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Long and Winding Road – Finale
Tina laughed “Says the woman who made the same rash promise on Dan’s birthday and you were found asleep in the garden at 9 O’clock”
“Yeah – that was a foolish promise given that we were getting about three hours sleep a night – who would have thought that they could co-ordinate tag screaming sessions when they couldn’t talk “
Tina took hold of Jennifer and kissed her who made the same clucking noises as Bette had.
“God they are such quick learners “ Bette said “You have two brilliantly smart daughters T “
“Yes we do — who’d have thought a one night stand could produce a life time of happiness and love “
Bette rolled onto her back and lifted Kate up and started throwing her up and catching her. Kate giggled and kicked her feet – loving the action. If Bette did the same thing to Jennifer there would be tears and screams.
“If I have one regret in the last twelve months it has to be not being there in person when that snivelling turd Henry found out that he wasn’t their father “ Bette said
“Bette — no swearing in front of them – D A N can pick up a lot of words “
Bette laughed “ You okay dude ? “ she asked her son who was hugging Tina and Jennifer
“Dan is dude “ he replied “Dan is cool dude “
“Like Auntie Shane ? “
“Shane – yeah !! “
Shane loved the twins but there was a bond between Shane and Dan that was special. Shane could get Dan to do anything that Bette and Tina couldn’t. The other one of their friends who had a special bond with Danny was Helena – who doted on her God son.
They all played for another half an hour until the doorbell started to ring with all the little guests at their party. It was a riotous couple of hours with children everywhere and the house resounding with laughter and love and more demands for ice cream.
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Thamk you Ally, I so loved this story. What a Great ending. Thank you
Thank you for taking us on this wonderful journey With all the beautiful people that maded up this family. thanks
superb writing! thank you for the wonderful journey, Ally!
Perfect ending. I loved the story. Thanks!
Thank you for the story..i enjoyed alot :D
Another wonderful end to a wonderful story by Ally! Thank you for the incredible amount of time and talent you share with us!!
Very very sad that it is ended, thanks for the journey, glad it had a happy ending, what a wonderful story, thanks xx
it has been a pleasure following you on this long and winding road, memorable journey, thank you.
That was cute and sweet! I loved this story from the beginning and perhaps maybe you could give us stand alone chappy’s! Can’t wait for Lwing and L&P!
Ally, thank you for this journey you have shared with us. Girl you are the bees knees in Fanfic as your awards show!
A lovely ending…………
that was an awesome ending to an awesome story…as all yours are! thanks ally!!!
Yes Ally, thanks for all your hard work in putting this wonderful story together!
thanks ally… loved it from chapter 1…
wonderful ending for a wondeful story, you have hook with this story since the beginning and i like it so much the lovely ending!
When Dan came in and said Alice peed on the floor, I thought that he was talking about the human Alice. But then I remembered that he wanted to name the puppy Alice. Loved the kittens part being a cat person. Sweet and hopeful. Sorry to see this end but it was a blast while it lasted.
Thanks Ally.
that was simply wonderful! thanks alley.
ally what a great story women…im sadden its ended butt they are very happy. thank you for the hard word with all your stroies…
A little drama and angst, a lot of love and sexiness is a formula for success. Very enjoyable.
Excellent closer to this wonderful story – I’m glad you’ve got them all settled in England where you can watch over them. Thanks Ally for all your stories but for the sweetness of this with kids and all.
Sad to see this story ending but this is wonderful and excellent ending, the love they have is amazing and the kids are sweet and cutes, happy for them and the gang are all there to share the happy with them. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us and hope to see you soon, thanks!!!!
I loved this story, and it was light on the drama. But the L Word is full of drama and I miss it, I also miss Love and Pride can’t wait for tomorrow.
LMFAO@calling the dog Alice! And pregnant Alice sounds like all kinds of crazy. Sad to see the end of this but that means more time for L Wing and L&P and maybe a new story? Thanks! =)
This was a great ride and thanks so much for continualy sharing your gift. Its great reading a story with depth,and showing a love tht everyone dreams of one day finding. Looking forward to your postings on your other 2 stories.
Ally, this was such a magnificent story! I loved the ending. Beautifully written!
great writing, great ending, great story!!!!!!!!
Perfect ending, to a perfect story *tear… Amazing from start to finish. Thank for letting us share this beautiful story. Hopefully the writers on TLW will read it and come to their senses
Great finish to the story Ally!!! Fantastic job. I loved every minute of it. :)
Ally. Thanks for giving us your talent and time. Please continue with the L-Wing and Love and Pride. I never tire of your stories. PPS
Jo — yes i bet you like being on top. could i even suggest that being on top of a certain brunette called JB would allow you to die happy = hey i’d even take the other position for either J or L x
Ooooo, I’m on top!!! I like being on top!
I’m really sad to see this story end. I’ve loved it from the beginning. Thanks for sharing this with us Ally.
I just love happy endings!!!! Thanks for this beautiful one!
Beautiful story, thanks for keeping my TiBette heart alive.
Alley thanks for the beautiful story, it was great ride
See… no drama, just soft and fluffy and just so darn cute. “Alice pee’d on the floor” I LOL’d at that. Enjoyed every step of their journey mate, they’ve come along way, and in a way only you can write. Loved it, even if they seemed a little clamish…
Awww. Such a sweet chapter with the friends and the kids. Perfect ending to a perfect story Ally. Thanks. “Alice peed on floor” Now that was priceless! LOL :)) Hope to see another wonderful story from you.
What a sweet ending. I loved “Alice peed on the floor.” LOL!
Great story, great ending. Thanks for writing.
Ally, thank you for sharing this stroy with us. I think that they should keep the puppy’s name.
An amazing finale of an amazing story. I’ll never forget this one, I treasured it like a baby. Thanks for sharing this with us Ally.
I hope you don’t mind, but I just had to let you know that this was a perfect ending to a wonderful story. Thank You!
such a perfect ending…this was a long but beautiful ride, with little drama and a lot of laughter…”Alce peed on a floor” LOL for a moment there i thought Alice’s water broke LOL
I can hardly blame the puppy given the prospect of being named after Alice. Well, Ally, all’s well that ends well. Really sweet and of course we all wish we could create such a loving family for ourselves (children optional, personally I’d rather have the dog. As the newly late, great Anita O’Day used to sing “Thank you, thank you, thanks for the boogie ride”.
awwwwww…I loved this story so much…I am sad to see it end but I am glad it had a happy ending. Thank you for bringing us this wonderful story and thank you for completing it. It will be read again & again & again.-a loyal fan.
i hate to see this story end. i’ve been reading it from the beginning & loved it. Maybe we will see a sequence later. thanks for a wonderful story. You are a very talented writer.
Yeah, great one with “Alice peed on the floor”!!!! LOL… I’m so hoping for “Alice is sniffing Auntie Shane’s ass!” Well, I guess Dan wouldn’t say “ass” though… So they all want the British citizenship, huh? Well, I guess you’re right, England seems to suit them much better… Look at L&P! Ally, you’re fucking amazing, sweetie! That story was wonderful and thanks for the perfect ending with some B/T loving… There was so much love radiating from this story! Thanks a million! Hugs ;)
thank you very much for sharing this wonderfull story with us ally.
Great Story with Bette and Tina at their very best!! Love it when they are a couple dealing together with issues. Thanks Ally.