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For the Love of You, Revisited post 6
Tina took Bette’s hand and led her to the dance floor and into the single spotlight that shone there. The brunette and blonde faced each other.
“They do exist” Patty cried…and the club burst into laughter.
“Which one of you is Bette?” She peered at them. Multiple hands pointed to the brunette. “Umm, she’s hot” Patty approved giving her a once over. “She hasn’t answered you yet honey? If things don’t go your way, see my manager for my hotel and room number.” She gave Bette another once over before going on.
Tina… you…must be Tina” she said to the blonde. “Or am I really lying here with you…” she sang impromptu. “Perhaps you’ll let me sing that later?” A cheer went up. ‘Who’s paying royalties tonight, not me” she shook her head. “You all ready?” She turned to the band and began.
If I could I’d give you the world
I’d wrap it up around you
won’t be satisfied with just a piece of this heart
my angel,
oh angel
you’re my angel, oh angel
Tina wrapped her arms around Bette when she stepped to her. Unable to contain the emotion Tina kissed her deeply. Tina’s tongue inside her mouth made Bette’s belly flip and her clit ache. Bette pulled her closer, fitting her thigh between Tina’s. It was so on.
Dreams are dreams – Some dreams come true
I found a real dream
baby when I found you
you’re so strong
But tender too
you’re my angel,
oh angel
you’re my angel, oh angel
“Are you listening Babe?” Tina whispered “I mean every word of this song.” She stretched against her and then her hands began to roam over the brunette’s body. The sexual heat between the two women caused the temperature in the club to rise a good ten degrees.
Love like ours is heaven sent
Each day a day to remember
I feel so safe I feel secure with you
You give me love and keep right on giving
You fill me up baby with the joy of living
When things get tough I can always turn to you
You’re my angel,
oh angel
You’re my angel
Love the way we touch
I love the way it feels
Every time you’re near me
My poor heart just won’t keep still
No doubt about it that this love I feel is real
Ask me to go with you, you know I will
Hold me near, hold me tight
Only you can make it real
Only you can make it alright
Just let me know that I am special to you
My angel,
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(4 votes, average: 4.25 out of 5)
WOW THAT WAS GREAT!
Great story and great update. The possibility of two females being able to reproduce their own biological child is making a very interesting story. I’ll bet that Bette opts out of the trial and wants them to deposit their sperm at the donor clinic. She would never be comfortable thinking that her sperm or Tina’s could produce a child for someone else.
Go Tina with the vigorous sperm!!! PPS
U know I love your writing!!!
So tina’s has more spunk huh? go tina!!well i hope bette says let make a baby!! :) PPS
This is coming along nicely. I doubt that Bette will like the idea that they could use what belongs to them to reproduce elsewhere. What an interesting concept to bring in, and daring as well. Excellent chapter. Please post soon.
Kelika, I love it. Go Tina with your bad self. I can see Bette and Tina not liking the idea that someone else might be able to use their sperm to create a child. So there is only one option for them at this point.This is such a wonderful story. Oh the possibilities of female sperm, I’d love to see this work in the very near future for people that want it. PPS
The idea of two women creating a child with their own egg and sperm is fasinating and incredibly exciting. It is not something we have heard of, yet is something many lesbians have dreamed of througout time. Maybe that’s why when reading this I could feel how strongly we equate vigorous sperm to alpha. The sperm is dominant, the egg submissive. In my head I think that they should both feel strong and alpha because of their eggs being strong and healthy, just as much as having viable sperm…but I get the feeling that (and maybe it’s because the idea of a female being able to help create a child by donating both egg and sperm is still a novelty) the eggs, while important, are something that all women posess (not healthy and viable though) so you don’t see them puffing out their chests in pride because of their eggs. It only seems to be when sperm comes into the equation that there is alot of chest puffing, struting out the alphaness. Like the sperm is the most important part of creating a child. Then again, maybe this is my own defenses coming into play. It has always pissed me off when I hear men say things like, ‘I knocked her up.’ or ‘I got her pregnant.’ Like the creation of a child was all about the man…his sperm. Like the woman and her egg had nothing to do with it. Anyway…I love the story…I ADORE your writing…I just thought it was interesting these thoughts that came into my head, feeling a little defensive about the part of a woman’s egg in creation. LOL Silly I suppose. Thanks Kelika…making me think so hard on this Sunday morning! :)
Awesome chapter. Loving your story. PPS.
wow…hot damn i love this story…i have been checking daily for your posts. well worth the wait…….go on Tina with your smug self..lol
Well, this had me going from zero to sixty to…..hmmm, um…idling??? ;) Thx and appreciate you posting when you can!!!
Awesome great job.
Hello Kelika, That was perfect. First Bette and Tina with their friends owning the dancefloor. Awesome for others to witness the heat that they generate and release. Magical. Now the visit to Doc Wilson is adding excitement to the mix. I do hope these gals get their wish of a new child soon. More please of this brilliant tale. Your grateful and Loyal Fan.
Whoo-ee that was hot! I am so glad that Tina is showing Bette how much she adores her. I can’t wait for another chapter!
I love DR. Wilson great loophole. Now they can deposit thier sperm and use it whenever they want and they could be fathered by either one of the girls. PPASAYC
I am so loving this!!!! Great Chapter!!!! Thank you PPVS