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Never Been Kissed – A Tibette Story – MyStyle ;) ~~ Chapter 11 ~~
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*That’s it….keep going* Tina told herself.
*God she’s killing me here* Bette sighed.
‘Before I tell you, I need to know that you can keep it to yourself. Things could get…well, things will go downhill pretty fast for me if it gets out.’
Bette could see the worry in Tina’s eyes. She needed reassurance. Turning her body towards Tina, she propped herself up on her elbow.
‘Is this what you wanted to tell me after the game the other week…?’ Bette asked.
Tina nodded.
‘I’m so sorry about Alice. She has a habit of being in the wrong place. I’m glad she didn’t scare you off from telling me…’
‘Oh, no….it’s nothing to do with Alice. Well, not mostly. I would have told you then…I just…I just felt so nervous…’
Bette wanted to reach out and console Tina. She refrained.
*You can’t do this Bette. You’ve over stepped the mark once too many tonight.*
‘Please Tina…tell me. I swear to you it will go no further….’
Tina swallowed. She closed her eye’s trying to steady her heart beat.
*Ok….come on….she wont tell anyone. That’s great. But please god….don’t let her hate me…*
The silence was killing Bette. Her heart was beating almost as fast as Tina’s. She was about to say something when Tina eventually spoke.
‘Bette….I’m not exactly who you think I am…’
Bette raised an eyebrow. ‘Huh?’ was all she could say.
‘I’m…I’m not 17…’
This was getting just a little bit too confusing to Bette. Realising this, Tina sat up, looking to the bottom of the bed she took a deep breath before continuing.
‘Bette, I’m 24. I’m an undercover reporter for the Daily Chance newspaper…’
The silence that filled the air after that was deafening. Tina couldn’t bring herself to turn and look at Bette.
Since hearing the words ‘I’m 24 and a undercover reporter’, Bette’s mind had gone into over drive.
*This isn’t true. She can’t be. I knew she looked and acted older for her age. She’s undercover. A reporter. What’s she reporting about. Is it….is it me?*
Half a minute later Bette sat up. Tina turned to look at her.
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Absolutely love this story. PPS
When I saw your post, I had to read and put aside a major deadline I’m working on, but well worth it! Finally, Tina came clean. Too bad their first time had to be so quiet, but I’m sure when they get home, you have something more in store for us. Thankfully. Great job.
if only ilene and the rest of writters could come up story like this………Thank you very very much.I love it.
i was waiting sooooo long for this… thank you :)
well i have been reading all weekend at work… when i had some time that is… i love this… i love the different story line… i have to say you had in a few chapters ago… i thought tina was in the shower with bette… anyway.. i hope she had the camera off while they were in bed… PPS
Woohoo, that was awesome and hot, love it!
aaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww they r so sweet 2gether….thanks for all the pages…such a cute story…pps
I love this! Awesome job–I’m glad Tina finally told Bette. I can’t wait for more!
That was just amazing, they are so sweet together. PPS.
I think Rau said it best when she said “aaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwww”:-)PPS
you made my friday! :D Yea, agree to the ‘awwwww’… love this and definitely enjoy this ;)
Dawwwwwwwwwwww yeahhhhhhhhhhhh! So much for “dry” humping. hehe I kept thinking somehow Tina’s camera would get turned on and I was like, “NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!” or that the sofa bed would start squeaking real bad. LOL! Well, I am definitely behind in my work as I just had to read this ASAP. I HOPE YOU’RE HAPPY! XD
now that is what i call a great story :) pps
doing a happy dance now, i was so afraid this would all turn out to be a dream, so happy tina didn’t set bette up for a story, luv it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nice! This story is going at a very good pace. This is so important for a story.Post Soon!
I think I say this every week, but I ADORE your story and I get very excited whenever Friday rolls around :) I realise your posts are a lot longer than most authors.. but it’s still not enough! I get lost in your story, I love it :) I’m so disappointed when I finish reading it. After this chapter, you’ve got me wondering what exactly happens to separate them.. Hmm.. I distinctly remember the beginning.. Tina’s stood waiting for Bette. *ponders* I know I beg you every week to post earlier eithout any luck, but I can’t help trying to here goes.. PLEEEASE?!
as shane would say, “so fucking cute!” this is a great post. pps
AAAAAWWWWESOME!!! This post has been well worth the wait. At first, I was like OH, NO don’t tell me that this a dream. Just Beautiful, I tell ya. Thanks for not splitting it into 2.
that waz a great update!! thanx so much!!
Did Tina remember to keep the necklace off??? I’m thinking not and there is gonna be hell to pay!
I am so glad Tina finally came clean with Bette. Max should be ashamed of himself trying to use guilt to make Tina do a story about Bette and her. pps
Wow, it seems even a 12 page-update is still way too short here !! How can it not be enough ? How the ” L ” did you manage to make us want more ?! LOL ! Yet, oddly enough, I kinda wish Bette had not taken things so well. It almost seems too easy after all. Or maybe there’s just something very wrong with me. Someone call drama police ! And get IC on the phone right now, we need more drama ! LMAO !!… Sorry, sorry, I’m just cracking myself up. Anyway, this was an excellent chapter – as usual, I might add. Actually, this is my first comment on your story, Kellog’s, because I only started reading “Never been kissed” a few days ago ( and it actually barely took me a couple of days to catch up with all the chapters, which I guess speaks volumes about how I love this fic ) when someone from the boards pointed out your story to me and I must confess I’m completely hooked. I just love the humour, the witty style, the refreshing feeling,… This story is so veeeery endearing. I’m loving the ride ! Just pure reading pleasure…
Ah….sweet bliss!! I’m glad Tina finally came clean, I was going nuts. PPS!!
Sooooooooooooooooo cuteee, together! love your story!
Amazing!! They finally let the passion come out. It took a lot of courage for Tina to tell Bette the truth but also for Bette to let Tina in knowing that Tina had been holding back. Their first night together was very special even though they had clothes on they still spend that first night together. The only concern that I have is when everybody else finds out the basketball team could lose every game because of Tina’s age. For a story line Tina could consider how people treat others when they are different. Something along those lines.
Ohhhhhh yeah! You are awesome Kelloggs! This was done just perfectly. So glad that Tina told Bette the truth and glad that Bette understood. It’s a good thing Tina told Bette b4 she quit her job! Wow! Can’t wait til your next post!
That was just too sweet. I’m so happy they finally admitted how they feel about each other, and I am overjoyed that Tina did the right thing by telling Bette the truth. Maybe Jade and Kate will let them have the room to themselves or a few hours so they can really let loose. I was wondering about the camera, if I was Tina I’d tell my boss to go “F” off and I wouldn’t wear the camera.Could we have the next update soon please.