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Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 60
Tina could feel Bette’s fingertips digging into her back as she rode the length of her fingers. The sound of Bette’s wet passion as it took hold and slid along her fingers caused Tina’s heart rate to soar. To not only feel but to hear the pleasure through Bette’s moans and the liquid ***** coating her fingers was cutting loose any mental control. Her mind only heard Bette’s words through her body –
No need to take me, T. I’m surrendering willingly my body, my heart, my soul
Tina kneeled down and wrapped her lips around Bette’s ***** and started sucking in time with her thrusting. She would alternate the sucking with licking and taking in on her tongue the sweet, hot honey drippings of her love. She still held her ***** and now pulled Bette’s body as tightly as she could forward into her face with each ride in. Bette’s hands were against the shower wall desperately trying to grab hold. Tina curled her fingers slightly to hit the spot that she knew would heighten this eruption even more. At the same time she could feel Bette’s ***** throbbing knowing it, too, was mounting to its crescendo.
“I’m there, Tdon’t stopplease don’t stop“ Bette put both her hands on Tina’s head and pressed into her even harder. Tina felt Bette’s walls clench around her fingers, her body trembling in the eagerness of climatic releaseand Tina nearly came herself as she felt the explosion on her fingers – her face – her mouth – her tongue. Tina held on tight as she felt Bette’s body give way to its release.
How I love this womanmy heart cannot contain the deep passion it holds for you. I can only scream its promise of eternity
“TINA!!! Ilove you..T, Oh my God.*****..”
“I’ve got you, babylet go.”
There’s never been anything like feeling my Bette come. Nothing and no one has ever made me feel so loved. It’s a tide of total surrender that washes from Bette and cascades over me.
Her every scream, every moan, every throb infuses my body with this submission of trust and letting go – of a love and a bond that is beyond definition. It’s been nearly overwhelming since we’ve been back together. I feel as if she cannot get enough of me or of me loving her. And I want more now
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(37 votes, average: 4.38 out of 5)
RC, this chapter was so HOT; you burned a whole in my monitor!!
Have a safe, healthy and happy vacation.
WOW..just WOW..have a great vacation..
K
Just caught up. Love this story so much. Very hot chapter by the way. Hope you have a good vacation.
Enjoy your trip snd will see you soon. thanks
Awww, thank you soo much, rc!! I got all teary reading your special wish for me. :)
You know what I love about your writing? You not only write about what’s happening, but you also perfectly describe the depth of Bette and Tina’s feelings. You make me experience the emotions that they are going through. Beautiful chapter, rc. Thank you!! I hope you’re having fun at P-town!
Have a great trip and thanks for this hot chapter.
I don’t remember how to breathe.
My goodness. That ws …. WOW!!!!!!!!!! No words can adequately describe that scene. Have a great vacation and we will be waiting for that next installment in two weeks. Thank you.
OMG! Thank you and have a wonderful vacation.
WOW-EEEEE! Oh my, Oh my!
Thank you much ARCE, enjoy your vacation and trust me you have well earned it. See you when you come back. Can’t wait!
THIS HAS GOT TO BE THE GREATEST FANFIC I HAVE EVER READ IN MY LIFE!!!!!!NOTHING CAN EVER DESCRIBE HOW GREAT YOUR STORY WAS…..FUCKING MINDBLOWING!!!!!!!THANX!
Enjoy the holiday and come back refreshed!
Fabulous chapter! Have a great vacation! I’ll be waiting for your next entry, now that I am all wamr and fuzzy! =)
Holy Shit! Good thing my smoke alarm is in good working order! That was very HOT! Have a good vacation.
WOW…thanks, have a great trip!
OMG, that was hot. Enjoy your vacation in P.Town :)
have a good holiday – u definitely deserve it! and gues u be getting lots of loving as well ;)
Wow! That was a nice wake up call this am. I need to go take another shower now. That was indeed HOT! Thank you and have a safe and fun vacation.
OMG… now that was fucking HOT… i think everyone’s juices are flowing this morning… enjoy your vacation…
yes amanda, everybodys juices are flowing this mornng. i reall dot know how im suppose to go to the gym and spin after that. i can barely sit. thanks for that. have a good vacation and be safe and know well be here waiting for your return.
That was beautiful! You truly have a talent for writing a love scene without making it raunchy. I applaud you for that. Enjoy your vacation!
OMFG to the nth degree!! Right now I am sitting at the intersection of Mindblowing and Another Dimension just from reading this…
“My T’s touch can transform my dark night of fears into the bright sunlight of my confidence” how freakin’ loving is that…”I will love you until Bluebirds turn green…” Your tender words so artfully mixed with the HOT BOILING sex makes you a true artist in creating these powerful love scenes with our girls.
…your partner is one lucky gal. Thanks once more for sharing your talent with us and have a safe and happy vacation. Then get your butt back here to post!
Fantastic! Have a great vacation!
Damn I shouldn’t have read that at work. And there is not a cold shower for miles. Ummmmmm what to do. J/K great chapter thank you. Enjoy your vacation.
Arce,
AS for the last four or so chapter.
Yes, another stupendous shock to keep me open mouth and stunned into silence.
Faye’s suicide robs us of a necessary comeuppance however it is the ultimate sacrifice than Faye could offer as a means to repay her debt.
How Kerry and Bette will deal with this should prove interesting and alluring reading. Although Bette and Tina hot sex is certainly one novel way to deal with this news.
Perhaps all of that pent up emotion just had to explode out of both of them.
Your flair for the twist of the knife is remarkable as you tempt and taunt the readers down one alleyway only to spin a mirror and show us the flipside of our location. One minute we are at the start of the maze the next we are in the heart of it. This is a wonderful gift and thank you for your consistent high standards and prodigious posting. This melodrama has fairly zoomed long and yet kept the reader’s attention with every twist and turn. That is down to our phenomenal talent.
Thank you again,
Your Loyal Fan.
PS -have a great vacation and come back to us safe and sound with plenty of creative juices folding.
I like your style saying that there was wasy more to come.
Lucky us seems an adequate response.
FABULOUS & HOT chapter…..I DON’T KNOW WHY I READ YOUR STORY AT WORK, IT DRIVES ME CRAZY…Have a WONDERFUL vacation..THANKS…
have a great trip…!