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Masked Feelings CH 98 Questionable Tension
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The two women were lying in the bathtub with the stream of water hitting their bodies. Dana mouth was on the blonde’s left breast, sucking and licking until her nipple was hard. Her fingers were inside, pumping in and out, going deeper and deeper with each thrust. Alice moaned with an aching need of release. Dana’s mouth released from the point of interest to another…. her mouth. The intensity of the kiss only gave way to the growing passion. Their lungs quickly burned from lack of air, but neither wanted to break away.
Alice’s fingers entered Dana’s center and quickly recogonized the slippery wetness that wasn’t caused from the shower. Two fingers easily slid in and out. They pumped in and out with a rhythm that drove each other to the brink of madness. Their bodies rocked back and forth, matching the rhythm of the thrusts. Their mouths finally broke apart, gasping for air and still managing to find a voice. They called out each other’s names continually, over and over again until their final releases. Alice collapsed on top of Dana. They still remained inside of each other.
They both heard a loud crash come from somewhere inside the house.
Dana – What the hell was that?
Alice – Oh my God… someone’s inside the house. Didn’t you set the alarm?
Dana – I thought you did.
Alice – Did you lock the bathroom door?
Dana – Why? I don’t normally expect someone to randomly come in.
Both women got up. Dana got out of the shower, grabbing a towel.
Alice – Where are you going?
Dana – To lock the door…
She got to the door and quickly locked it. Dana turned to face the mirror.
Dana – The mirror… did you see it?
Alice – Oh my God… I was going to tell you earlier.
Dana – What?
Alice – You seem pretty calm about it.
Dana – Why wouldn’t I be? You’re confusing me, Al. What is going on?
Alice steps out and looks for herself. She examines it a second time. Had she imagined the whole thing? Dana must’ve written it herself the last time she took a shower and had just read it wrong.
Alice – I think we have a bigger problem. Who’s in our house?
Dana – Don’t worry, baby. I’m sure the cat just knocked something over.
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(29 votes, average: 3.59 out of 5)
So glad to see you back, brteyes!! How bad do I suck? I can’t believe I missed out on commenting on a post from you. My sincere apologies… Goose needs to be better at checking the site more often. That chapter was great as was this one. I don’t think you have missed a beat with your absence. I loved both updates. I think you are actually improving — the story lines are all advancing nicely. I love the “calm before the storm” moments with Dana and Alice. The mirror thing and the crash at the end are mighty creepy, though. I really find myself intrigued with the Roxy back story. It might be my favorite storyline at the moment. The stuff with Marco is also interesting — the way you are twining his desires with those of his family. It really is so great to get more of this story. I plan to keep reading as long as you keep posting. Thanks!!
nice one, can’t wait to see what’s next. pps