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The Long and Winding Road 4+5
The Long and Winding Road Chapter Four+Five
Previously :
For Bette walking into the Planet felt surreal. She was tired and the journey in the car from the Church had been an emotional one for her. Alice had launched into one of her monologues about what everyone was doing and stories about people that Bette barely knew – she knew it was to disguise how Al was feeling about Dana but Bette really wished for some silence.
She had got used to living a tranquil life in London and she was as happy as she could ever been without coming home every night to a home that was populated by Tina.
Bette got a camomile tea and stood around for a while with Shane and Alice chatting about Dana but crowds made her uneasy these days.
“I’m going for a sit down out the back “
“Do you want any company ? ” Alice asked – she had seen the weariness in her old friend and was concerned that it was as much seeing Tina again as it was Dana’s funeral.
Only after she had lost Dana had Alice got some idea of the magnitude of the grief that Bette and Tina experienced when their marriage ended.
Bette gave her a smile ” No thanks Al – I just want to be on my own for a while”
The others nodded and watched as Bette slowly moved away from the chatter and noise to the rear of the building.
Shane looked at Alice who shrugged.
“How did they get like that ? That they could barely look at each other. Bette and Tina are meant to be together “
“I don’t know Al — we barely see Tina these days and not having Bette around is just sad. “
“I hated her when I found out – I kept ringing to yell at her . I had no idea she would just leave the way she did “
“She felt bad enough about what happened without having us yelling at her. She was so lost after Tina’s miscarriage – it’s the only explanation that I have “
“Do you think that there is any hope for them ?”
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(54 votes, average: 4.50 out of 5)
I just love your stories!
Take a hint, Henry.
WOW!!! Henry seeing Tina with Bette. This is going to get bad. Please Post More Soon Thank you Ally I love yor stories
Great update mate!! Lovin it!
Incredible! I hope you update soon because this is just so right!!!!!!
hmmmmmmmm… now i hope tina leans in and they share a passionate kiss… and she gets up and tells henry to hit the road… tina still has the house… love this story… love both of them…
how in the hell do you have 2 such fabulous stories? i’m in awe! this one is just tugging at the old heart strings… this is a really beautiful chapter. thank you!
ally both the stories are so good pls post soon i love it th way henry sees them still in love wish the nigthmare was over and they did tht for real in season four:) i know i am dreaming but hey atlest they are not as bad as the nightmare i call season three
Your story makes me happy and so sad at the same time. While reading the tears were rolling down my cheeks. It is so endearing to read such a beautiful story. There is still hope for both women and i am glad that their being honest to each other. This should become THEIR baby! Please write more!!!
So sweet. I wonder if Bette was going to name her son after Tina or if that would’ve been too painful?
beautiful as always ally
see ya, would’t want to be ya henry!!!!!
Ally I’m just caught up It’s wonderful. I love this new angle. I’ve got to give Tina credit for not holding back but talking to Bette
That was awesome!!! You know? You make me cry everytime I read any of your chapters(L wing and this story)Post soon!!
Good stuff! and now tins needs to tell henry to bugger off (and that was me being nice) We love you All, post soon!
Beautiful, poignant (did I spell that really wrong?), wonderful.
I hope Henry wouldn’t do something to hurt Bette and her baby…
bye bye Henry…..thanks for the update. give us more very soon, please
Henry is stupid but not crazy,he would never touch Bette to harm her. He would never make it to the door. He might hurt Tina. This was such a beautiful story,we need more of them. from you. Sad but oh so real life. thanks
I am with AmandaMG, Tina needs to lean in a gently kiss Bette. With that kiss becoming longer and deeper showing not only all around them that they are in love, but to let Henry know that it is over between him and Tina. No words need to be spoken just actions. Yippee, this is getting good.
hey alley I love the L wing, but it looks like I picked a good chapter to catch up with this story. i like your style.
Wonderfull chapter, you’re the best Ally.
Absolutely fantastic. Loved this, so glad they didn’t start screaming at each other. Henry, say tah,tah
Well, well, what is ole Henry going to do now? Hopefully , go away and get his back scrubbed.
Oh hell yeah! Great to see them starting to reconnect. In my head Henry’s face is priceless! Wonderful as always, can’t wait for more of both your stories. Thanks for posting again.
be a man henry and leave them alone and leave tina while you’re still standing and before bette kick your ass…wonderful
Just as he was about to go and get a drink he glanced sideways into the seemingly empty part of the building.To see his partner staring lovingly into the eyes of her former wife ………. WoooooooooooHooooooooooo!!! I love anything that deflates his ego!!!!!!!!!!!!
This story is just great. The connection between Bette and Tina is so solid and all-enduring that neither time, distance nor Henry can break it. It might bend and stretch…but never break. Thanks for the update. Please post the next chapter really soon.
Uugh Thats got me all emotional. bloody good stuff.
Damn so good and awesome. Now they are talking about their life and now starting their connection again and let them talk thing out and get back together again. Ok henryass now you see Tina is with Bette now so get your ugly fucking ass out of here back to where you belong and never bother Tina and Bette and the gang again. Ok post soon please, thanks!
The interaction between B&T just tugs at the heart string. “No one can ever replace you Tina – no one ever could “. “Oh Bette — no one will ever replace you either ” Beautiful.
this last chapter was stunning- I’d pay for more than showtime to see JB and LH act out this scene that you have written. You are truly amazing and made my day.
YAAAY! B&T, B&T rah rah rah!!!! ok Henry, time to take a hike. . .no really. Loving this stpry as I do all of your others, please post again soon!
Spectacular! Your writing is wonderful – Thank you so much!
This is a beautiful chapter my friend. True love never dies even through time and distance.
Totally hooked on this story!! Thanks!
Ally, AGain thank you for reposting chapter 4. To have it and the following one was a joy to behold and indugle in. I love the gentleness of this story. The path back to where you belong is often fraught with danger and the inteferences of others even if they are often well-intentioned. It looks like Bette and Tina are ready to reaquaint themselves with each other but Henry may have a thing to say ans do about it but I know that Alice, Kit and Shane will be there to nourish and nuture the budding romance and reunion of two lost souls. Wonderful, wonderful writing. Thank you for all of your marvelous melodrama. Your Loyal Fan.
Glorious! I could feel the love!! Cheers
EXCELLENT and so beautifully done. Now it is time for Alice and her compadraes to spring into action–Mission (and you WILL accept it) to get B&T together in a weeks time by having them spend the maxium amount of time together. I am soooo glad that they both risked it all and really opened up to each other. Alice talk to Tina was PRICELESS. Henry it is all over with the exception of doing the dirty dishes, have some pride about yourself and accept it. Look for someone else to be your “Baby’s mama” LOL.
Exquisite writing, ally. Let Henry get the hint…
You have that magic way with words Ally, I’m sitting here with tears pricking my eyes and a knot in my stomage. You did it again, Master of the Universe.
lovely! B&T have a lot love for each other that they can’t hide and i think Henry will be so mad to see a lot of love in they!
Ally..Henry better not do anything to Bette or her baby. Great story.
*raises hand in the air* Me too … I’m hooked.
Like the Flashdance – hint :P Real cool story, I’m gonna read the rest now.