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Rebuilding
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"Sure, that would be wonderful." Bette reached for Tina’s hand as they walked to the apartment…
Present….
Bette finished her swim, feeling relaxed as the stress of the day was washed away. She looked up and saw a familiar form sitting in the shadows. "Hey, when did you get here? Why didn’t you call?"
"Not long ago, I tried to call, but you cell went directly to voicemail, and you didn’t answer the house phone."
A nervous smile crept across Bette’s face. She couldn’t believe how her evening was ending. "I jumped in the pool as soon as I got home. I needed to work off some stress. Where’s Angie?"
"She fell asleep on the ride over, and was just passed out, so I laid her down in her room. I hope that’s okay. About an hour after you left, we lost power again, and it was just so hot, and the power didn’t come back on. Angie kept talking about going in the pool, and she wanted to see her Mama B. So, I decided to take you up on your offer to let us use the pool. I think Angie had just had such a long day, and she fell asleep almost as soon I pulled out of the parking lot."
"I’m glad you came over. Why didn’t you get in the pool after you got Angie settled?"
"I could tell that you were working out some stress, and I didn’t want to interrupt."
Bette climbed out of the pool, as the water ran off her lithe form. It was everything that Tina could do to go take Bette in her arms, and drag her to the bedroom and take off that black bikini that left very little to the imagination. Bette smiled as she saw the lust flash across Tina’s eyes. She looked at Tina’s body stretched out on the lounger, and felt that similar burn. She walked over and sat next to Tina on the lounger.
"I have something to tell you. I did something, and I am not sure how you are going to feel about it. I went to Jodi’s studio after I left your apartment. I couldn’t wait. I had to tell her that it was over. It wasn’t fair to her, and it wasn’t fair to you to keep things as they were until after the ride."
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I love this. If only it had really happened this way!
Hey, don’t stop there…this was great and has lots of potential for more chapters. Please consider continuing the story.
Hey, don’t stop there, this was great and has lots of potential for more chapters. Please consider continuing the story!
Loved it. Would like to see you continue. PPS.
This was SO much better then the real show. Bette was SO wishy washy it totally killed me on the show. IC just wanted Matlin to have a HUGE break-up scene that lasted about six episodes to submit for awards but it screwed the storyline over to get there. This was more like the B/T I fell in love with here..
Hope you decide to continue with this, I loved it:) PPS
This Bette had more gumption and cujones than the Bette from the show. More please.
Hope you will continue this This is one of the If only. thanks
I really liked this story. That was perfect, Bette biting the bullet and telling Jodi right away, how it should have been.
Very well done! I would love to see them “rebuilding” their relationship!
cool story, hoope their is another chapter coming soon.
I love your version much better. Less drama then ic the drama queen threw at us, and of course much better in the Tibette side of the ledger.
Great post and would love to see you continue.
Great start, please continue. This chapter is an “if only” sort of thing. Wish it had gone that way on the show.
that was sweet and Bette got decisive for a change!!!
I have to agree with the comments posted so far – I would like to see a continuation of your story. This is the way it should have played out on the show. “I love you but I don’t want to tell Jodi yet” just didn’t fly with me. Thanks for posting!
I agree that Bette should have told Jodi sooner but then we wouldn’t have enough drama on the bike ride!!! LOL!
this was well done now please do justice to ep.510…luv ur writting
very nice keep going… this is how it should have been! :)
i loved the quick break-up…please continue
Now why didn’t it happen that way. At least Bette would have told Jodi instead of her finding out sitting around a campfire with everyone there. I think a bit more is needed. You know their night together, the morning with Angie.
This was great for your first post, and I hope to see you continue this story. I’d like to see where you take B&T now that Jodi is out of the picture. Please consider continuing on with this soon!
I love that Bette made a clean break after her and Tina talked. And Tina arriving at Bette’s house to give her the family night she had wanted was the perfect ending.