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Coming up for air – part thirty
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Coming up for air – part thirty
“Open your eyes for me, T….” Bette breathed only inches from Tina’s face.
Tina wanted to open her eyes for Bette, but right at that moment, she had lost the power to control her body. They were in full contact, Bette on top of Tina. With deep slow thrusts Bette penetrated Tina, taking her up higher and higher, making her body move on its own. Their ragged breathing blended, creating a unified rhythmic soundtrack to Bette taking Tina to the very highpoint of ecstasy.
“Open your eyes…. I need to see your eyes, please baby….” Bette repeated just before her lips enveloped Tina’s half open mouth. At that moment Tina felt connected to Bette in every way possible. No part of her was hidden or held back. Every inch of her mind and body was accessible to Bette and she responded in kind.
“…Please….” Bette reiterated, sensing with her entire being how close to orgasm Tina was. She stopped her motions, waiting for Tina’s response. Bette looked down in awe at Tina’s flushed face, her mouth was slightly agape as she panted for air, her lips had turned a darker shade of pink. Her eyes were closed in blissful elation; her blonde hair had darkened, a few strands sticking to her forehead and cheek. She was undoubtedly the most beautiful sight Bette had ever seen.
Tina blinked a few time. Her vision was unfocused, blurred from her eyes being shut tight as she concentrated on the rushes of pure pleasure, blitzing through her limbs.
“…. don’t stop…. please don’t’ stop….” Tina begged, trying hard to find a focal point in Bette’s eyes. She was looking down at Tina with a devilish smile, silently asking Tina to plead her case.
“… I’m so close…. now… give it to me….” Tina whispered looking straight up at Bette.
“Try to look me in the eyes for as long as you can…. okay?” Bette said.
Tina moved her hand from Bette’s hip to the back of her head. “Take me there, baby…”
“Nnnn, I will….”
With her eyes locked to Tina’s, Bette thrusted knowing exactly what rhythm would take Tina to her peak. She curled her fingers upwards and saw the instant dilation in Tina’s eyes before she arched her back and let out a deep throaty moan.
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My gosh, I love the way you write these two. You can run the gamut in a single post… you’ve given us hotness, sweetness, vulnerability, sadness, and lastly triumph… then if that wasn’t enough, right when we’re recovering, you’ve taken Bette and Tina back to jaw-dropping, salivating, knee-trembling heat. I don’t know how you do it, I’m just grateful. It’s awesome, and this story, not just this chapter, is just… it leaves me speechless at times. Thank you for the post, anker.
I agree with jp22, just amazing at the range of emotion you take your readers on. What a way to celebrate a new job.
Lovely, lovely, lovely….
LOL. (Re: speechlessness) The previous chapter had me driving through Sappyville in a burning car. A whole lot of fun really (no, I mean it). I loved the heat and the wetness and by all means if it just happens to condense to tears, I don’t mind. LOL. Great post, I’m loving Dean Porter so far. Her skill at inspiring orgasmic salivation is beyond question, lol Tina should know that. I love your writing Anker! Now, I’m looking forward to more 8) PPS!
FUCK!
Oh anker, you must know by now it takes something truly great to render ME speechless! LOL Overall, I may have preferred Tina’s list… hot AND sweet. Tina’s adorable, the whole roses and waiting outside thing. And, if that’s the way the kids are celebrating new jobs these days… maybe it’s time I find one. ;) Great as always!
what a chapter and cannot wait for more to come along..i love that list its brillant ideal.p.p.s.
TINA’S LIST WAS AMAZING. She hit every lovely point of Bette Porter. Jodi Lerner can’t hold a candle to Tina.
Thanks for finishing the lists! How Bette managed to keep track shows her searing intellect! What I’ve really enjoyed about the last few posts (besides the obvious) is the balance that the characters are striking in their relationship. You are showing how each one really does “complete” the other. (I hated to use that phrase.) In any case, another enticing chapter that will keep us tuned in until next weekend! Thanks for writing!
Thank you for completing the countdown! That was HOT!
omfg that chapter was altogether something else….february is nearly over…pleasz post soon…keep it hot!!!!
i just love it when B&T are in love :)
Everyone said it for me. I can’t add anything to it That was great. thanks so much for posting. thanks
that was sweet, hottttttttttttt
Yeah Dean Porter is hot and sexy!
Dang..Anker that was well…really great!It is pretty cold here right now, so all I had to do was open the fricken slider, cause it was HOT in here! It took me awhile just to gather sum thoughts to comment! Although I like it when you get me all hot and bothered!wink!Humor is the key to a happy life in my book and it IS the sexiest quality a person can have. You have that quality. :) xoxo
the rest of top twenty, then shower sex… what a happy sunday morning! :D
This story is amazing you are soooooo talented I Love It
Anker, don’t you dare tone down the loving. My old heart and well the rest of me can handle it just fine. LOL Tina’s top 20 were well what can I say but inspiring. Number twenty just melted my heart my friend. I so look forward to reading each new chapter. Thanks again!
Anker, I loved number 11 on the list. When someone shows you their vulnerability & fears, I think that’s when you know you are totally committed to each other, you know? Moving on to greeting Dean Porter at UCLA…hmmm….Tina waiting outside for Bette with flowers reminded me of the ending of “Flashdance” when JB comes running down the steps and is greeted by her boyfriend with flowers. Nice touch. Oh and speaking of touches ( how’s that for a play on words? LOL!) The shower scene was sexy, hot and wet. WHat more could a girl ask for? LOL! Alright Anker, take us to your “Planet” chapter and let’s see what other naughty play you have in mind for B & T. With an imagination like yours, I’m hoping to see Tina working that Top 20 list to it’s fullest potential. (wink, wink) PPS.
Lordy Bee, that was intoxicating. I kind of love Bette and Tina’s dance when they are totally alone with no clothes on. The other dance on the floor of a club is just foreplay. As a Tina fan it is nice to see someone write her the same way that Bette is written. Oh I am also a Bette fan. To me they go together as a peanut butter and jelly sandwhich. One is good by itself but it is sooo good when they are together.
Absolutely beautiful and so frickin’ hot! Plus I loved how vulnerable and sweet Bette was, I love that side to her! We should see more of that side to her besides the alpha side! :-)
FUCK!!! You owe me yet another laptop my friend….god I love these list, so freaking hot!!! And the connection you’ve created between our girls are amazing, you are truly talented. Now bring on the next post, coz I’m not as patient as you LOL (the email is coming, I promise) :o))