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Just The Girl 2.0 – Chapter Twenty Four, Part Four (based loosely on HYD: Returns)
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“Heh.” Her caught-in-the-act girlfriend let out a small chuckle, and in the process, also tickled her tummy with her hot breath. “I see you’re up.” Bette said from within, even though she was sure that the brunette couldn’t see a thing inside her shirt apart from her bra-clad breasts. Wait a minute.. Tina looked down again. Her bra was pushed all the way up to the neck of her thermal garb. And with the padding on the bra cups pushing against the material of her shirt, it appeared as if she had four breasts. The blonde poked the lump with a finger. “What the heck are you doing in there?”
“Testing a theory.” Bette grinned cheekily, pulling out her head from under Tina’s shirt, finally revealing herself to the blonde. Quickly, she placed a peck on the blonde’s exposed bellybutton.
“A theory about what?”
“The cold.”
Tina looked at the girl in complete and utter puzzlement.
“The cold..” Bette repeated with an impish grin, knowing that an explanation was in order. With sparkling eyes, she lifted Tina’s shirt once more and peered inside. “They say its bad for the skin, but good for the nipples.” She looked at Tina again and winked. “Very good for the nipples.”
Tina laughed gregariously and grabbed a hold of Bette’s face with both her hands. Pulling the brunette towards her, she planted a big one on her girlfriend’s lips and nuzzled noses with her mischievous love. “And why did you test your theory on me, hm? Why didn’t you test it on yourself?” She challenged with a playful eyebrow raise and a smile.
“Where’s the fun in that?” Bette shrugged with all her angelic charm. “Besides, I’ve been seeing my perfect nipples all my life. I’ve been missing looking at yours for months.”
“You do, huh?”
“Mm-hmm.” Bette gave a serious nod. She placed another kiss on the blonde’s soft lips. “And guess what..”
“What?”
“They looked really happy to see me.” Bette shared, grinning from ear to ear.
Tina couldn’t help but laugh. “And how sure are you that they were happy?”
“They pebbled under my gaze!” Bette argued, her face comically serious. “I would say that it looked like they were waving at me too, but then that’s just because you’re breathing and so naturally, your chest goes up and down and makes your pretty pink nipples move along with it.” She shrugged. She tried to suppress a smirk, but it kept tugging at the side of her lips. “They’re happy, baby. I’m sure they are. Besides, if they were unhappy with me, I’m sure they’d shrivel and wither the moment I laid my eyes on them. You know, like they do when you’re not horny?”
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Thanks for the update. Your chapters are always worth waiting for. :)
ireally love this story, and im sad that its nearly over.I hope that you continue to write more storys.Thank you so much.
Great chapter, just sad to see the story come to an end!
I am going repeat everybody’s sentiment of how sad it is that this lovely story is coming to an end, but hope that u will continue entertaining us with other stories:))
Always a pleasure to read your posts.. Fun and sexy chapter.. Thank you for posting. PPS
Your writing ability is beyond words. The dialog is incredible with all the ins and outs of each character. There is humor, drama, friendship, plenty of sex and best of all LOVE. The F4 group including Dana and Tina come to life with your skilled story telling. I will miss this story and hope down the road that you will continue to engage your readers with more of your wit, charm, and fun loving characters and stories.
Love it! Love it! Love it! Thanks for the post!
Hello! I’ve personally been a silent reader forever, but i have to say i’ve fallen COMPLETELY in love with your story, and am sad to watch it end, it’s held me captivated from the beginning, so thank you VERY much! Can’t wait for the last post :)
Oh how I love your sense of humor. Love stoned that is just the best, chopping on weed all night. I’m still rolling in laughter. Great chapter thanks for sharing with us.
you could never disappoint however many times i read this,it just gets better
I was laughing at the the chopping on weed all night too, but i am sad that this story is ending i do look forward to reading it but i also look forward to see what is comming next.
Love this story and will be sad to see it come to an end! Thanks for the quick post. Can’t wait to see what will come next.
alch!!!thanks for this chapter. haven’t commented lately but i’ve enjoyed your writing as usual.so sorry to see this story end but im sure you’ll think of other stories to share with us.good luck with your move!!!salamat!!!
Thanks for the great read as always, I’ll be sad when it comes to an end. Will we get to find out the whole story with Eric, Melvin, etc. and why they made it seem he got fired?
NOOOOOO… not the end… please you have to continue… this story is to good to stop… think about it… sleep on it…lol… and keep writing… part 3…pps
Great as usual! So, you said this is the end of 2.0–does that mean there will be a 3.0? Please? Pretty please? PPS
Can’t believe just waiting for the conclusion to this story. Truly enjoyed this story Alchemy, so much could only wish it would never end. But thank you really enjoyed your writing