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My first time…a Sci-Fi Story Chapter 15 – THE WAR
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Tasha spat all her coffee on Dawn’s sleeve and coughed.
Tasha: “what…, what the hell are you talking about?”
Dawn: “it is true, this boy, Henry, was supposed going to rape her after the dance contest and these two others Josh and Erick were going to help with the kidnapping, they didn’t know about the raping, but things went crazy because they got drunk and instead Henry raped Erick and Henry acted like he was doing it to Tina; now Erick doesn’t want to talk to Henry and Josh is avoiding him too, and Jody and Kelly learnt about that, and that my aunt hate lesbians and they are uncomfortable working with her and Dr. Phillips, but they need the scholarship as Erick and Josh need it, they didn’t apply to other professors’ projects, and now they don’t have any other chance”
Tasha: “… you know something Dawny, we have to talk to Louise, she would help, even to protect your mother”
Dawn: “there is more, they have drugged one professor to spy on Louise too, is Dr. Aaron Kornbluth, the new assistant professor of Dr. Palmer, they drugged and hypnotized him in order to spy on the Biochemistry building”
Tasha: “wow Dawny, we must go right now to talk with Louise”
The girls left the SAC and walked toward the Biochemistry building, while Tasha used her hphone to talk to Louise and explain the urgency of the situation, Louise canceled all her appointments and meetings to receive them and when the girls arrived, Dawn repeated the entire story to her.
Louise: “Dawny do you know when they will try again?”
Dawn: “I heard that woman, my aunt; mention to Henry something about the inauguration of the orientation semester, I doubt Erick and Josh would follow, but again they don’t have any other choice”
Louise: “thanks, Dawny, may you give me your mother’s hphone code? so, I could talk to her and give her a safe place to stay”
After the girls left, Louise called an emergency meeting with her team and they made a plan to counteract General Wilkins plot and relieve the adults and students that want to step aside from that plot. Angus will take care of Erick and Josh, Sharon will find something for Jody and Kelly in Peggy’s group, Melvin and Kit will talk with Dawn’s mother and move her to a safe place and probably find a new and stable job for her; and Louise herself along with Melanie Wilson will check on Aaron’s situation.
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I was happy to get a notification that you posted a chapter, but girl, 46 pages , what a happy surprise.
Sadly i have to wait before i am able to read it.
Just give me a Day or two and i hope to give you a proper comment.
Hi Bibi:
Take your time, and I promise in my next story (continuation of this) the chapters will be shorter and will be posted more frequently
Thanks
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Good lord, what a fantastic written chapter and beautiful picture !
It was an incredible journey to read the story, i didn’t understand all the scientic, but you managed to pull me through it. You even managed to make me feel sorry for Henry, no one deserves that kind of abuse! It makes me very angry.
And now they are in war and the couple have to say goodbye to each other but they are bonded forever in mind, heart and soul.
I am looking forward to your next story!
Thanks Bibi
I’m glad that you like it, my friend, yes I know there is a lot of technicality and sci-fi, but I wanted to be ‘consistent’, sorry about that.
Respect to Henry, yes it is sad and in real life sometimes it happens, I witnessed a similar case in my life and I was and still am very angry; from my point of view, is like a chain reaction, he is a rapist because he follows a model where he was also raped, it is very sad and I didn’t want to excuse or justify his behavior because we all have free will and we can change or stop at any time; but what I wanted, when I wrote this part, is to emphasize that hate begets hatred, and sometimes abuse breeds abusers and whatever is the cause, it has to be stopped and punished,
Yes, our girls love each other and that bond (I want to believe) is ‘unbreakable’, but let’s test it in the new story and find out what their legacy is.
The picture is really beautiful and as I said, mscully made it and it was very kind of her to let me use it.
Thanks again Bibi for reading patiently this story (this is also ‘my first time’ writing a story, I didn’t even write one in my native language but I’m trying to learn)
I hope I’ll post the new one in few days, see you.
P
Wow! Wow !!!
My God proteamics.!
It was a real roller coaster ride.
Finally the enemy declares himself and we have a combat team, it is necessary to join forces and have an elaborate reaction plan even before the invasion occurs, now
Is “War on the Aliens”! And this mission will not be easy because
This team commanded by Bette will fight hand-to-hand with these beings of another dimension to be able to destroy the portals. I am very anxious !
And I imagine that the arrival of these aliens on the planet was because the Earth scientists themselves were transmitting signals to space, both crooked and right, and the aliens detected these transmissions, and with that they arrived at the
Planet through the portals … sorry I’m in my daydream … I think it’s due
The remedies I’m taking to stick the bones off my toes … lol.
And I believe that the reason for this invasion is because of the Earth’s resources that are valuable to these beings of another dimension, and humans are a major drag on their path.
It was very sad to have to separate our couple, but the separated ones are stronger.
All universe
Bear hug.
I’m waiting for the next chapter.
Note: I want to thank you for using one of my photos in your story, this is
an honor .
Hey my friend:
Thanks for reading and commenting, I know SciFi is not something everybody likes, but there is always a ‘public’ who likes this and we all like lesbian’s stories, and this is it. Yes is a roller coaster, so many things together in one chapter, but I needed to finish the story and start the new one that is already posted. To tell the truth, I have another additional story in the oven and it will be ready to post pretty soon, so I needed to end this one. You are not daydreaming, There are resources on our planet and many other places of our universe that are a real temptation for any civilization (do you know there is a celestial body composed of diamond).
Our girls are going to be separated but will work together (far from each other); temptation and other attractive girls are in the way, so, we will test the strength of her love and commitment during the war.
I am very grateful for your picture, I hope you may lend me others for the next story.
Thank so much my friend
Bear hug
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