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I Will Follow You Into The Dark – Chapter Seventeen
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“No, I broke up with him.”
“Woah, why did you do that?”
Tina. Tina, Tina, Tina. “Well, it just… I couldn’t do it anymore. I couldn’t live with the lies anymore.”
“I’m so proud of you, Bette. Which girl made you do this thing you couldn’t do for me?”
“No, there’s no other girl,” I lied. I didn’t know why I lied. Maybe I was scared I would lose Fiona again if I told her about Tina. She wouldn’t want me to come with her, and she would think that she had no chance with me anymore. She has no chance with you, Porter. Tina, Tina, Tina. Look at what she’s given you, what she’s done for you!
“And well, Fiona, to be honest, you didn’t seem to have a problem with me still being involved with Billy. Sometimes I thought it turned you on, it made it all so much more exciting.”
“That makes me sound like someone who doesn’t care about you; I do care about you, a lot. So much that I can’t live without you, I need you by my side.”
“Why did you leave then? You managed all those months without me.” I couldn’t help it, but I sounded bitter.
“I’ve tried to come to you for all this time, but I couldn’t escape.” Why did I have this feeling she was lying to me? Why did I have a feeling all of this was a lie, was a reason to get me to do something that I wouldn’t like? She knew what a power she had over me and it was like she wanted to use that.
She squeezed my hand and stroked a lock of hair behind my ear. She gazed into my eyes, dreamily. Her sparkling green eyes… how many times had I looked into them, telling her how much I loved her?
She came closer, lying her hand in my neck. She pulled me into a soft, tender kiss. She eased her tongue into my mouth. I wanted to stop it at first, but it was such a familiar feeling, it felt so good… I went along with it.
“Fiona, I missed you so much,” I whispered. I felt the tears brimming in my eyes.
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I am first, wow that’s a first
You know, I can hit Bette gladly, My God why is she doing this to Tina? Is she out of her mind? I just can’t believe it, I’m shocked, maybe as they all are, I mean I understand all the feelings that she’s having because she didn’t get a closure, but does she have to ignore everything she have with Tina and just walk away, My God I feel very upset and I am not sure I could handle it if she really turned out to be such a jerk. Thank you so much, you write beautifully but I am really disappointed in Bette and the turned of events.
Bette she burned you once…she’ll do it again! Maybe she found out you were with someone and came back just to ruin that. Run away from that mess while you still can and go to Tina! PPS
Oh Come on Bette. Don’t be fooled.
It looks like Fiona is going to pimp bette out to pay her debt,and foolish Bette is so “in love” with her that she can”t see what is good and decent in front of her…….who knows ,maybe Tina is too good for her…..let’s hope Tina does not give up on Bette
U are so bad to leave it there!!! bette would be a fool to leave with fiona.. i don’t trust her she has something up her sleeve!! :)PPS
i should hunt u down and strangle u on tina’s and my own behalf…stupid bette, stupid…what is she taking bette to be a sex slave now that she’s a used up ho? get a brain bette!!! u had beta post soon and get these grlz the balls to go afta bette and stop this nonsense!!!! RIGHT NOW.
SO BETTE’S gonna follow Fiona into the dark??!!!! That’s not love.
Well this explains the title…it’s Tina that’s going to follow Bette into the dark and rescue her from her own stupidity. Great twist, Genner… PPS!
I’m really not liking Bette too much right now. And Tina should not forgive her if she follows Fiona..Bette doesn’t deserve Tina
Ahh, no! Please don’t leave us hanging long!