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Gonna get to livin’ – Chapter 24
Alice could not take the slightest, flimsiest barrier between her and Danas` skin. Danas` hand had already made it to the front of Alices` blouse where she was undoing the buttons as quickly as possible. Alice placed her hands on Danas` shoulders and while flicking her tongue lightly over Danas` lips, she moved her hands towards Danas` neck slowly and then placed her thumbs in the collar of Danas` shirt. She slowly pushed it over each shoulder and smoothed it down to midway down Danas` muscular biceps. Then she pulled at the collar and bunched the loose material behind Danas` back and held it with her one hand. Dana took in a sharp intake of breath as shockingly she realised she had been loosely restrained by her own shirt. Alice pulled back slightly and grinned. Dana realised how so turned on she was. Alice took her free hand and slipped it inside Danas` shirt. Moving slowly over her soft skin she slid it around to her back. She kissed Dana with force then with the greatest of ease she flicked her fingers and Danas` restraining bra clasp came undone and Alice rushed to move her hand around the front and underneath to take one naked breast in her hand. Dana was now panting and Alice could feel her chest rising and falling heavily. Still with her hold on Danas` shirt, Alice moved her mouth but trailing and flicking her tongue down from her mouth leaving a wet trail down to Danas` pulse point. She sucked and licked it making Dana hotter and sweatier, and also wetter between her legs. It was having the same effect on Alice too. She sucked on Danas` pulse point which would obviously be bruised tomorrow. Slowly rubbing and squeezing Danas breast she then lightly pinched and tweaked her nipple which was now so erect and with her mouth she moved to nibble on Danas` collar bone. Dana threw her head back and rolled it from side to side in ecstasy.
Not being able to take anymore and wanting to feel more of Alice, Dana struggled to gain some power. Alice decided she needed to touch more of Dana too so she released the tight hold of the shirt and with both hands slid it completely off, tossing it to one side. Placing her hands on Danas` shoulders, she moved the straps of her bra off and removed it, throwing it onto the back of the sofa. While Alice was doing this, Dana was making light work of the rest of Alices` buttons, almost ripping it off Alices` back. She reached behind and partly from lack of recent experience but more so from frustration and sexual urgency, struggled to get her bra off. Finally free, Alices` breasts were taken by both of Dana hands and she cupped them and leant forward. She took one in her mouth and sucked and licked while using her thumb to rub the other, then tweaking it between her finger and thumb. Alice wrapped her one arm around Danas` strong shoulders and one around Danas` head, pulling it into her for optimum contact. They slowly rocked backwards and forwards in unison, both gasping at how their legs had shifted so both women were experiencing a gentle pressure on their clits with each others legs.
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(31 votes, average: 3.81 out of 5)
I am with MaGoose and uhhuh. Burning all those magazines was a perfect gesture to start anew. A turned up the a/c earlier so that she could light a fire, lol. Actually, I think you wrote them hotter than the roaring fire. Great job, chillipepper!
Hot, hot hot! I know you were nervous about this chapter, but, I think you handled it perfectly. I love that you had a Danish moment of Alice hitting her head on the fridge. Great job in using the magazines for the fire. Alice doesn’t need them anymore. The NC-17 was written just right. You had the raw passion, but, also the love and respect. Excellent chapter, chillipepper!! BTW: You know I am still loving this story – you can take as many chapters as you want to finish it as far as I’m concerned. I’ll be here to read each one. Thanks!!
I echoed Magoose here, this chapter is nothing but HOT HOT HOT! The intimate moments between the two was very well written. And pls continue with this story, I love it very very much! Thanks and PPS!
I loved it! It was totally hot. I think you melted my coputer. But anyway I think you should continue on for many many chapters because will continue to read. This story is great.
How hot can that be!…Your description was so detailed that I got goosebumps…I love the part where dana was frustrated bec. she can’t get the hook of alice bra…great story…thanks…
All I really want to say is the story is great and please don’t forget about it and update it or even better finish it soon…