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Gonna get to livin’ – Chapter 24
That was all it took. Dana softly pushed Alice back onto the rug. She then looked deep into Alices` eyes and wondered if the flames reflected in her eyes were really that of the fire or something more. Alice looked into Danas` which had become completely black. Dana moved her body between Alices` legs and started to peck at Alices` luscious lips. She then requested entry with her tongue which Alice did readily. They kissed as if it were the last time and Dana ran one hand from Alices` neck, down between her breasts and down to her stomach which she stroked and Alice shuddered. Dana kissed Alices` neck and moved to her left nipple.. She took it in her mouth and swirled her tongue around it and Alice moaned with pleasure. Dana deftly removed Alices` skirt and panties off. Danas` hand had travelled to Alices` right thigh and moved up and down brushing her mound. She moved her mouth to Alices right breast and sucked and nipped at it until Alice panted, her hand had started to run up and down her thigh but on the inside of the leg. Alice lifted her head and pleaded for Dana to hurry. Dana beamed at Alices` request for urgency and looked Alice in the eye and could see deep into her soul. She trailed her tongue directly down Alices` body and moved her legs apart and went to her mound. Dana opened Alice up and saw how wet she was. She looked at her and said, “My, my, you are wet Miss Pieszecki”, in a sultry voice. Alice panted back that she had been since Dana climaxed. Dana looked quizzical. Alice looked at her and said how she was so close to coming too, smiled and said yes just by hearing Dana scream her name.
That was it Dana devoured Alice. She licked the length of Alices` opening then started to swirl her tongue in circles at Alices` clit. Alice started to shudder and begged Dana to enter her. She did this with her tongue when suddenly Alice grabbed Danas` hair at the back and tugged slightly. Shocked, Dana looked concerned. Alices` head was thrown back and her eyes closed but she knew exactly Danas` reaction. She huskily requested Dana to use her fingers, she wanted Dana to be kissing her when she came. Dana didn’t need to be asked twice. She rubbed Alices` clit with her thumb and entered her with two fingers. While pumping in and out in time with the rise and fall of Alices` hips Dana went to Alice and kissed her with urgency.
Alice could taste herself on Danas` lips and that was it, she was on the brink of climaxing.
This spurred Dana on as she slid her fingers in and out of Alice slowly to begin with then built up the pace and pressure as she did with her lips on Alices`. As she flicked her tongue over the end of Alices` she used her thumb to brush Alices` clit. Alice started to buck at the hips, meeting Danas pace with her fingers. She started to pant and moan louder. Dana was stifling her moans with her mouth until Dana hit Alices` ‘g’ spot almost instinctively at the perfect moment and Alice was sent over the edge. She scratched down Danas` back who also arched her back too and Alice elicited a scream as she came quickly and hard. Dana kept the pace as Alice shuddered from head to toe. Alice thrashed around and Dana moved from her head to her neck and licked the moisture, sucking at her pulse point again. Alice came screaming Danas` name. It was like an earthquake wracked her body and Dana kissed and held her until she came down.
Alice was in the same state as Dana had been, almost drained of every drop of energy. She led on her side by Alice who was on her back and watched her as she returned to earth. Dana smiled and asked Alice if she was ok. Alice said she was so better than ok, it was if she knew every inch of her body and what she wanted. She looked at Dana and told her how she knew she completed her.
She was finally complete …
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(31 votes, average: 3.81 out of 5)
I am with MaGoose and uhhuh. Burning all those magazines was a perfect gesture to start anew. A turned up the a/c earlier so that she could light a fire, lol. Actually, I think you wrote them hotter than the roaring fire. Great job, chillipepper!
Hot, hot hot! I know you were nervous about this chapter, but, I think you handled it perfectly. I love that you had a Danish moment of Alice hitting her head on the fridge. Great job in using the magazines for the fire. Alice doesn’t need them anymore. The NC-17 was written just right. You had the raw passion, but, also the love and respect. Excellent chapter, chillipepper!! BTW: You know I am still loving this story – you can take as many chapters as you want to finish it as far as I’m concerned. I’ll be here to read each one. Thanks!!
I echoed Magoose here, this chapter is nothing but HOT HOT HOT! The intimate moments between the two was very well written. And pls continue with this story, I love it very very much! Thanks and PPS!
I loved it! It was totally hot. I think you melted my coputer. But anyway I think you should continue on for many many chapters because will continue to read. This story is great.
How hot can that be!…Your description was so detailed that I got goosebumps…I love the part where dana was frustrated bec. she can’t get the hook of alice bra…great story…thanks…
All I really want to say is the story is great and please don’t forget about it and update it or even better finish it soon…