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Masked Feelings CH 49 Agony Continues
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Alice – Dana?
She cried even harder, trying to turn away from Alice… but she held her to her chest, pressing her head to her shoulder.
Alice – Shhh….
Alice was afraid to speak… Dana seemed so fragile and she didn’t want to make her cry harder. All she could think of doing was giving Dana the comfort she needed… and she was in need. She slid her hands under her shirt, massaging her back. Dana couldn’t help but relax into her. Alice unfastened her bra and moved her hands around to Dana’s abdomen feeling the muscles tighten as she moved up her body. She waited for Dana to stop her, but she didn’t. She reached under the bra to cup her breast and lightly massaged it. Dana tipped her head back and closed her eyes. Alice kissed her neck in the spot that drove her absolutely crazy. Dana felt like her body was on fire…. it had been a long time since she’d been satisfied and that went back to when she was with Lara. The red-head was the last woman that she had full-contact sex with…. and she knew how to please. Regardless of the mind games that Lara liked to play, she knew what Dana needed…. to put her over the edge. And now it was Alice… pushing her buttons so skillfully. Dana decided that she didn’t have to like her. She just wanted the ache to be gone so she could move on.
Alice could tell that Dana was detached… there was a distance conveyed in her vacant eyes. The rest of her body was responding to her touch so Alice went on, hoping Dana would come back to her. She pulled the shirt over Dana’s head and removed the bra… staring at her body. The scar that she was afraid to touch or even look at was a source of great anxiety. It’s not like she hadn’t seen it since the attack but it reminded her of Lara and her overwhelming need to have Dana. But it also reminded her of the lengths Dana went to to save her life… Alice expression softened at the thought. She leaned over and kissed the scars as if to say she excepted everything about her. The scar that she had left on her heart was so much bigger then the one that Lara inflicted. Alice would have to learn to accept it and try to make it up to her…. if she ever could.
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wow… i’ve been following this story from the beginning. you really have me wondering what the heck is gonna happen. but, i like it. i’m really into it.
I feel better about Bette, and yes, Alice gets more sympathy now. definitely concerned about what happened to Dana…
The things you do to me brteyes, I have to say you know how to start a chapter off right. I like how you’ve kept this Danish relationship so interesting, the sex was incredible. It’s hard to imagine two people having the chemistry that Dana and Alice do, but I know it’s possible. I feel the same passion and love for my girlfriend, and the way you write makes it so easy to see in my mind. I love the transitions in this chapter, it really plays out like a television show. If I was Alice I can’t say I wouldn’t have done anything to keep Dana (but then again I wouldn’t have cheated but you get it). I think Alice really needs to see that counselor, she hasn’t dealt with anything that has happen to her and I think she’s being just as destructive as Dana is. It’s great that Bette is supporting Tina even though she doesn’t like what’s going on. This mystery man intrigues me very much I can’t wait to see who he is and what his agenda is….OMG it’s Tonya isn’t it? She turned herself into a man and now she’s scheming to win Dana back by paying Roxy to seduce Alice then being Dana’s rebound. Am I right? I’m so right lol? Well I guess this will have to be a shorter comment, I’m talking to my woman and she needs my undivided attention. Congratulations on another year and great chapter I can’t wait to see what happens to Dana. P.S. Shame on you for writing a cliffhanger, guess that 50th chapter is going to be a biggie huh?
Now this sex scene reminded me of the Alice and Roxy no limits sex with Alice (and Dana) giving into physical cravings knowing that the emotional price might be high, although in this case it was Alice trying to make a connection. I am worried about Dana (I am sure Roxy still wants to even the score and David is still out there) but I tend to worry about both Dana and Alice in this fic with all the twist and turns.
god I love this but where is dana and what has happened to her I hope that she is ok please post soon I love it great update as always
Hey, this is my first time leaving a comment, however, i have read all of ur previous chapters…but i gotta say this time…Daaaaaaaaaaang crazzzzzzzzy stuff…jeezh omagoodness! My heart skipped a beat there for a minute…Thanks so much for posting (either late or on time isallgood!)U r an awsome writer (prolly not the 1st time u hear dat; but it never hurts to hear it again, rite?) Luv ur story (duh) and can’t wait to hear from u soon (or not like i said isallgood), the way u write, each chapter is worth the wait. :) Lots of luv, THANKS AGAIN…later
If I haven’t commented on this fic before … damn did I pick a good one to start with. I have been reading this fic for quite some time & I’m not sure I can continue to read it anymore … simply put … I think you freakin’ melted my brain. That was one of the hottest 2 chapters I have read in recent memory … I’m so glad I read 48 & 49 at the same time. This wild rollercoaster ride you have taken all of us on is truly wonderful. Keep it coming … all puns intended.
I think this was a great chapter, really one of my favorites ever. I think you’re fabulous. You know that, just let me say it to you please.
Eek! Poor Danish! They never get a fucking break do they?! This chapter was hot and heartbreaking all at the same time! Great job, and I can’t wait to see what happened to Dana….or can I?
oh my god I’m so torn, that was so good, it definately left a lasting impression on me! I’m totally intrigued by this mystery man and all the underhand games that everyone’s playing. I’m very worried about Dana, but I’m still holding out hope that everything is going to work out. great update :)
Wow this chapter was intense! I like the bits of hope you’re giving me with Dana trying to fight off her connection with Alice but still feeling something there. That gives me hope that they will be able to find there way back together. Great update! Can’t wait till next week!
Wow…It’s hard to believe that chapter 50 is on it’s way and you have so much more to tell. Good to know though! This mystery man is really getting to me, who is he (she) and what are his intentions. The sex was hot and heartbreaking at the same time. What the hell happened to Dana…and I’m also glad Tina didn’t walk in on them, they need to sort some stuff out before talking to their friends. Thanks so much for this posting and I’m already looking forward to number 50!!..X
I thought I had to wait untill next Sunday! I felt so sorry for Alice and Dana…but this time a little bit more for Alice. It must be so heartbreaking for Alice to know that the woman she loves is totally shutting her out.Did Dana run off again, did Roxy kidnap her, or….(well, I don’t know)? There are enough people who are keeping an eye on Dana’s house…so somebody will know what happened to Dana. ;) And I’m still thinking about that ‘prophetic’ line Roxy used a whole lot of chapters ago…it still can come in handy. :DI think Dana will run into Lara’s twin brother very soon. (For a second I thought he could be the mystery man…but he is protecting Alice, so that wouldn’t make any sense…and in my head Lara’s brother is a moron, he is no way smart enough to be the mystery man). So the 50th chapter will be next, it is 2 times my favorite number, so that chapter must be a blast! :D And oh yes, I’m such a ‘spoiler-whore’…ofcourse I want to have one (or some) mysteries revealed! :D I’m off to work now, but you’ll be hearing from me (mmh, that sounds more like a threat…but it really isn’t :))!
Yeah it may not be happy but don’t worry, you aren’t about to lose me yet. I’m hooked.
Great chapter… but what have you done with Dana!!!! And who the heck is The Mystery Man???? You can’t keep me hanging like this!