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Masked Feelings CH 53 No One Goes Unpunished
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Kristen regained consciousness when they were trying to free her legs. She was in shock and didn’t understand what had happened. When she saw the stake protruding from her shoulder, she nearly freaked out and went to grab it. The paramedic grabbed her hand to stop her from touching it…. then explained why she shouldn’t. They had to immobilize the stake until a doctor could remove it properly. Next they worked at freeing her body from under the dash. Talking to her would be crucial. It was always best to talk the victim through the tough parts… mostly distracting them and keeping them calm. One man was cutting the top of the car while another was using the jaws of life to move the dash up. Kristen was scared and was feeling panicked at the thought of being trapped in the car….. almost claustrophobic. The paramedic was still talking to her but she was too aware of what was going on. She craned her neck around to see what was going on. The dash was free from her body but when they touched her legs… she freaked out again, nearly screaming.
Kristen – I can’t feel my legs!
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Alice was at Cedars Sinai hounding the nurse at the desk for information…. which she was either withholding or just totally clueless to what was going on. She couldn’t stand not knowing anything… and it wasn’t because she was the inquisitive type. Well yeah, she was but this was because she genuinely cared for Kristen and now considered her a good friend. Alice called one of her friends at a newspaper to find out what she could about the accident. Most everyone had been treated or were transported to the hospital. She was also told that one person was still trapped in their car… and a woman was dead at the scene. Upon hearing this, her stomach dropped… fearing the worst.
Alice hated hospitals. It wasn’t enough that Dana had been here not that long ago, now she was here again waiting to find out about Kristen. She still felt bad about being jealous of her but that was only because she was such good friends with Dana. Alice needed to trust her own instincts which should be a big rule, professionally as much as personally. There were always going to be outside influences trying to change her perspective. Roxy was the most negative influence in Alice’s life right now. Her constant manipulations and influence cost her the most important person in her life, but Alice knew that it took two to tango and she danced with the wrong partner.
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hey look at that, i’m first. it’s been a while. wow. pretty intense. definitely enjoyed this chapter. damn, i can’t think of what else to say. um, looking forward to the next chappy!
This is a mess. Alice with someone. Kristen is hurt and a woman chasing husband. Dana is having a ball with someone else Waiting for the next post thanks
haha.. that was pretty smart of alice- dropping the keys in her bra. i can only imagine what was going through allison’s mind during dana and alice’s mini confrontation. it would really be amazing if derek was able to figure out roxy’s role in his getting caught w/ kelly. i hope that’s where you’re headed. if not, then at least let dana kick her ass again. LOL. as always another great chapter! keep it up!
Wow you really threw me for a loop you sly devil you, I liked that Alice walked in on Dana and Allie. I can imagine the embarrassed look also like that Kristen is displacing her anger onto Alice but Alice is still trying to help. I can only wonder if Alice is using this situation to her advantage. I mean Tina could have delivered the news just as easily. Our little Alice has a trick or two up her sleeve maybe. And Allie going the back way so she could get a little Dana time was hot…sitting on the lap always is again this seems a little familiar lol. Great chapter babe, it’s really amazing that you can write this much every few days. I wish I could do the same lol. I can’t wait for the next post, I love you babe. And I hope you have an amazing Tue, I know I will (since I’ll be reading this over and over again tomorrow)
yay! thank you for the roxy free update. she’s a great character but she just sends my blood pressure soaring so it’s good to have a break once in awhile. very glad that kristen seems to be out of the woods for now. can’t wait to see if you have allie tag along with dana and alice.
I so tried to read this last night & just couldn’t manage to keep my eyes open … damn that was good! You’re just completely content to leave us on the edge of our seats just wondering what will happen next. Personally I wouldn’t consider it such a bad thing to go down Alice’s bra in pursuit of anything!
but.. but but why there! lol u and ur evil ending ways! i loveddd it tho and u know Alie and Dana are hot together but Alie is no Alice! oh and the direction ur taking is fanastic! i just think its ok for me to whine about it either way lol Poor kristin i didnt like the “I CANT FEEL MY LEGS” part not one bit! :( Alice just kicks ass she has got some big balls showing up the way she did and even more props to her for ignoring Alie on the bed lol as everyone said- uve left us all on the edge of our seats! so plzzz if its possible update right now, yes right this second! haha as always great job Brt so in your honor.. :does the Masked Feelings wave: yep soon everyone will be doing it! lol and no no u rock! ps: still waiting for Roxy to get jacked.. lol
How do you do it? The last couple of days work has gotten in the way and I’ve barely gotten around to even comment on these stories. And here you are, writing 10-pagers of this story…weekly! I didn’t know Dana was your favorite character. You’ll better give let her have some happiness then (eventually with Alice ofcourse…hint, hint :P)! I wonder if Alison knows what she has gotten herself in to. At first I thought she was not that serious with Dana. Just having fun for the time being…but I think that only goes for Dana. And I kind of liked the three of them together in the same room (no, not in that way!). Maybe I got a bit excited to see an actual dialogue between Dana and Alice in which they weren’t biting each others heads off (well not that much anyway). I wonder if these kind of dialogues will continue in the trip back home…that is if Dana hasn’t got the guts to get her keys back. And lol @ Alice trying to manipulate Bette right after they called a truce. She’s just so loveable. :)
I really like the back and forth between Alice and Dana on the phone and in the room at then end. The Alice driving Dana back could provide a lot of good drama. Although the smart ass in me wants to point out that Allison has a 4×4 so if Dana didn’t want to ride with Alice Dana could also ask her for a lift.
Wow lady! Great update. I love this story. Where did this idea came from? I would have to imagine more than a year to get into such a great storyline. You’re doing a really amazing job. And please don’t worry, I’m not going away. How could your biggest fan do that? lolHope you post soon:-)
I will always have a sweet spot in my heart for your beautifull story especially if you keep bringing me my weekly Dansih fix. I think it’s really good to see Dana with Allie but then again when Alice got to Dana’s it just broke my heart. Good for Alice to take a stand and getting that phone and talking to Dana, that key bit was classic Alice (go for the keys Dana!!) This could be a nice car ride to the hospital. I hope Kirsten is okay and I’ve made a dramatic decision, I’ll try to warm up to Roxy if you want me to. Don’t think it will work but I’ll try. So glad you told us that this story is far from over…but more drama still!! Man looking forward to that..hope you can keep up your weekly posts you’re doing an amazing job! Thanks..