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Masked Feelings CH 49 Agony Continues
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Tina – I’ll make it up to you… I promise.
Bette – I don’t know how you’re going to do that… the day is almost over.
Tina – We’ll take a long weekend and go somewhere, just the three of us when this is all over.
Bette – I’ll check my schedule and we’ll work something out. I think going away sounds great and….. wait a minute… what do you mean when this is all over? When what is over?
Bette was eying her suspiciously…. knowing she wasn’t going to like what she was about to hear.
Tina – I was just thinking we should stick around to see if Dana or Alice needs us. You know I won’t be able to relax till I know they’re going to be alright.
Bette – Did Dana go home?
Tina – No… Kristen tried to talk to her but she refuses to go home.
Bette – Can’t say that I blame her. If I knew Alice was going to be there I definitely wouldn’t want to be there…. but I don’t shy away from confrontations either. Dana’s going to need a thick skin to see Alice face to face.
Tina – I want to go over there… to the house.
Bette – But you were just over there..
Tina – I want to see if Alice is there.
Bette – Here’s an idea… there is this invention called the phone… just pick up the damn phone and call her.
Tina – I tried that already. She’s not answering at the house or on her cell phone. I just brought her over here and she ran out without me knowing.
Bette – So she left… big deal. Why was she over here in the first place?
Tina – I told her she could stay here… till things cooled down or when she found another place.
Bette – Damn it, Tina… you could’ve asked me first.
Tina – She’s still our friend… and I figured this way Dana would get to come home to an empty house. I’m sure Dana would appreciate being alone right now. This way you get to do something for Dana even though you have to put up with Alice for awhile.
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wow… i’ve been following this story from the beginning. you really have me wondering what the heck is gonna happen. but, i like it. i’m really into it.
I feel better about Bette, and yes, Alice gets more sympathy now. definitely concerned about what happened to Dana…
The things you do to me brteyes, I have to say you know how to start a chapter off right. I like how you’ve kept this Danish relationship so interesting, the sex was incredible. It’s hard to imagine two people having the chemistry that Dana and Alice do, but I know it’s possible. I feel the same passion and love for my girlfriend, and the way you write makes it so easy to see in my mind. I love the transitions in this chapter, it really plays out like a television show. If I was Alice I can’t say I wouldn’t have done anything to keep Dana (but then again I wouldn’t have cheated but you get it). I think Alice really needs to see that counselor, she hasn’t dealt with anything that has happen to her and I think she’s being just as destructive as Dana is. It’s great that Bette is supporting Tina even though she doesn’t like what’s going on. This mystery man intrigues me very much I can’t wait to see who he is and what his agenda is….OMG it’s Tonya isn’t it? She turned herself into a man and now she’s scheming to win Dana back by paying Roxy to seduce Alice then being Dana’s rebound. Am I right? I’m so right lol? Well I guess this will have to be a shorter comment, I’m talking to my woman and she needs my undivided attention. Congratulations on another year and great chapter I can’t wait to see what happens to Dana. P.S. Shame on you for writing a cliffhanger, guess that 50th chapter is going to be a biggie huh?
Now this sex scene reminded me of the Alice and Roxy no limits sex with Alice (and Dana) giving into physical cravings knowing that the emotional price might be high, although in this case it was Alice trying to make a connection. I am worried about Dana (I am sure Roxy still wants to even the score and David is still out there) but I tend to worry about both Dana and Alice in this fic with all the twist and turns.
god I love this but where is dana and what has happened to her I hope that she is ok please post soon I love it great update as always
Hey, this is my first time leaving a comment, however, i have read all of ur previous chapters…but i gotta say this time…Daaaaaaaaaaang crazzzzzzzzy stuff…jeezh omagoodness! My heart skipped a beat there for a minute…Thanks so much for posting (either late or on time isallgood!)U r an awsome writer (prolly not the 1st time u hear dat; but it never hurts to hear it again, rite?) Luv ur story (duh) and can’t wait to hear from u soon (or not like i said isallgood), the way u write, each chapter is worth the wait. :) Lots of luv, THANKS AGAIN…later
If I haven’t commented on this fic before … damn did I pick a good one to start with. I have been reading this fic for quite some time & I’m not sure I can continue to read it anymore … simply put … I think you freakin’ melted my brain. That was one of the hottest 2 chapters I have read in recent memory … I’m so glad I read 48 & 49 at the same time. This wild rollercoaster ride you have taken all of us on is truly wonderful. Keep it coming … all puns intended.
I think this was a great chapter, really one of my favorites ever. I think you’re fabulous. You know that, just let me say it to you please.
Eek! Poor Danish! They never get a fucking break do they?! This chapter was hot and heartbreaking all at the same time! Great job, and I can’t wait to see what happened to Dana….or can I?
oh my god I’m so torn, that was so good, it definately left a lasting impression on me! I’m totally intrigued by this mystery man and all the underhand games that everyone’s playing. I’m very worried about Dana, but I’m still holding out hope that everything is going to work out. great update :)
Wow this chapter was intense! I like the bits of hope you’re giving me with Dana trying to fight off her connection with Alice but still feeling something there. That gives me hope that they will be able to find there way back together. Great update! Can’t wait till next week!
Wow…It’s hard to believe that chapter 50 is on it’s way and you have so much more to tell. Good to know though! This mystery man is really getting to me, who is he (she) and what are his intentions. The sex was hot and heartbreaking at the same time. What the hell happened to Dana…and I’m also glad Tina didn’t walk in on them, they need to sort some stuff out before talking to their friends. Thanks so much for this posting and I’m already looking forward to number 50!!..X
I thought I had to wait untill next Sunday! I felt so sorry for Alice and Dana…but this time a little bit more for Alice. It must be so heartbreaking for Alice to know that the woman she loves is totally shutting her out.Did Dana run off again, did Roxy kidnap her, or….(well, I don’t know)? There are enough people who are keeping an eye on Dana’s house…so somebody will know what happened to Dana. ;) And I’m still thinking about that ‘prophetic’ line Roxy used a whole lot of chapters ago…it still can come in handy. :DI think Dana will run into Lara’s twin brother very soon. (For a second I thought he could be the mystery man…but he is protecting Alice, so that wouldn’t make any sense…and in my head Lara’s brother is a moron, he is no way smart enough to be the mystery man). So the 50th chapter will be next, it is 2 times my favorite number, so that chapter must be a blast! :D And oh yes, I’m such a ‘spoiler-whore’…ofcourse I want to have one (or some) mysteries revealed! :D I’m off to work now, but you’ll be hearing from me (mmh, that sounds more like a threat…but it really isn’t :))!
Yeah it may not be happy but don’t worry, you aren’t about to lose me yet. I’m hooked.
Great chapter… but what have you done with Dana!!!! And who the heck is The Mystery Man???? You can’t keep me hanging like this!