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Masked Feelings CH 51 A Fire Burns
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Roxy followed a safe distance behind her, knowing at anytime she could be recognized, made her extra cautious. Hopefully, she would stop some place where she’d be able to talk to her alone. If she was lucky enough, Alice’s defenses would be down and she’d be up to giving her the time of day. The last time didn’t go so good and Kristen was mostly to blame…. at least in her mind that how she saw it. With any luck that wouldn’t happen again, if all went as planned Kelly would call her back and give her some good news. Roxy had no limits when it came to Alice… if anyone else was foolish enough to stand in the way of her happiness, well they better be prepared to face the consequences.
Alice parked in front of the supermarket and walked through the sliding door… grabbing a cart by the entrance. She scanned the aisles for the things on her list. Stopping to pick up a bottle of shampoo, she thought about the time that Dana, Roxy and her went shopping together. What a lovely time that was. It was so obvious, the hate that managed to show when Dana and Roxy were in the vicinity of each other… and it was all due to her. Dana and Roxy seemed to have a pretty good relationship with each other, but that all changed when Roxy started developing feelings for her. She wondered where Dana was…. not that it mattered, because she wouldn’t be home till she was ready. She already exhausted every idea that came into her mind figuring out where she could’ve gone, but they were all dead ends. Then her mind trailed to Roxy… she had come to see her after Dana used her as a punching bag but Alice hadn’t seen her since. Knowing how persistant Roxy was, it surprised her that she hadn’t come back. Now that she wasn’t easily assessable, maybe she’s stay away. She needed Roxy to stay away… she always managed to mess with her mind someway or another.
Alice stared at the shampoo bottle… more like staring through it, deep in thought. Roxy walked up behind her, tempted to reach out and touch her instead she spoke to her. Alice was unaware of her presence.
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and the plot thickens…
*sigh* You know we read the chapters together, and I ask you questions and you don’t answer me. My love taunts me at a distance, waving clues and dancing merrily about. But alas, I cannot deny her nor can I walk away from her literary genius. Her words a vice grip around the throat of my intrigue, oh great godess of my mental bearings. Now I can only weave words that are senseless in the eyes of others, a delusional basketcase of wonder. I can only postulate what might be and drop warily to my knees awaiting the moment that you will resume this novelistic journey that claves me so….Ok I’m done now, something about your chapters leave me in this stupor that was really all I could muster after the latest installment. Great job love, you’ve captured so much emotion in these pages I’m humming with excitement over the next chapter. I still love Roxy through it all, she’s so wonderfully determined, and blinded by her own lust. This Erika character has piqued my interest I can’t wait to hear more about her and how she relates to Roxy. I hope Dana’s not walking into another trap, something about that comment about trusting strangers rubbed me the wrong way. I’m excited to see how Roxy fucks with Kristen and Derek, maybe that’s why Kirsten is so into helping Dana. Anyway great chapter as always love, I can’t wait for my next snippet maybe you can print it out and I’ll read it in person. (13) I love you baby.
Roxy is so creepy, it really does freak me out a little bit how persistent she is. I just hope she gets deported or somethign.
ohmygod! i want roxy to vaporize!!! she’s too much. why can’t she get the hint to buzz off? she’s so creepy! if only she’d been trapped in dana’s cabin when it burned to the ground. so yeah.. other then roxy being a total freak it was a great update. hoping the next one comes a little sooner. : )
hey hey hey. i know, i know it’s been a while since i last commented. sorry about that, but i enjoyed reading the last three except for one. honestly, i got a little annoyed when u introduced special agent brooks last chapter b/c it was ANOTHER TWIST, another new character. but now i know i was too quick to judge. she seems like a really interesting character. can’t wait to read what happens b/n her, derek and kristin. the guy that followed dana around is taking orders from lara, right? right? ooh, and is he the same mystery guy that is bugging roxy? speaking of roxy, she is one persistent bitch. i’m actually starting to like her. she is just so necessary in creating tension b/n alice and dana, which would make the reunion of danish so much sweeter after roxy is gone. one more thing, please please do not have roxy go all fatal attraction on alice. looking forward to the next chappy. ^ – ^
There seems to be a couple of parallels between Dana’s and Alice’s relationship and Alice’s and Roxy’s relationship. It occurred to me that the dialogue from the first half Roxy’s and Alice’s conversation/confrontation at the supermarket would also fit Dana and Alice (except this time Alice would saying Roxy’s lines). Another parallel would be between Alice sneaking/running away from Roxy and Dana running away from Alice in the last chapter. I don’t hate Roxy, I just don’t see how her action are really any different than Gina at this point. My biggest problem with Roxy—aside from molesting Alice in her sleep and getting Alice drunk so she could molester her, which just crossed a line for me—is that she seldom seems to care about Alice’s feeling. I wonder if Alice is ever going to see how much Roxy has manipulated her, her car breaking down twice so Roxy conveniently (for Roxy anyway) has to give her a ride should give her a clue.I don’t know if Kelly is just stupid, desperate, delusional or all three. Roxy might get her revenge on Kristen or she might just push Kristen off her fence. I also can’t see Alice being happy if she ever finds out Roxy’s role, in trying to mess with her friend’s marriage.Re: Dana and star-grazing-I guess Alice doesn’t really know Dana that well, sad that Alice may never know how much the star gift that meant Dana. I wonder who I should be worried more regarding Dana, her mystery stalker or Sharon after she finds out the cabin burnt down?
I have a feeling this chapter is a turning point in the whole story. This chapter was about closure on the past. And it really feels like next chapter will be a new beginning. I’m not sure if it’s a good or a bad thing… And you still left me wondering…but I don’t have that many question this time. The only thing on my mind is that I so want to know who the mystery man is. Alice’s conversation with Roxy was really awkard. I have to agree with Bojangles, Roxy is freaking me out! Yet another evil masterplan has been plotted out by her. She is totally blinded by her love for Alice…or actually she is blinded by her obession with Alice. She’s just after winning the ultimate prize…and that’s Alice. Although Roxy can influence a lot of circumstances…her obsession is also her weak point. Alice just needs to figure out how Roxy’s obsession can be helpful to her (and Dana) in the end. An I was wondering, Dana was amazed by the kindness of strangers…one true observation in real life…but in the context to this story I can’t help to think that Dana will be unpleasantly suprised by that same kindness of a stranger (aka the mystery man?). I’m looking forward to the next chapter…anytime… ;)
Roxy- not so much a good person. Ha ha. This was an amazing chapter, and honestly, worth the wait! I’m super happy you decided to update! I had a long night at work, and it was the perfect thing to come home to! Great job, yet again, and I hope that you find it in your heart to treat us readers with another update soon! You’re awesome!
oh no poor kristin! Awesome Job Brteyes! this chap was reallt fused up just great. I agree with bojangles transfer Roxy out to looney land :P I think Roxy needs something rotten to land her way much like what everyone else is going threw BUT i know i know lol im still keeping a somewhat openCLOSED eye when it comes to roxy but like you said it really is easy to hate her so sue me lol Im glad the cabin is gone it really did hold on to a lot of bad memories AND! :jumps up and down: im not sure but i think i know who the mystery man is!but not really knowing is just exciting. I wonder what or who Dana will run into at this town who knows perhaps someone long lost? i cant wait for ur next update! consider me on edge!
roxy really is a piece of work.. i wonder who the guy is following dana?? i can’t wait to see what you have in store for these characters. awesome post!
Woehoe…I was jumping for joy when I saw that you updated! And an amazing update it really is. Who is that man following Dana? Good for him for burning down the evil cabin. I kinda like him yet I don’t know who he is…interesting! Roxy needs to stay the hell away from Kirsten… man she pisses me of, LOL! This chapter was really good brteyes and I hope life gives you a break and you can update again soon. Looking forward to some Danish interaction of any kind so don’t keep me waiting for too long. PS: I’ll stop stalking ClosetDana for updates I don’t want her thinking I’m some wacko like Roxy. See ya.
my god this is going to get wosre before it gets better I just hope that everything goes well in the end for alice and dana and also for kristen and derek and I can’t wait to see how you will end this but there is so much more to come before that I feel so please post soon