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Masked Feelings CH 53 No One Goes Unpunished
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Dana – Nothing…. I’m fine.
Alison – Do you always cry during sex?
Dana – I’m not crying….
Alison – You were always such a bad liar, Fairbanks.
Dana – You just knew me too well.
Alison – Yeah I think I knew you better then you knew yourself.
Alison’s cell phone rings.
Alison – I have to get that.
Alison is on the phone for less then a minute and puts the phone in her purse.
Alison – I have to go. Can you give me a ride home? Seems that my son has forgotten his key and is locked out.
Dana – I can give you a ride….. so much for our date.
Alison – If you’re going to be here for a couple days, we can go out again.
Dana – Really?
Alison – Yes… really. Now get your ass dressed because I need to get home.
Dana – Yes, Alison.
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Kristen’s condition was worsening by the second. The fact that it was taking so long to get her out of the car was reason enough to be concerned. The extent of her injuries were unknown as of yet…. except one. That particular injury was quite visible. Parts and equipment from the worker’s trailler was strewn all over the intersection. Due to the pickup’s screeching halt, it jack-knifed and launched several things. One of the items, an 18 inch metal stake… it sailed through Kristen’s windsheild seconds after impact…. impaling her in the right shoulder area. Her only saving grace was the fact that when she would come to, she’d almost immediately lose consciousness again.Her body wouldn’t allow her to experience the full effect of her pain. Her car was smashed in like an accordian and her lower body was trapped under the dash.
Everyone that was in need of medical attention had already been transported, except for Kristen. An ambulance was standing by, waiting to take her to the hospital. They used various rescue tools to assist in getting her out…. the best being the "jaws of life." Once they got the door open and freed her lower body, the tricky part would be getting her out. They’d have to cut the car up to allow enough space, because of the stake that was sticking out of her shoulder.
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hey look at that, i’m first. it’s been a while. wow. pretty intense. definitely enjoyed this chapter. damn, i can’t think of what else to say. um, looking forward to the next chappy!
This is a mess. Alice with someone. Kristen is hurt and a woman chasing husband. Dana is having a ball with someone else Waiting for the next post thanks
haha.. that was pretty smart of alice- dropping the keys in her bra. i can only imagine what was going through allison’s mind during dana and alice’s mini confrontation. it would really be amazing if derek was able to figure out roxy’s role in his getting caught w/ kelly. i hope that’s where you’re headed. if not, then at least let dana kick her ass again. LOL. as always another great chapter! keep it up!
Wow you really threw me for a loop you sly devil you, I liked that Alice walked in on Dana and Allie. I can imagine the embarrassed look also like that Kristen is displacing her anger onto Alice but Alice is still trying to help. I can only wonder if Alice is using this situation to her advantage. I mean Tina could have delivered the news just as easily. Our little Alice has a trick or two up her sleeve maybe. And Allie going the back way so she could get a little Dana time was hot…sitting on the lap always is again this seems a little familiar lol. Great chapter babe, it’s really amazing that you can write this much every few days. I wish I could do the same lol. I can’t wait for the next post, I love you babe. And I hope you have an amazing Tue, I know I will (since I’ll be reading this over and over again tomorrow)
yay! thank you for the roxy free update. she’s a great character but she just sends my blood pressure soaring so it’s good to have a break once in awhile. very glad that kristen seems to be out of the woods for now. can’t wait to see if you have allie tag along with dana and alice.
I so tried to read this last night & just couldn’t manage to keep my eyes open … damn that was good! You’re just completely content to leave us on the edge of our seats just wondering what will happen next. Personally I wouldn’t consider it such a bad thing to go down Alice’s bra in pursuit of anything!
but.. but but why there! lol u and ur evil ending ways! i loveddd it tho and u know Alie and Dana are hot together but Alie is no Alice! oh and the direction ur taking is fanastic! i just think its ok for me to whine about it either way lol Poor kristin i didnt like the “I CANT FEEL MY LEGS” part not one bit! :( Alice just kicks ass she has got some big balls showing up the way she did and even more props to her for ignoring Alie on the bed lol as everyone said- uve left us all on the edge of our seats! so plzzz if its possible update right now, yes right this second! haha as always great job Brt so in your honor.. :does the Masked Feelings wave: yep soon everyone will be doing it! lol and no no u rock! ps: still waiting for Roxy to get jacked.. lol
How do you do it? The last couple of days work has gotten in the way and I’ve barely gotten around to even comment on these stories. And here you are, writing 10-pagers of this story…weekly! I didn’t know Dana was your favorite character. You’ll better give let her have some happiness then (eventually with Alice ofcourse…hint, hint :P)! I wonder if Alison knows what she has gotten herself in to. At first I thought she was not that serious with Dana. Just having fun for the time being…but I think that only goes for Dana. And I kind of liked the three of them together in the same room (no, not in that way!). Maybe I got a bit excited to see an actual dialogue between Dana and Alice in which they weren’t biting each others heads off (well not that much anyway). I wonder if these kind of dialogues will continue in the trip back home…that is if Dana hasn’t got the guts to get her keys back. And lol @ Alice trying to manipulate Bette right after they called a truce. She’s just so loveable. :)
I really like the back and forth between Alice and Dana on the phone and in the room at then end. The Alice driving Dana back could provide a lot of good drama. Although the smart ass in me wants to point out that Allison has a 4×4 so if Dana didn’t want to ride with Alice Dana could also ask her for a lift.
Wow lady! Great update. I love this story. Where did this idea came from? I would have to imagine more than a year to get into such a great storyline. You’re doing a really amazing job. And please don’t worry, I’m not going away. How could your biggest fan do that? lolHope you post soon:-)
I will always have a sweet spot in my heart for your beautifull story especially if you keep bringing me my weekly Dansih fix. I think it’s really good to see Dana with Allie but then again when Alice got to Dana’s it just broke my heart. Good for Alice to take a stand and getting that phone and talking to Dana, that key bit was classic Alice (go for the keys Dana!!) This could be a nice car ride to the hospital. I hope Kirsten is okay and I’ve made a dramatic decision, I’ll try to warm up to Roxy if you want me to. Don’t think it will work but I’ll try. So glad you told us that this story is far from over…but more drama still!! Man looking forward to that..hope you can keep up your weekly posts you’re doing an amazing job! Thanks..