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Gonna get to livin’ – Chapter 24
and I want to be somebody’s everything.
Dana was mesmerised by the look she was giving her. Alice continued ….
‘Cause all I want is everything, is that too much to ask?
Have romance, love and passion; find magic that will last.
And I want someone to think they’ll die if they can’t be with me.
I want to be their joy, their pride, their dreams, the very air they breathe.
I want to wake up feelin’ loved and go to bed the same.
Yes, I want to be somebody’s everything …
Alice looked down at the guitar as she finished the song with her nimble fingers playing the last few chords and then looked up again at Dana. Dana smiled the sexiest smile Alice had ever seen and commented on how wonderful and poignant it was. Alice quickly put the guitar away to one side and picked up her glass and took a drink.
Alice – "Was it ok?"
Dana – "Ok? You have the most beautiful voice and you are so talented on the guitar. It took my breath away! Can I be your everything?"
Alice – "On one condition … I can be yours?"
Dana took Alices hand and pulled her towards her – "You already are Alice!"
That was all it took. Alice went across to Dana on her knees and straddled her outstretched legs at her thighs. Their mouths clashed with a raw passion generated from sexual tension building since they first laid eyes on each other just a few days ago, but in which time so much had happened! Alice had her hands on either side of Danas` face and Dana placed hers on Alices arse. Alice slid her hands down and slipped Danas` suit jacket off and flung it across the room.
Alice captured Danas` tongue with her mouth and sucked roughly on it then Dana took control by putting her hands in her hair and bringing her with force towards her mouth where she sucked and bite Alices` lips with bruising kisses. Alice was shocked at Danas forcefulness and moaned in ecstasy at the thrill of the pleasure and pain which was making her so wet between her thighs. Alices` hands then moved to the top of Danas` blouse and started to undo the buttons with deft ability, not once losing contact between her lips and Danas`. Her hands moved to the side and roughly pulled the blouse from the restriction of the waist band of Danas` trousers. The blouse fell open and immediately went inside to feel the swell of her breasts through the fabric of Danas sheer lace bra. Dana moaned and went to Alices shoulders, pulling her in to deepen the kiss more than either girl thought possible.
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(31 votes, average: 3.81 out of 5)
I am with MaGoose and uhhuh. Burning all those magazines was a perfect gesture to start anew. A turned up the a/c earlier so that she could light a fire, lol. Actually, I think you wrote them hotter than the roaring fire. Great job, chillipepper!
Hot, hot hot! I know you were nervous about this chapter, but, I think you handled it perfectly. I love that you had a Danish moment of Alice hitting her head on the fridge. Great job in using the magazines for the fire. Alice doesn’t need them anymore. The NC-17 was written just right. You had the raw passion, but, also the love and respect. Excellent chapter, chillipepper!! BTW: You know I am still loving this story – you can take as many chapters as you want to finish it as far as I’m concerned. I’ll be here to read each one. Thanks!!
I echoed Magoose here, this chapter is nothing but HOT HOT HOT! The intimate moments between the two was very well written. And pls continue with this story, I love it very very much! Thanks and PPS!
I loved it! It was totally hot. I think you melted my coputer. But anyway I think you should continue on for many many chapters because will continue to read. This story is great.
How hot can that be!…Your description was so detailed that I got goosebumps…I love the part where dana was frustrated bec. she can’t get the hook of alice bra…great story…thanks…
All I really want to say is the story is great and please don’t forget about it and update it or even better finish it soon…