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Masked Feelings CH 53 No One Goes Unpunished
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The bitch of this whole thing was Kristen was the only link to Dana. For whatever reason, Dana had chosen her to talk to… but in her opinion she guessed it was because she was the least likely to force her opinion on her. Alice didn’t know if Kristen was alive or dead at this point. When Dana found out something happened to her, she’d be devastated. She planned to stay until she knew something. Alice also made a promise to herself…. she’d do whatever it took to find Dana and tell her the news. She prayed she wouldn’t have to tell her that she was dead.
Alice and Bette took a walk to the ER. They had overheard of another ambulance coming in. When it had finally made it’s appearance, they were met with a couple of the ER staff. Alice was nervously waiting to catch a glimpse as the gurney was wheeled down the hall. She was confused as to why there was a metal rod sticking up… thinking it was some bizarre illusion. As it came closer, she realized that it wasn’t. It was an actual person laying on the gurney. What was funny about the whole thing was that Alice didn’t like the sight of blood or anything of the kind, but she couldn’t take her eyes off the victim. Everything seemed like it was moving in slow motion as the gurney passed them….. staring at the stake the whole time. Alice glanced down momentarily to see the victim of this most unfortunate accident and was shocked when she saw her friend’s face. Alice clamped her hand over her mouth and stifled a scream. She immediately felt nauseous and ran to the nearest garbage can to empty the contents of her stomach.
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Dana had awaken early, anxious to start her day. This wouldn’t be a particularly good day to train outside, because it was raining….. but it’s not like she’d never done it before. She put on her old baggy sweatshirt and shorts… lacing up her running shoes, then stepping out into the hall. Dana smelt the sweet aroma of breakfast in the air as she went down the stairs. She wanted to pop her head into the kitchen to say good morning before she took off on her run. Last night was suppose to be all about exploring her old feelings about Allie, but it was marred by her recent past with Alice. Dana walked through the kitchen door but didn’t see her anywhere. She debated on staying to see if she’d show in a few minutes, but decided that she could always see her after the workout. As she was about to make her exit out of the other kitchen door to go outside, Alison came through the door.
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hey look at that, i’m first. it’s been a while. wow. pretty intense. definitely enjoyed this chapter. damn, i can’t think of what else to say. um, looking forward to the next chappy!
This is a mess. Alice with someone. Kristen is hurt and a woman chasing husband. Dana is having a ball with someone else Waiting for the next post thanks
haha.. that was pretty smart of alice- dropping the keys in her bra. i can only imagine what was going through allison’s mind during dana and alice’s mini confrontation. it would really be amazing if derek was able to figure out roxy’s role in his getting caught w/ kelly. i hope that’s where you’re headed. if not, then at least let dana kick her ass again. LOL. as always another great chapter! keep it up!
Wow you really threw me for a loop you sly devil you, I liked that Alice walked in on Dana and Allie. I can imagine the embarrassed look also like that Kristen is displacing her anger onto Alice but Alice is still trying to help. I can only wonder if Alice is using this situation to her advantage. I mean Tina could have delivered the news just as easily. Our little Alice has a trick or two up her sleeve maybe. And Allie going the back way so she could get a little Dana time was hot…sitting on the lap always is again this seems a little familiar lol. Great chapter babe, it’s really amazing that you can write this much every few days. I wish I could do the same lol. I can’t wait for the next post, I love you babe. And I hope you have an amazing Tue, I know I will (since I’ll be reading this over and over again tomorrow)
yay! thank you for the roxy free update. she’s a great character but she just sends my blood pressure soaring so it’s good to have a break once in awhile. very glad that kristen seems to be out of the woods for now. can’t wait to see if you have allie tag along with dana and alice.
I so tried to read this last night & just couldn’t manage to keep my eyes open … damn that was good! You’re just completely content to leave us on the edge of our seats just wondering what will happen next. Personally I wouldn’t consider it such a bad thing to go down Alice’s bra in pursuit of anything!
but.. but but why there! lol u and ur evil ending ways! i loveddd it tho and u know Alie and Dana are hot together but Alie is no Alice! oh and the direction ur taking is fanastic! i just think its ok for me to whine about it either way lol Poor kristin i didnt like the “I CANT FEEL MY LEGS” part not one bit! :( Alice just kicks ass she has got some big balls showing up the way she did and even more props to her for ignoring Alie on the bed lol as everyone said- uve left us all on the edge of our seats! so plzzz if its possible update right now, yes right this second! haha as always great job Brt so in your honor.. :does the Masked Feelings wave: yep soon everyone will be doing it! lol and no no u rock! ps: still waiting for Roxy to get jacked.. lol
How do you do it? The last couple of days work has gotten in the way and I’ve barely gotten around to even comment on these stories. And here you are, writing 10-pagers of this story…weekly! I didn’t know Dana was your favorite character. You’ll better give let her have some happiness then (eventually with Alice ofcourse…hint, hint :P)! I wonder if Alison knows what she has gotten herself in to. At first I thought she was not that serious with Dana. Just having fun for the time being…but I think that only goes for Dana. And I kind of liked the three of them together in the same room (no, not in that way!). Maybe I got a bit excited to see an actual dialogue between Dana and Alice in which they weren’t biting each others heads off (well not that much anyway). I wonder if these kind of dialogues will continue in the trip back home…that is if Dana hasn’t got the guts to get her keys back. And lol @ Alice trying to manipulate Bette right after they called a truce. She’s just so loveable. :)
I really like the back and forth between Alice and Dana on the phone and in the room at then end. The Alice driving Dana back could provide a lot of good drama. Although the smart ass in me wants to point out that Allison has a 4×4 so if Dana didn’t want to ride with Alice Dana could also ask her for a lift.
Wow lady! Great update. I love this story. Where did this idea came from? I would have to imagine more than a year to get into such a great storyline. You’re doing a really amazing job. And please don’t worry, I’m not going away. How could your biggest fan do that? lolHope you post soon:-)
I will always have a sweet spot in my heart for your beautifull story especially if you keep bringing me my weekly Dansih fix. I think it’s really good to see Dana with Allie but then again when Alice got to Dana’s it just broke my heart. Good for Alice to take a stand and getting that phone and talking to Dana, that key bit was classic Alice (go for the keys Dana!!) This could be a nice car ride to the hospital. I hope Kirsten is okay and I’ve made a dramatic decision, I’ll try to warm up to Roxy if you want me to. Don’t think it will work but I’ll try. So glad you told us that this story is far from over…but more drama still!! Man looking forward to that..hope you can keep up your weekly posts you’re doing an amazing job! Thanks..