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Coming up for air – part thirty
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Tina kissed up Bette’s neck, biting down gently on the lobe of her ear. Her hands fell to rest on Bette’s hips, but soon they wandered upwards over her stomach and ribs. The path ended when she cupped Bette’s full breasts, slowly letting her thumbs graze over her nipples. Bette let out a sigh. She wasn’t sure how long she could keep from turning around. Tina pushed her body against Bette. Her skin felt so soft and smooth. Bette was almost painfully aware of how Tina’s breasts pressed into her back as her hands made Bette’s nipples stand erect at the attention.
Tina let her right hand slip down Bette’s stomach and in between her legs causing a shudder to go through her. Bette’s arousal was evident. Tina breathed in hard at the feeling of Bette’s lips enveloping her fingers.
Bette couldn’t take it anymore. She turned around in a rapid movement completely taking Tina by surprise. They connected in a searing kiss. Bette’s tongue demanded entrance and Tina happily complied. Her hands pulled Bette closer as she pushed Tina up against the wall. Just one minute ago Tina had all the control, but now she was completely at Bette’s mercy. Bette moved down her body, hands on her ass and mouth on her breasts. Tina looked up at the ceiling and let out a low moan. Bette sucked hard on Tina’s nipples, taking in as much as she could. She nibbled, sucked, licked and bit, leaving Tina feeling as if she was fainting. Bette continued her way downwards, her tongue flickering over Tina’s taut stomach. Bette was on her knees her hands traveling up the inside of Tina’s thighs.
“Fuck…. I’m not going to last long,” Tina thought to herself. And just at that moment Bette penetrated Tina with her tongue. Tina whimpered and almost lifted off the ground. She lifted her right leg, resting it over Bette’s shoulder to give her easier access. She sucked Tina’s clit in between her lips and let go several times. She alternated between this and letting her tongue go as deep as it could. Tina was so close… she thrusted her hips against Bette’s face and Bette let two fingers slip into Tina. Tina let out a gasp as her walls gripped down hard on Bette’s hand. Tina couldn’t control her orgasm that exploded immediately. Tina’s entire body convulsed and she saw colors behind her eyelids as the waves of her climax blew through her body. Bette stood back up and held Tina close to her. The water was getting colder and Bette reached behind herself and turned it off.
“God… how do you do that?” Tina panted against Bette’s cheek.
“I could say the same thing to you… how, Tina?” Bette giggled.
Tina gathered herself, “That was astonishing, baby… I don’t think I’ve ever come that fast before…”
Bette kissed Tina letting their tongues play lovingly against each other.
“It sure was wonderful…” Bette agreed.
TBC
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My gosh, I love the way you write these two. You can run the gamut in a single post… you’ve given us hotness, sweetness, vulnerability, sadness, and lastly triumph… then if that wasn’t enough, right when we’re recovering, you’ve taken Bette and Tina back to jaw-dropping, salivating, knee-trembling heat. I don’t know how you do it, I’m just grateful. It’s awesome, and this story, not just this chapter, is just… it leaves me speechless at times. Thank you for the post, anker.
I agree with jp22, just amazing at the range of emotion you take your readers on. What a way to celebrate a new job.
Lovely, lovely, lovely….
LOL. (Re: speechlessness) The previous chapter had me driving through Sappyville in a burning car. A whole lot of fun really (no, I mean it). I loved the heat and the wetness and by all means if it just happens to condense to tears, I don’t mind. LOL. Great post, I’m loving Dean Porter so far. Her skill at inspiring orgasmic salivation is beyond question, lol Tina should know that. I love your writing Anker! Now, I’m looking forward to more 8) PPS!
FUCK!
Oh anker, you must know by now it takes something truly great to render ME speechless! LOL Overall, I may have preferred Tina’s list… hot AND sweet. Tina’s adorable, the whole roses and waiting outside thing. And, if that’s the way the kids are celebrating new jobs these days… maybe it’s time I find one. ;) Great as always!
what a chapter and cannot wait for more to come along..i love that list its brillant ideal.p.p.s.
TINA’S LIST WAS AMAZING. She hit every lovely point of Bette Porter. Jodi Lerner can’t hold a candle to Tina.
Thanks for finishing the lists! How Bette managed to keep track shows her searing intellect! What I’ve really enjoyed about the last few posts (besides the obvious) is the balance that the characters are striking in their relationship. You are showing how each one really does “complete” the other. (I hated to use that phrase.) In any case, another enticing chapter that will keep us tuned in until next weekend! Thanks for writing!
Thank you for completing the countdown! That was HOT!
omfg that chapter was altogether something else….february is nearly over…pleasz post soon…keep it hot!!!!
i just love it when B&T are in love :)
Everyone said it for me. I can’t add anything to it That was great. thanks so much for posting. thanks
that was sweet, hottttttttttttt
Yeah Dean Porter is hot and sexy!
Dang..Anker that was well…really great!It is pretty cold here right now, so all I had to do was open the fricken slider, cause it was HOT in here! It took me awhile just to gather sum thoughts to comment! Although I like it when you get me all hot and bothered!wink!Humor is the key to a happy life in my book and it IS the sexiest quality a person can have. You have that quality. :) xoxo
the rest of top twenty, then shower sex… what a happy sunday morning! :D
This story is amazing you are soooooo talented I Love It
Anker, don’t you dare tone down the loving. My old heart and well the rest of me can handle it just fine. LOL Tina’s top 20 were well what can I say but inspiring. Number twenty just melted my heart my friend. I so look forward to reading each new chapter. Thanks again!
Anker, I loved number 11 on the list. When someone shows you their vulnerability & fears, I think that’s when you know you are totally committed to each other, you know? Moving on to greeting Dean Porter at UCLA…hmmm….Tina waiting outside for Bette with flowers reminded me of the ending of “Flashdance” when JB comes running down the steps and is greeted by her boyfriend with flowers. Nice touch. Oh and speaking of touches ( how’s that for a play on words? LOL!) The shower scene was sexy, hot and wet. WHat more could a girl ask for? LOL! Alright Anker, take us to your “Planet” chapter and let’s see what other naughty play you have in mind for B & T. With an imagination like yours, I’m hoping to see Tina working that Top 20 list to it’s fullest potential. (wink, wink) PPS.
Lordy Bee, that was intoxicating. I kind of love Bette and Tina’s dance when they are totally alone with no clothes on. The other dance on the floor of a club is just foreplay. As a Tina fan it is nice to see someone write her the same way that Bette is written. Oh I am also a Bette fan. To me they go together as a peanut butter and jelly sandwhich. One is good by itself but it is sooo good when they are together.
Absolutely beautiful and so frickin’ hot! Plus I loved how vulnerable and sweet Bette was, I love that side to her! We should see more of that side to her besides the alpha side! :-)
FUCK!!! You owe me yet another laptop my friend….god I love these list, so freaking hot!!! And the connection you’ve created between our girls are amazing, you are truly talented. Now bring on the next post, coz I’m not as patient as you LOL (the email is coming, I promise) :o))