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Coming up for air – part thirty
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Bette stayed where she was. She just couldn’t let go. She watched as Tina came down to earth, her trembling subsiding. They looked at each other in silence, making quiet promises of never again letting each other slip away.
“…. you just gave me another one of the things I missed the most when we were apart…” Tina whispered.
“…. an orgasm?” Bette suggested with a light laugh.
“Mmmm… to be devoured by you is…. it’s just a feeling that’s not of this earth, baby…”
“Really? Does it make it to the top ten?”
“I think it does… number ten on my list is to be taken to places I never experienced with anybody else… and to be taken there by you.”
Bette slid off Tina, lying down beside her.
“You’re still five points short of a full Top Twenty…” Bette smiled.
“…. Oh, so you DID pay attention….” Tina laughed.
“I did… I do pay attention when it comes to the important stuff … even though you did your best to divert me from counting….”
“You want another point?”
“Yes, please….”
Tina thought for a little while. “Number thirteen on my list is my mental image of you. Ever since the very first time we met, I’ve had these vivid images of you in my mind. After that first night at your gallery, whenever I closed my eyes, your face was all I could see …. in some way it has been like that ever since that night. Images of you live behind my eyes, baby. I’ve had to rely on those when we were apart…. they kept me sane… they drove me mad…. they made my cry. But most of time the images of you made me smile, knowing that they would always and forever be the place I’d go to, when I needed comfort and hope…. somehow I’ve always found that with you…. even when I couldn’t see you in real life,” Tina said while caressing the very face that made all the difference.
“What are those images like… are they from specific situations or are they separate from concrete experiences?” Bette asked cuddling up a little closer to Tina.
“They are snapshots from special moments between us, I guess….”
“Give me an example….” Bette requested as she let her lips rest against the pulse point on Tina neck.
“There’s the first time you looked at me – that look of surprise, interest, curiosity, and what I know now, was lust….” Tina laughed, “another favorite is when you gave me your ring. God… you looked so nervous… so filled with anticipation and… well, I felt like the center of your universe at that moment. It’s not a bad feeling, I might add…” Tina smiled down at Bette.
“And then there are the more random everyday moments, like the way you look when you’ve just woken up – all disheveled and groggy… so very cute…. Or the way you look when you want me… the urgency and need you display always make me feel so desirable… so wanted… there’s nothing like it,” Tina continued.
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My gosh, I love the way you write these two. You can run the gamut in a single post… you’ve given us hotness, sweetness, vulnerability, sadness, and lastly triumph… then if that wasn’t enough, right when we’re recovering, you’ve taken Bette and Tina back to jaw-dropping, salivating, knee-trembling heat. I don’t know how you do it, I’m just grateful. It’s awesome, and this story, not just this chapter, is just… it leaves me speechless at times. Thank you for the post, anker.
I agree with jp22, just amazing at the range of emotion you take your readers on. What a way to celebrate a new job.
Lovely, lovely, lovely….
LOL. (Re: speechlessness) The previous chapter had me driving through Sappyville in a burning car. A whole lot of fun really (no, I mean it). I loved the heat and the wetness and by all means if it just happens to condense to tears, I don’t mind. LOL. Great post, I’m loving Dean Porter so far. Her skill at inspiring orgasmic salivation is beyond question, lol Tina should know that. I love your writing Anker! Now, I’m looking forward to more 8) PPS!
FUCK!
Oh anker, you must know by now it takes something truly great to render ME speechless! LOL Overall, I may have preferred Tina’s list… hot AND sweet. Tina’s adorable, the whole roses and waiting outside thing. And, if that’s the way the kids are celebrating new jobs these days… maybe it’s time I find one. ;) Great as always!
what a chapter and cannot wait for more to come along..i love that list its brillant ideal.p.p.s.
TINA’S LIST WAS AMAZING. She hit every lovely point of Bette Porter. Jodi Lerner can’t hold a candle to Tina.
Thanks for finishing the lists! How Bette managed to keep track shows her searing intellect! What I’ve really enjoyed about the last few posts (besides the obvious) is the balance that the characters are striking in their relationship. You are showing how each one really does “complete” the other. (I hated to use that phrase.) In any case, another enticing chapter that will keep us tuned in until next weekend! Thanks for writing!
Thank you for completing the countdown! That was HOT!
omfg that chapter was altogether something else….february is nearly over…pleasz post soon…keep it hot!!!!
i just love it when B&T are in love :)
Everyone said it for me. I can’t add anything to it That was great. thanks so much for posting. thanks
that was sweet, hottttttttttttt
Yeah Dean Porter is hot and sexy!
Dang..Anker that was well…really great!It is pretty cold here right now, so all I had to do was open the fricken slider, cause it was HOT in here! It took me awhile just to gather sum thoughts to comment! Although I like it when you get me all hot and bothered!wink!Humor is the key to a happy life in my book and it IS the sexiest quality a person can have. You have that quality. :) xoxo
the rest of top twenty, then shower sex… what a happy sunday morning! :D
This story is amazing you are soooooo talented I Love It
Anker, don’t you dare tone down the loving. My old heart and well the rest of me can handle it just fine. LOL Tina’s top 20 were well what can I say but inspiring. Number twenty just melted my heart my friend. I so look forward to reading each new chapter. Thanks again!
Anker, I loved number 11 on the list. When someone shows you their vulnerability & fears, I think that’s when you know you are totally committed to each other, you know? Moving on to greeting Dean Porter at UCLA…hmmm….Tina waiting outside for Bette with flowers reminded me of the ending of “Flashdance” when JB comes running down the steps and is greeted by her boyfriend with flowers. Nice touch. Oh and speaking of touches ( how’s that for a play on words? LOL!) The shower scene was sexy, hot and wet. WHat more could a girl ask for? LOL! Alright Anker, take us to your “Planet” chapter and let’s see what other naughty play you have in mind for B & T. With an imagination like yours, I’m hoping to see Tina working that Top 20 list to it’s fullest potential. (wink, wink) PPS.
Lordy Bee, that was intoxicating. I kind of love Bette and Tina’s dance when they are totally alone with no clothes on. The other dance on the floor of a club is just foreplay. As a Tina fan it is nice to see someone write her the same way that Bette is written. Oh I am also a Bette fan. To me they go together as a peanut butter and jelly sandwhich. One is good by itself but it is sooo good when they are together.
Absolutely beautiful and so frickin’ hot! Plus I loved how vulnerable and sweet Bette was, I love that side to her! We should see more of that side to her besides the alpha side! :-)
FUCK!!! You owe me yet another laptop my friend….god I love these list, so freaking hot!!! And the connection you’ve created between our girls are amazing, you are truly talented. Now bring on the next post, coz I’m not as patient as you LOL (the email is coming, I promise) :o))