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Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 60
each stroke
each probe of her tongue as if it were an implement stoking the firestorm beneath the container filled with her now boiling climax.
and the blistering flames became the driving force to push the sweltering climax from its container up and throughout Bette’s body – touching and sparking each nerve ending causing them to crackle open – sending multi-colored kite-tailed sparks shooting through her mind
And Bette’s arms stiffened, her hands clenched the headboard, her head flung back as the geyser force of her ***** sent her screams of pleasure upwards from her core; releasing them into the morning’s light.
Bette let her quaking body slowly relax, lift up and then stretch out to cover Tina’s.
A few moments passed as their hearts began to slow to a more normal beat.
“My god, T, what you do to me”
“Definitely my pleasure, baby.”
Bette softly kissed her T and let out a giggle.
“What, babe, what’s so funny?”
“Your face is literally covered with meoh, my”
“Well, how about helping me out here, umm?”
Bette began licking and cleaning her essence from Tina’s face, interspersing each lick with dipping her tongue in Tina’s mouth.
“Oh, yeah, this I like” Tina murmured.
“Yeah, T?”
“umm..umyou licking mewhat’s not to like”
Bette slid off Tina and gently pulled her up. “Turn over, T.” Tina quickly complied and was on all fours in front of Bette. Bette could see how wet and open she was. There were no words needed. Bette knew if she touched herself now as she took in the sight of Tina’s arousal, she would come yet again, but this time was for her T.
“In me, baby, I need you in me!” Tina said in a nearly pleading tone.
Bette licked her lips. She was in a momentary stupor taking in the beauty of her waiting T.
“Now, baby, please, NOW!” She was backing into Bette as she uttered her hard, urgent plea.
“I want you to feel my ***** inside you, T.” Bette ran her fingers through her near dripping lips.
Bette entered Tina with fingers thickly coated of herself and she thought Tina was going to collapse. She let out such a moan of rapture, but a sound that could not match the near scream of pleasure as Bette while thrusting, reached around with her other hand and was rolling her ***** between her thumb and index finger. Bette leaned forward and over Tina’s lower back, trailing her tongue along every inch of sweat-soaked skin she could reach.
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(37 votes, average: 4.38 out of 5)
RC, this chapter was so HOT; you burned a whole in my monitor!!
Have a safe, healthy and happy vacation.
WOW..just WOW..have a great vacation..
K
Just caught up. Love this story so much. Very hot chapter by the way. Hope you have a good vacation.
Enjoy your trip snd will see you soon. thanks
Awww, thank you soo much, rc!! I got all teary reading your special wish for me. :)
You know what I love about your writing? You not only write about what’s happening, but you also perfectly describe the depth of Bette and Tina’s feelings. You make me experience the emotions that they are going through. Beautiful chapter, rc. Thank you!! I hope you’re having fun at P-town!
Have a great trip and thanks for this hot chapter.
I don’t remember how to breathe.
My goodness. That ws …. WOW!!!!!!!!!! No words can adequately describe that scene. Have a great vacation and we will be waiting for that next installment in two weeks. Thank you.
OMG! Thank you and have a wonderful vacation.
WOW-EEEEE! Oh my, Oh my!
Thank you much ARCE, enjoy your vacation and trust me you have well earned it. See you when you come back. Can’t wait!
THIS HAS GOT TO BE THE GREATEST FANFIC I HAVE EVER READ IN MY LIFE!!!!!!NOTHING CAN EVER DESCRIBE HOW GREAT YOUR STORY WAS…..FUCKING MINDBLOWING!!!!!!!THANX!
Enjoy the holiday and come back refreshed!
Fabulous chapter! Have a great vacation! I’ll be waiting for your next entry, now that I am all wamr and fuzzy! =)
Holy Shit! Good thing my smoke alarm is in good working order! That was very HOT! Have a good vacation.
WOW…thanks, have a great trip!
OMG, that was hot. Enjoy your vacation in P.Town :)
have a good holiday – u definitely deserve it! and gues u be getting lots of loving as well ;)
Wow! That was a nice wake up call this am. I need to go take another shower now. That was indeed HOT! Thank you and have a safe and fun vacation.
OMG… now that was fucking HOT… i think everyone’s juices are flowing this morning… enjoy your vacation…
yes amanda, everybodys juices are flowing this mornng. i reall dot know how im suppose to go to the gym and spin after that. i can barely sit. thanks for that. have a good vacation and be safe and know well be here waiting for your return.
That was beautiful! You truly have a talent for writing a love scene without making it raunchy. I applaud you for that. Enjoy your vacation!
OMFG to the nth degree!! Right now I am sitting at the intersection of Mindblowing and Another Dimension just from reading this…
“My T’s touch can transform my dark night of fears into the bright sunlight of my confidence” how freakin’ loving is that…”I will love you until Bluebirds turn green…” Your tender words so artfully mixed with the HOT BOILING sex makes you a true artist in creating these powerful love scenes with our girls.
…your partner is one lucky gal. Thanks once more for sharing your talent with us and have a safe and happy vacation. Then get your butt back here to post!
Fantastic! Have a great vacation!
Damn I shouldn’t have read that at work. And there is not a cold shower for miles. Ummmmmm what to do. J/K great chapter thank you. Enjoy your vacation.
Arce,
AS for the last four or so chapter.
Yes, another stupendous shock to keep me open mouth and stunned into silence.
Faye’s suicide robs us of a necessary comeuppance however it is the ultimate sacrifice than Faye could offer as a means to repay her debt.
How Kerry and Bette will deal with this should prove interesting and alluring reading. Although Bette and Tina hot sex is certainly one novel way to deal with this news.
Perhaps all of that pent up emotion just had to explode out of both of them.
Your flair for the twist of the knife is remarkable as you tempt and taunt the readers down one alleyway only to spin a mirror and show us the flipside of our location. One minute we are at the start of the maze the next we are in the heart of it. This is a wonderful gift and thank you for your consistent high standards and prodigious posting. This melodrama has fairly zoomed long and yet kept the reader’s attention with every twist and turn. That is down to our phenomenal talent.
Thank you again,
Your Loyal Fan.
PS -have a great vacation and come back to us safe and sound with plenty of creative juices folding.
I like your style saying that there was wasy more to come.
Lucky us seems an adequate response.
FABULOUS & HOT chapter…..I DON’T KNOW WHY I READ YOUR STORY AT WORK, IT DRIVES ME CRAZY…Have a WONDERFUL vacation..THANKS…
have a great trip…!