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Never Been Kissed – A Tibette Story – MyStyle ;) ~~ Chapter 11 ~~
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With that she turned and sauntered into the bedroom, closely followed by Kate.
‘Umm, oops?’ Tina grinned. ‘I really didn’t mean for you to do all the work…’ she said to Bette, walking closer to the bed.
‘Don’t worry. Was a doddle.’ she replied, crossing her legs on the bed.
‘I’m just going to grab a quick shower..’
‘Ah, Ok. I’ll pop in after you.’ Bette told her.
‘Okie dokie, I’ll be a quick as I can.’
*You’re welcome to join me Ms Porter*
Grabbing her bag, Tina headed off to the bathroom, inwardly smiling at her mischievous thoughts.
When the bathroom door shut, Bette flopped back down on the bed. Thoughts clouded her mind of what it was Tina wanted to talk about. What ever it was she had to be firm with her. Looking back, she couldn’t believe she’d admitted her feelings…to a 17 year old! She couldn’t let anything happen. Heck she was breaking the law just thinking about Tina….specially in the way she had been.
*It has to be right. The way I feel…. I’ve never felt like this. Damn her age. Damn my age. Damn the school to hell!*
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Fifteen minutes later, Tina stood looking at herself in the mirror. She wore some loose pyjama bottoms and a tight strap top.
*Ok, almost time. You can do this.*
Gathering her stuff, she opened the bathroom door. Walking into the living area, she watched as Bette lay on the bed, eye’s closed. Coming closer to her, she knelt by the side of the bed. Bette’s face was so peaceful. Tina couldn’t resist bringing her hand up to caress Bette’s cheek. Running it lightly down her face, she let her thumb stroke over her lips. Unconsciencly, Bette’s head leaned towards the feel of Tina’s touch. Slowly she opened her eyes.
‘Hey beautiful’ Tina whispered.
Realising she’d nodded off, Bette jumped slightly and sat herself up, causing Tina’s hand to fall from her face.
‘Ugh, I must have dozed off..’ she said.
‘Yea…’ Tina replied, attempting to hide the disappointment of Bette almost throwing her hand away. ‘It was my fault, I took to long…’
‘That’s fine. I’m just going to freshen myself up now. Get out of these damp clothes. I’ll be five minutes.’ She said.
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Absolutely love this story. PPS
When I saw your post, I had to read and put aside a major deadline I’m working on, but well worth it! Finally, Tina came clean. Too bad their first time had to be so quiet, but I’m sure when they get home, you have something more in store for us. Thankfully. Great job.
if only ilene and the rest of writters could come up story like this………Thank you very very much.I love it.
i was waiting sooooo long for this… thank you :)
well i have been reading all weekend at work… when i had some time that is… i love this… i love the different story line… i have to say you had in a few chapters ago… i thought tina was in the shower with bette… anyway.. i hope she had the camera off while they were in bed… PPS
Woohoo, that was awesome and hot, love it!
aaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww they r so sweet 2gether….thanks for all the pages…such a cute story…pps
I love this! Awesome job–I’m glad Tina finally told Bette. I can’t wait for more!
That was just amazing, they are so sweet together. PPS.
I think Rau said it best when she said “aaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwww”:-)PPS
you made my friday! :D Yea, agree to the ‘awwwww’… love this and definitely enjoy this ;)
Dawwwwwwwwwwww yeahhhhhhhhhhhh! So much for “dry” humping. hehe I kept thinking somehow Tina’s camera would get turned on and I was like, “NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!” or that the sofa bed would start squeaking real bad. LOL! Well, I am definitely behind in my work as I just had to read this ASAP. I HOPE YOU’RE HAPPY! XD
now that is what i call a great story :) pps
doing a happy dance now, i was so afraid this would all turn out to be a dream, so happy tina didn’t set bette up for a story, luv it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nice! This story is going at a very good pace. This is so important for a story.Post Soon!
I think I say this every week, but I ADORE your story and I get very excited whenever Friday rolls around :) I realise your posts are a lot longer than most authors.. but it’s still not enough! I get lost in your story, I love it :) I’m so disappointed when I finish reading it. After this chapter, you’ve got me wondering what exactly happens to separate them.. Hmm.. I distinctly remember the beginning.. Tina’s stood waiting for Bette. *ponders* I know I beg you every week to post earlier eithout any luck, but I can’t help trying to here goes.. PLEEEASE?!
as shane would say, “so fucking cute!” this is a great post. pps
AAAAAWWWWESOME!!! This post has been well worth the wait. At first, I was like OH, NO don’t tell me that this a dream. Just Beautiful, I tell ya. Thanks for not splitting it into 2.
that waz a great update!! thanx so much!!
Did Tina remember to keep the necklace off??? I’m thinking not and there is gonna be hell to pay!
I am so glad Tina finally came clean with Bette. Max should be ashamed of himself trying to use guilt to make Tina do a story about Bette and her. pps
Wow, it seems even a 12 page-update is still way too short here !! How can it not be enough ? How the ” L ” did you manage to make us want more ?! LOL ! Yet, oddly enough, I kinda wish Bette had not taken things so well. It almost seems too easy after all. Or maybe there’s just something very wrong with me. Someone call drama police ! And get IC on the phone right now, we need more drama ! LMAO !!… Sorry, sorry, I’m just cracking myself up. Anyway, this was an excellent chapter – as usual, I might add. Actually, this is my first comment on your story, Kellog’s, because I only started reading “Never been kissed” a few days ago ( and it actually barely took me a couple of days to catch up with all the chapters, which I guess speaks volumes about how I love this fic ) when someone from the boards pointed out your story to me and I must confess I’m completely hooked. I just love the humour, the witty style, the refreshing feeling,… This story is so veeeery endearing. I’m loving the ride ! Just pure reading pleasure…
Ah….sweet bliss!! I’m glad Tina finally came clean, I was going nuts. PPS!!
Sooooooooooooooooo cuteee, together! love your story!
Amazing!! They finally let the passion come out. It took a lot of courage for Tina to tell Bette the truth but also for Bette to let Tina in knowing that Tina had been holding back. Their first night together was very special even though they had clothes on they still spend that first night together. The only concern that I have is when everybody else finds out the basketball team could lose every game because of Tina’s age. For a story line Tina could consider how people treat others when they are different. Something along those lines.
Ohhhhhh yeah! You are awesome Kelloggs! This was done just perfectly. So glad that Tina told Bette the truth and glad that Bette understood. It’s a good thing Tina told Bette b4 she quit her job! Wow! Can’t wait til your next post!
That was just too sweet. I’m so happy they finally admitted how they feel about each other, and I am overjoyed that Tina did the right thing by telling Bette the truth. Maybe Jade and Kate will let them have the room to themselves or a few hours so they can really let loose. I was wondering about the camera, if I was Tina I’d tell my boss to go “F” off and I wouldn’t wear the camera.Could we have the next update soon please.