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My first time…a Sci-Fi Story Chapter 15 – THE WAR
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Tasha: “hey Dawny, is there something wrong?”
Dawn: “…hmm…yes, you could say that…, I don’t know if I should tell, I think I may, can we talk somewhere else?”
Tasha: “sure, how about we get out for an early lunch”
The girls went out toward the SAC; there they sit on a table of one of the small cafeterias, and ask for coffee and sandwiches and Dawn’s story started:
Dawn: “Tasha, do you know who my mother was?”
Tasha: “I have seen you with your mother…, I think what is her name…, Mercy?”
Dawn: “Marcia…, Marcia Dembo…, but is not her whom I was talking about, is my other mother, she died a few years ago, she was Desiree Buckley”
Tasha: “Desiree Buckley…, are you talking about the legendary lesbian activist, the one who fought all her family after the hecatomb?”
Dawn: “yes, she was my birth mother, and she was murdered”
Tasha: “… really…! I believed it was an accident”
Dawn: “no, it wasn’t, she was told to go inside the border with Old LA, because some friend of her was retained there by someone and there, my mom went she was attacked, it was a trap, they made it looked like a sliding cement blocks fell down from a collapsed construction on her…”
Tasha: “but who could do that?”
Dawn: “her own family, and now her cousin is in town, she is evil, she is making me do things that I don’t want to do”
Tasha: “… are you talking about the new professor?”
Dawn: “she is not a new professor; she is just a visiting researcher, she threatened me to kill my other mom if I don’t do what she is asking me”
Tasha: “what is she asking you to do?”
Dawn: “to spy on Dr. Rossi and on Bette and her girlfriend Tina…, look I like Bette; before Tina, she was always ‘available’…, well, just for one time, but… you know, I never lost my hopes; she was a lady-killer …, well, something like that, she easily hook you up in flirt games, and most the times this ended in one-night-stand, but she was always gentle; I have my share of girls too, but she always made you feel so especial, she treated you well, of course she did all the job, she never let anybody to go down on her, not even an intimate touch…, you know what I’m talking about, right…, well I had my hopes that one day she will be with me again, nothing serious, you know, but comforting, however since Tina enter to her life, they became exclusive, I felt a little jealous, but that is something totally different than to want Tina raped, kidnapped and brainwashed”
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I was happy to get a notification that you posted a chapter, but girl, 46 pages , what a happy surprise.
Sadly i have to wait before i am able to read it.
Just give me a Day or two and i hope to give you a proper comment.
Hi Bibi:
Take your time, and I promise in my next story (continuation of this) the chapters will be shorter and will be posted more frequently
Thanks
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Good lord, what a fantastic written chapter and beautiful picture !
It was an incredible journey to read the story, i didn’t understand all the scientic, but you managed to pull me through it. You even managed to make me feel sorry for Henry, no one deserves that kind of abuse! It makes me very angry.
And now they are in war and the couple have to say goodbye to each other but they are bonded forever in mind, heart and soul.
I am looking forward to your next story!
Thanks Bibi
I’m glad that you like it, my friend, yes I know there is a lot of technicality and sci-fi, but I wanted to be ‘consistent’, sorry about that.
Respect to Henry, yes it is sad and in real life sometimes it happens, I witnessed a similar case in my life and I was and still am very angry; from my point of view, is like a chain reaction, he is a rapist because he follows a model where he was also raped, it is very sad and I didn’t want to excuse or justify his behavior because we all have free will and we can change or stop at any time; but what I wanted, when I wrote this part, is to emphasize that hate begets hatred, and sometimes abuse breeds abusers and whatever is the cause, it has to be stopped and punished,
Yes, our girls love each other and that bond (I want to believe) is ‘unbreakable’, but let’s test it in the new story and find out what their legacy is.
The picture is really beautiful and as I said, mscully made it and it was very kind of her to let me use it.
Thanks again Bibi for reading patiently this story (this is also ‘my first time’ writing a story, I didn’t even write one in my native language but I’m trying to learn)
I hope I’ll post the new one in few days, see you.
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Wow! Wow !!!
My God proteamics.!
It was a real roller coaster ride.
Finally the enemy declares himself and we have a combat team, it is necessary to join forces and have an elaborate reaction plan even before the invasion occurs, now
Is “War on the Aliens”! And this mission will not be easy because
This team commanded by Bette will fight hand-to-hand with these beings of another dimension to be able to destroy the portals. I am very anxious !
And I imagine that the arrival of these aliens on the planet was because the Earth scientists themselves were transmitting signals to space, both crooked and right, and the aliens detected these transmissions, and with that they arrived at the
Planet through the portals … sorry I’m in my daydream … I think it’s due
The remedies I’m taking to stick the bones off my toes … lol.
And I believe that the reason for this invasion is because of the Earth’s resources that are valuable to these beings of another dimension, and humans are a major drag on their path.
It was very sad to have to separate our couple, but the separated ones are stronger.
All universe
Bear hug.
I’m waiting for the next chapter.
Note: I want to thank you for using one of my photos in your story, this is
an honor .
Hey my friend:
Thanks for reading and commenting, I know SciFi is not something everybody likes, but there is always a ‘public’ who likes this and we all like lesbian’s stories, and this is it. Yes is a roller coaster, so many things together in one chapter, but I needed to finish the story and start the new one that is already posted. To tell the truth, I have another additional story in the oven and it will be ready to post pretty soon, so I needed to end this one. You are not daydreaming, There are resources on our planet and many other places of our universe that are a real temptation for any civilization (do you know there is a celestial body composed of diamond).
Our girls are going to be separated but will work together (far from each other); temptation and other attractive girls are in the way, so, we will test the strength of her love and commitment during the war.
I am very grateful for your picture, I hope you may lend me others for the next story.
Thank so much my friend
Bear hug
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