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    I’ve Got You Under My Skin – Chapter 5

    sweet, innocent girl and I will hurt you.  Got it?”
     
    Bette:  “Kit (acting disgusted), I am only window shopping, I am not buying!”
     
    Kit:  “Yeah, you say that now . . . (Bette turns her attention back to Tina) Bette, look at me.”
     
    Bette:  “What?”
     
    Kit:  “You aren’t looking at me!”
     
    Bette: (glances over to Kit)  “What?”
     
    Kit:  “If you have any unhonorable intentions with Tina you will be one sorry *****!”
     
    Bette:  “Kit, relax.  I am just going to get to know her.”
     
    Kit:  “Uh, huh . . . I’ve seen that look before.”
     
    Kit has seen that look before in Bette’s eyes, but it has been quite sometime.  As Kit
    starts reflecting to herself, she realizes that Bette’s fascination of Tina is more than just
    sexual.  She can see that Bette is authentically taken back by Tina.  Kit thinks to herself,
    “Hmmm . . . maybe my pootie chasing sister is ready to settle down with a nice girl like
    Tina.”
     
    Bette:  “Thanks for bringing and fixing me the Chinese.  It was good.”
     
    Kit:  “No problem.  What are sisters for?”
     
    Bette:  “Are you going to come out and swim?”
     
    Kit:  “Yeah, I’ve gotta go grab my suit.”
     
    Bette:  “Come on, live a little on the wild side.  You don’t need a suit.”
     
    Kit:  “That’s easy for you to say Miss Universe, but when you get to be my age there are
    just something’s that should be left hidden.  *****, I don’t even want to look at it.”
     
    Bette:  “Whatever.  Hurry up and join us.”
     
    Bette walks outside strips down to nothing but her lace panties and dives into the pool.
     
    Dana: “Ah, excuse me . . . has it been 20 minutes since you have eaten?  You know the rule.”
     
    Bette:  “What are you, a *****’ lifeguard?”
     
    Dana:  “I am just watching out for you.” 
     
    Bette:  (as Bette starts to speak, she begins to walk towards Dana) “Yeah, well, I don’t
    need rescuing . . . (grabs Dana) it’s you that’s going to need to be rescued (dunks Dana
    under the water.”
     
    Bette and Dana banter, splash and wrestle back and forth for a couple minutes while the

    Comments

    1. I’ve just done the Eveyln Wood speed reading course catching up with this story. Love it, its so cute and refreshing. You’ve got the two bozos (Alice/Dana) down, and our two girls, hook up coming. I’m with the others, kinda was waiting for them both to realize they had bumped into each other before. Totally looking forward to your next update.

    2. Well that’s good, they got to know each other before jumping to a quick judgement, because of their little accident. Lucky for Bette, that’s for sure. It figures Bette didn’t recognize Tina from their morning run-in. Hope this smoothes things over some, before Tina realizes who Bette is. Great post. More, please.

    3. I really like your story and was excited to see your post tonight (I was just about to log off). I thought their first meeting would happen entirely different and wondered how they would ever get past their disgust for each other to like each other. So, this is an interesting turn although it is hard to believe that Bette did not recognize the farm girl’s voice, but that is infatuation (or love) for you.

      Anyway, remember to keep having fun with your writing and we will continue to have fun reading it!

    4. I like that Tina couldn’t see too well and got to know Bette’s heart a little. It’ll probably be a big shock for her when she sees Bette on Wednesday, huh? Hee, hee.

    5. i think bette was more angry than anything to really see who she was yelling at. to her it could have been anyone, something like blind rage. tina would more remember what she looked like. and remember when bette saw kit after she said that she should not have yelled at the woman and that she was already angry.
      anyway i love love love this story.

    6. LMAO @ Kit’s Miss Universe comment.

      Tina is blind as a fucking bat…this is too funny. This is the first story that I have read in which she cant see. I just look forward to when she finds out the her Monday morning bitch was Bette.

      What I dont get is why Bette didnt recognize Tina?

      Post again soon….

    7. i never expected this that tina would not see bette. i know bette would not recognize her because she was so mad she probably could not see straight. cannot wait for tina to see bette. sh*t is goint to hit the fan. lol

    8. I really like your story. The fact that Tina can’t see a thing without her contacts or glasses is sooo funny. I’m glad she got to know Bette alittle without seeing her…maybe once she “sees” her she won’t be too quick to judge her outburst. Can’t wait for the next chapter.

    9. yeah, porTARD why didnt bette recognize her. and tina saw her in the photos at her house. but being blind was slick. cant wait to see if they ever really recognize it was them. if they were in such embarassment (t) and anger (b) maybe they never really lookied. what to see whata you do with this. post soon.

    10. u r nothing but a tease, oh well, i just can’t wait for tina 2 c bette’s face and realize she was the one who so rudely insulted her and called her farm girl, please post soon.

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