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For the Love of You, Revisited post 6
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Bette’s love for me is like no other love. No matter how many times I thought I could ‘quit’ her…I just can’t…” She turned to Bette and seeing Angie and Bette together waiting for her tore through her. “I’m so grateful that you came back.”
Tears were streaming down both women’s faces at this point. Angie seeing the tears began to cry too as she first tried to stem Bette then Tina’s tears.
“Its ok Boo” Tina soothed her “these are happy tears.”
“Happy tears” Angelica repeated clearly puzzled but she accepted her moms reassurance which were delivered with kisses on both cheeks and stopped crying.
“I’d like to answer Bette’s proposal officially with your support” Tina nodded to Kit. “Al would you keep an eye on your earth daughter for a little while?”
Alice rose and took Angelica from Bette and seated her on Tasha and her laps.
The lights flickered and then dimmed.
Kit came out onto the stage.
“Good evening everyone” Kit smiled at the larger than usual crowd for a Thursday night. “I’m Kit Porter, co-owner of The Planet and I was wondering if you all might like to hear a little music tonight?”
“Yeah” the crowd answered.
“That’s good” Kit nodded moving around the stage “It’s a special night tonight; my Baby Sister has asked the love of her life to marry her.” She paused letting that information sink in. “That woman asked that I play this particular song to give my sister her answer.
At first I was going to surprise them and sing it but I realized that we have Patty in the house tonight and while it is not her song she has agreed to sing it. I can only say her name…Patty”
The shock of Patty before them stunned the crowd. There were hushed whispers as the mostly female crowd nudged each other and looked in wonder at who they could not believe was standing there.
“Bette and Tina…Bette and Tina…TiBette… WeHo who the heck are Bette and Tina?
And what does Tibet have to do with them?” Patty asked the crowd shaking her head. “I want to see this Bette and Tina or Tibet, have you seen them?” She sang before the intro for “Have you seen her” began to play softly.
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WOW THAT WAS GREAT!
Great story and great update. The possibility of two females being able to reproduce their own biological child is making a very interesting story. I’ll bet that Bette opts out of the trial and wants them to deposit their sperm at the donor clinic. She would never be comfortable thinking that her sperm or Tina’s could produce a child for someone else.
Go Tina with the vigorous sperm!!! PPS
U know I love your writing!!!
So tina’s has more spunk huh? go tina!!well i hope bette says let make a baby!! :) PPS
This is coming along nicely. I doubt that Bette will like the idea that they could use what belongs to them to reproduce elsewhere. What an interesting concept to bring in, and daring as well. Excellent chapter. Please post soon.
Kelika, I love it. Go Tina with your bad self. I can see Bette and Tina not liking the idea that someone else might be able to use their sperm to create a child. So there is only one option for them at this point.This is such a wonderful story. Oh the possibilities of female sperm, I’d love to see this work in the very near future for people that want it. PPS
The idea of two women creating a child with their own egg and sperm is fasinating and incredibly exciting. It is not something we have heard of, yet is something many lesbians have dreamed of througout time. Maybe that’s why when reading this I could feel how strongly we equate vigorous sperm to alpha. The sperm is dominant, the egg submissive. In my head I think that they should both feel strong and alpha because of their eggs being strong and healthy, just as much as having viable sperm…but I get the feeling that (and maybe it’s because the idea of a female being able to help create a child by donating both egg and sperm is still a novelty) the eggs, while important, are something that all women posess (not healthy and viable though) so you don’t see them puffing out their chests in pride because of their eggs. It only seems to be when sperm comes into the equation that there is alot of chest puffing, struting out the alphaness. Like the sperm is the most important part of creating a child. Then again, maybe this is my own defenses coming into play. It has always pissed me off when I hear men say things like, ‘I knocked her up.’ or ‘I got her pregnant.’ Like the creation of a child was all about the man…his sperm. Like the woman and her egg had nothing to do with it. Anyway…I love the story…I ADORE your writing…I just thought it was interesting these thoughts that came into my head, feeling a little defensive about the part of a woman’s egg in creation. LOL Silly I suppose. Thanks Kelika…making me think so hard on this Sunday morning! :)
Awesome chapter. Loving your story. PPS.
wow…hot damn i love this story…i have been checking daily for your posts. well worth the wait…….go on Tina with your smug self..lol
Well, this had me going from zero to sixty to…..hmmm, um…idling??? ;) Thx and appreciate you posting when you can!!!
Awesome great job.
Hello Kelika, That was perfect. First Bette and Tina with their friends owning the dancefloor. Awesome for others to witness the heat that they generate and release. Magical. Now the visit to Doc Wilson is adding excitement to the mix. I do hope these gals get their wish of a new child soon. More please of this brilliant tale. Your grateful and Loyal Fan.
Whoo-ee that was hot! I am so glad that Tina is showing Bette how much she adores her. I can’t wait for another chapter!
I love DR. Wilson great loophole. Now they can deposit thier sperm and use it whenever they want and they could be fathered by either one of the girls. PPASAYC
I am so loving this!!!! Great Chapter!!!! Thank you PPVS