her shit together and go home to her woman and have wild sex all over again.
Nice play Bette Porter! Wow, did she catch Tina off guard or what??? That is awesome, Bette owns Tina. She fucked her brains out and called it a day. I think this is a great place to end this series, but you should right anothe series about Tina trying ti straighten her life out and get Bette back all the while Bette is dating other people and really enjoying her AUTONOMY………LOL
WOW!!!!! i was totally not expecting that yeah please continue with this story. It showed the much overdue alpha bette back
yeah you did it, i always said Max with Henry..they deserve each other sssoooooo much; and way to go Alphabette..Tina loves that womyn, she’ll get her act 2gether for the return home..if only IC had your creativity and writing skills…
lol…you are crazy…thanks for the day pass into the mind of the great Sea
What fun! “Tonight was … nice.” !!! Payback for Tina’s line in Ep9 S2? I hope Henry & Max go far away, but would so like another chapter with a Tibette reconnection. Please!
Hey Sea – I love alpha Bette even when she is wrong…but this time she was very right…and HOT! Yes, I want to know what happens with BnT. As far as Max and Henry, I only care to know if Tina walks in on them :)
Love the B/T dynamic in this story. Not so crazy about the Henry/Max thing, but I skim that part! It would be great to have this as season 4 opener. Thanks for writing. More, please?
SWEET!!!!! HILARIOUS!!!! Sea you are hoot, love ya girl! Keep up the great work. Miss you also!! T
OMG! … LMAO :)) Sea, u’ve got to continue!
Hahahaha poor Tina, that had to be a lil embarrass even though she was highly turned on…way to go Bette