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My first time…a Sci-Fi Story Chapter 15 – THE WAR
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Melvin: “I would like to introduce you, my friend Dr. Rupert Giles”
After everybody greeted Dr. Giles, the British scholar explains his interest in meeting them.
Dr. Giles: “I asked Melvin for this meeting because things have made a turn for the worst (sighing); but first let me tell you a story: when I was young, I learnt that there are other dimensions besides ours, which, I think is what you call parallel universes; I learnt, those dimensions are populated by creatures and some of them are evil, and they have the knowledge and way to travel back and forth from there to here and to other places with the purpose of conquering, rule or fight beings of other dimensions and purposely or not, in the way to achieve their goals, they have been trying to destroy or conquer us; which could be easy if it weren’t for the diversity of our human race and the ability to produce in each generation at least, a girl with superhuman abilities, who, with the right support, can fight those small armies of evil…(exhaling). Sixty years ago, it started a huge outbreak of those creatures all around the world, but the main source was here in California or New California as you call it now; the gateway to other dimensions was called the Hellmouth, and there we fought for around six to seven years those entities, and when everything pointed to our defeat, we found that ancient instrument, the Scythe, which made us indestructible and unbeatable, so, we close that gateway that you call now portal. We parted to different places, on our planet, to close all the other ones, and we could probably succeed if it weren’t for us humans…(wiping the sweat of the forehead with a handkerchief and sighing); look, evil always tempted humans, especially for the power and wealth, and the ecological destruction of our planet at the hands of the man has not been an accident; the dimensional doors can form easier, in places where the ecological balance has been broken, geological flaws, polar vortices and magnetic irregularities; this is the reason why hecatomb produced changes that we couldn’t fight…, well, we indeed tried but things have been escalating for years… we almost feel defeated; but the brilliant and excellent battle you fought last year at Old LA help a lot to recover our hopes and it bought us time, though we still can’t prevent the unavoidable; the dimensions will open soon, we alone can’t fight that, but if we unify forces, we could get a better chance to save the planet and the remaining of humans that we are; I think, you have better and more advanced equipment, science and technology, besides you have people with superhuman powers; on the other hands, we have experience, we fought 60 years ago those creatures and some of us have also superhuman powers…, what do you think?”
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I was happy to get a notification that you posted a chapter, but girl, 46 pages , what a happy surprise.
Sadly i have to wait before i am able to read it.
Just give me a Day or two and i hope to give you a proper comment.
Hi Bibi:
Take your time, and I promise in my next story (continuation of this) the chapters will be shorter and will be posted more frequently
Thanks
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Good lord, what a fantastic written chapter and beautiful picture !
It was an incredible journey to read the story, i didn’t understand all the scientic, but you managed to pull me through it. You even managed to make me feel sorry for Henry, no one deserves that kind of abuse! It makes me very angry.
And now they are in war and the couple have to say goodbye to each other but they are bonded forever in mind, heart and soul.
I am looking forward to your next story!
Thanks Bibi
I’m glad that you like it, my friend, yes I know there is a lot of technicality and sci-fi, but I wanted to be ‘consistent’, sorry about that.
Respect to Henry, yes it is sad and in real life sometimes it happens, I witnessed a similar case in my life and I was and still am very angry; from my point of view, is like a chain reaction, he is a rapist because he follows a model where he was also raped, it is very sad and I didn’t want to excuse or justify his behavior because we all have free will and we can change or stop at any time; but what I wanted, when I wrote this part, is to emphasize that hate begets hatred, and sometimes abuse breeds abusers and whatever is the cause, it has to be stopped and punished,
Yes, our girls love each other and that bond (I want to believe) is ‘unbreakable’, but let’s test it in the new story and find out what their legacy is.
The picture is really beautiful and as I said, mscully made it and it was very kind of her to let me use it.
Thanks again Bibi for reading patiently this story (this is also ‘my first time’ writing a story, I didn’t even write one in my native language but I’m trying to learn)
I hope I’ll post the new one in few days, see you.
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Wow! Wow !!!
My God proteamics.!
It was a real roller coaster ride.
Finally the enemy declares himself and we have a combat team, it is necessary to join forces and have an elaborate reaction plan even before the invasion occurs, now
Is “War on the Aliens”! And this mission will not be easy because
This team commanded by Bette will fight hand-to-hand with these beings of another dimension to be able to destroy the portals. I am very anxious !
And I imagine that the arrival of these aliens on the planet was because the Earth scientists themselves were transmitting signals to space, both crooked and right, and the aliens detected these transmissions, and with that they arrived at the
Planet through the portals … sorry I’m in my daydream … I think it’s due
The remedies I’m taking to stick the bones off my toes … lol.
And I believe that the reason for this invasion is because of the Earth’s resources that are valuable to these beings of another dimension, and humans are a major drag on their path.
It was very sad to have to separate our couple, but the separated ones are stronger.
All universe
Bear hug.
I’m waiting for the next chapter.
Note: I want to thank you for using one of my photos in your story, this is
an honor .
Hey my friend:
Thanks for reading and commenting, I know SciFi is not something everybody likes, but there is always a ‘public’ who likes this and we all like lesbian’s stories, and this is it. Yes is a roller coaster, so many things together in one chapter, but I needed to finish the story and start the new one that is already posted. To tell the truth, I have another additional story in the oven and it will be ready to post pretty soon, so I needed to end this one. You are not daydreaming, There are resources on our planet and many other places of our universe that are a real temptation for any civilization (do you know there is a celestial body composed of diamond).
Our girls are going to be separated but will work together (far from each other); temptation and other attractive girls are in the way, so, we will test the strength of her love and commitment during the war.
I am very grateful for your picture, I hope you may lend me others for the next story.
Thank so much my friend
Bear hug
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