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    I’ve Got You Under My Skin – Chapter 5

     
    Bette:  “You must be Tina.  I am Bette, Bette Porter.”
     
    Tina:  “Hi, Bette, I feel like I already know you from what Kit has told me about you.”
     
    Bette:  “Don’t believe a word of it.  She was always the jealous older sister.”
     
    Kit (from the kitchen):  “I heard that baby sis!”
     
    Tina:  “No, no, Kit has said nothing but wonderful things about you.  She is so proud of you and I can understand why she would be . . . (nervously) I am so sorry about almost running into you.  I am such a klutz and without my contacts or glasses, I am a hazard.”
     
    Bette:  “Don’t worry about it.  I am just glad that we finally have met.  Kit has said so
    many kind things about you as well (standing almost in a daze) . . . um, why don’t we join
    her in the other room.”
     
    Tina:  “Okay, that sounds great.  Hey and I bet you are starving.”
     
    Kit:  “Bette, your dinner is ready.”
     
    Bette:  “I am coming.”
     
    Kit:  “I see you met Tina.”
     
    Bette:  “Yes, yes we met in the hallway.”
     
    Tina:  “Kit, I almost had my third accident today!”
     
    Kit:  “Tina honey, you have just bought your friend’s breakfast tomorrow!  Remember, we
    weren’t going to talk about anything that happened today?”
     
    Tina:  “Ah, *****!  I forgot.  That’s okay.  I owe all of you after today.”
     
    Bette:  “Kit, I won’t tell if you don’t tell.”
     
    Kit:  “Okay, okay . . . since you are new to L.A. and all . . . I will let it slide.  But
    you better not make reference to anything else from today or I will bust you!”
     
    Tina:  “I promise . . . Listen, I will go outside and let you eat your dinner.  You’ll be
    joining us, right?”
     
    Bette:  “Yeah, I plan on taking a dip . . . but, you don’t have to leave, really it’s okay.”
     
    Tina:  “I will let you and Kit catch up . . . I will see you in a minute.”
     
    Tina walks through the french doors into the beautifully landscaped and lit yard.  Even

    Comments

    1. I’ve just done the Eveyln Wood speed reading course catching up with this story. Love it, its so cute and refreshing. You’ve got the two bozos (Alice/Dana) down, and our two girls, hook up coming. I’m with the others, kinda was waiting for them both to realize they had bumped into each other before. Totally looking forward to your next update.

    2. Well that’s good, they got to know each other before jumping to a quick judgement, because of their little accident. Lucky for Bette, that’s for sure. It figures Bette didn’t recognize Tina from their morning run-in. Hope this smoothes things over some, before Tina realizes who Bette is. Great post. More, please.

    3. I really like your story and was excited to see your post tonight (I was just about to log off). I thought their first meeting would happen entirely different and wondered how they would ever get past their disgust for each other to like each other. So, this is an interesting turn although it is hard to believe that Bette did not recognize the farm girl’s voice, but that is infatuation (or love) for you.

      Anyway, remember to keep having fun with your writing and we will continue to have fun reading it!

    4. I like that Tina couldn’t see too well and got to know Bette’s heart a little. It’ll probably be a big shock for her when she sees Bette on Wednesday, huh? Hee, hee.

    5. i think bette was more angry than anything to really see who she was yelling at. to her it could have been anyone, something like blind rage. tina would more remember what she looked like. and remember when bette saw kit after she said that she should not have yelled at the woman and that she was already angry.
      anyway i love love love this story.

    6. LMAO @ Kit’s Miss Universe comment.

      Tina is blind as a fucking bat…this is too funny. This is the first story that I have read in which she cant see. I just look forward to when she finds out the her Monday morning bitch was Bette.

      What I dont get is why Bette didnt recognize Tina?

      Post again soon….

    7. i never expected this that tina would not see bette. i know bette would not recognize her because she was so mad she probably could not see straight. cannot wait for tina to see bette. sh*t is goint to hit the fan. lol

    8. I really like your story. The fact that Tina can’t see a thing without her contacts or glasses is sooo funny. I’m glad she got to know Bette alittle without seeing her…maybe once she “sees” her she won’t be too quick to judge her outburst. Can’t wait for the next chapter.

    9. yeah, porTARD why didnt bette recognize her. and tina saw her in the photos at her house. but being blind was slick. cant wait to see if they ever really recognize it was them. if they were in such embarassment (t) and anger (b) maybe they never really lookied. what to see whata you do with this. post soon.

    10. u r nothing but a tease, oh well, i just can’t wait for tina 2 c bette’s face and realize she was the one who so rudely insulted her and called her farm girl, please post soon.

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