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Masked Feelings CH 51 A Fire Burns
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Roxy – Penny for your thoughts…. but for you, I’d give you millions.
She smiled weakly.
Alice jumped a little at the sound of the voice, knowing full well who it was. She dropped the bottle of shampoo on the floor.
Alice – Damn it!
Roxy – I guess I surprised you.
Alice – Do you always have to sneak up on me?
Roxy always felt like a little puppy being reprimanded by it’s owner when it did something wrong…. thats the kind of control Alice had over her. When she did something she didn’t like then it made her almost cower and want to sit at her feet till she forgave her. This was not who she was… submissive and weak. Alice could pull so many feelings from her and it amazed her that she could feel like this again. The only other person that stole her heart and made her into the pile of goo that she was now… Erika. As hard as it was to face, she was gone and never coming back. It was time to move on and take the reins of her own life. Alice still had some control over her but it was up to her to decide how much. With Erika that was never an option, she had her the moment she fell in love with her. No one would have that kind of hold, ever… not even Alice.
Roxy – I’m sorry.
Roxy bent over to pick up the bottle, as Alice was reaching for it… Roxy’s fingers touched her hand. She felt the electricity surge through her and wanted to take her into her arms so bad. She was hoping for a sign from Alice but she refused to look her in the face. Alice snatched the bottle from her hand and put it in her cart.
Alice – I don’t want your apologies, Roxy. I just want you to leave me alone.
Roxy – Please don’t ask me to do that. Can we at least be friends?
Alice – You don’t know what it is to be a friend, Roxy. Since I already know how you feel about me, I can’t see us being friends…. it would be so awkward, not to mention disrespectful to Dana.
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and the plot thickens…
*sigh* You know we read the chapters together, and I ask you questions and you don’t answer me. My love taunts me at a distance, waving clues and dancing merrily about. But alas, I cannot deny her nor can I walk away from her literary genius. Her words a vice grip around the throat of my intrigue, oh great godess of my mental bearings. Now I can only weave words that are senseless in the eyes of others, a delusional basketcase of wonder. I can only postulate what might be and drop warily to my knees awaiting the moment that you will resume this novelistic journey that claves me so….Ok I’m done now, something about your chapters leave me in this stupor that was really all I could muster after the latest installment. Great job love, you’ve captured so much emotion in these pages I’m humming with excitement over the next chapter. I still love Roxy through it all, she’s so wonderfully determined, and blinded by her own lust. This Erika character has piqued my interest I can’t wait to hear more about her and how she relates to Roxy. I hope Dana’s not walking into another trap, something about that comment about trusting strangers rubbed me the wrong way. I’m excited to see how Roxy fucks with Kristen and Derek, maybe that’s why Kirsten is so into helping Dana. Anyway great chapter as always love, I can’t wait for my next snippet maybe you can print it out and I’ll read it in person. (13) I love you baby.
Roxy is so creepy, it really does freak me out a little bit how persistent she is. I just hope she gets deported or somethign.
ohmygod! i want roxy to vaporize!!! she’s too much. why can’t she get the hint to buzz off? she’s so creepy! if only she’d been trapped in dana’s cabin when it burned to the ground. so yeah.. other then roxy being a total freak it was a great update. hoping the next one comes a little sooner. : )
hey hey hey. i know, i know it’s been a while since i last commented. sorry about that, but i enjoyed reading the last three except for one. honestly, i got a little annoyed when u introduced special agent brooks last chapter b/c it was ANOTHER TWIST, another new character. but now i know i was too quick to judge. she seems like a really interesting character. can’t wait to read what happens b/n her, derek and kristin. the guy that followed dana around is taking orders from lara, right? right? ooh, and is he the same mystery guy that is bugging roxy? speaking of roxy, she is one persistent bitch. i’m actually starting to like her. she is just so necessary in creating tension b/n alice and dana, which would make the reunion of danish so much sweeter after roxy is gone. one more thing, please please do not have roxy go all fatal attraction on alice. looking forward to the next chappy. ^ – ^
There seems to be a couple of parallels between Dana’s and Alice’s relationship and Alice’s and Roxy’s relationship. It occurred to me that the dialogue from the first half Roxy’s and Alice’s conversation/confrontation at the supermarket would also fit Dana and Alice (except this time Alice would saying Roxy’s lines). Another parallel would be between Alice sneaking/running away from Roxy and Dana running away from Alice in the last chapter. I don’t hate Roxy, I just don’t see how her action are really any different than Gina at this point. My biggest problem with Roxy—aside from molesting Alice in her sleep and getting Alice drunk so she could molester her, which just crossed a line for me—is that she seldom seems to care about Alice’s feeling. I wonder if Alice is ever going to see how much Roxy has manipulated her, her car breaking down twice so Roxy conveniently (for Roxy anyway) has to give her a ride should give her a clue.I don’t know if Kelly is just stupid, desperate, delusional or all three. Roxy might get her revenge on Kristen or she might just push Kristen off her fence. I also can’t see Alice being happy if she ever finds out Roxy’s role, in trying to mess with her friend’s marriage.Re: Dana and star-grazing-I guess Alice doesn’t really know Dana that well, sad that Alice may never know how much the star gift that meant Dana. I wonder who I should be worried more regarding Dana, her mystery stalker or Sharon after she finds out the cabin burnt down?
I have a feeling this chapter is a turning point in the whole story. This chapter was about closure on the past. And it really feels like next chapter will be a new beginning. I’m not sure if it’s a good or a bad thing… And you still left me wondering…but I don’t have that many question this time. The only thing on my mind is that I so want to know who the mystery man is. Alice’s conversation with Roxy was really awkard. I have to agree with Bojangles, Roxy is freaking me out! Yet another evil masterplan has been plotted out by her. She is totally blinded by her love for Alice…or actually she is blinded by her obession with Alice. She’s just after winning the ultimate prize…and that’s Alice. Although Roxy can influence a lot of circumstances…her obsession is also her weak point. Alice just needs to figure out how Roxy’s obsession can be helpful to her (and Dana) in the end. An I was wondering, Dana was amazed by the kindness of strangers…one true observation in real life…but in the context to this story I can’t help to think that Dana will be unpleasantly suprised by that same kindness of a stranger (aka the mystery man?). I’m looking forward to the next chapter…anytime… ;)
Roxy- not so much a good person. Ha ha. This was an amazing chapter, and honestly, worth the wait! I’m super happy you decided to update! I had a long night at work, and it was the perfect thing to come home to! Great job, yet again, and I hope that you find it in your heart to treat us readers with another update soon! You’re awesome!
oh no poor kristin! Awesome Job Brteyes! this chap was reallt fused up just great. I agree with bojangles transfer Roxy out to looney land :P I think Roxy needs something rotten to land her way much like what everyone else is going threw BUT i know i know lol im still keeping a somewhat openCLOSED eye when it comes to roxy but like you said it really is easy to hate her so sue me lol Im glad the cabin is gone it really did hold on to a lot of bad memories AND! :jumps up and down: im not sure but i think i know who the mystery man is!but not really knowing is just exciting. I wonder what or who Dana will run into at this town who knows perhaps someone long lost? i cant wait for ur next update! consider me on edge!
roxy really is a piece of work.. i wonder who the guy is following dana?? i can’t wait to see what you have in store for these characters. awesome post!
Woehoe…I was jumping for joy when I saw that you updated! And an amazing update it really is. Who is that man following Dana? Good for him for burning down the evil cabin. I kinda like him yet I don’t know who he is…interesting! Roxy needs to stay the hell away from Kirsten… man she pisses me of, LOL! This chapter was really good brteyes and I hope life gives you a break and you can update again soon. Looking forward to some Danish interaction of any kind so don’t keep me waiting for too long. PS: I’ll stop stalking ClosetDana for updates I don’t want her thinking I’m some wacko like Roxy. See ya.
my god this is going to get wosre before it gets better I just hope that everything goes well in the end for alice and dana and also for kristen and derek and I can’t wait to see how you will end this but there is so much more to come before that I feel so please post soon