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Coming up for air – part forty four
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They stopped at The Pine Creek Restaurant for an early dinner before they went to the cabin. With a nice glass of cabernet in her hand and the stunning of view of the snow-clad mountains in front of her, Bette reclined in her chair in complete repose.
She thought back over the vacations she’d been on with Tina over the years. In the early days they’d been away on so many long weekends together. Usually never more than three days because they were both tied up at work. Bette had known from early on that Tina loved winter sports. But Bette had never thought in terms of snow and ice, when she planned their getaways. It was always sun and water that came to Bette’s mind, whenever she imagined a perfect weekend away with Tina. Water was Bette’s element, the avid swimmer she was. Tina had asked to go away to The Rockies so many times Bette had lost count. She couldn’t even remember what she’d answered. But apparently it had taken them more than nine years to make it. The thought made Bette wince.
“I never thought we’d get to go skiing together…” Tina thought out loud, speaking right into the conversation Bette was having with herself.
“Huh?” Bette replied, turning her attention to Tina.
“Are you tired baby?” Tina asked with concern at the sight of Bette’s absent-minded look.
“I’m fine T… I’m happy to be here…” Bette said with half a smile.
“Really? You look sort of… I don’t know… distracted maybe…”
“I was just thinking…”
Tina put her elbows on the table and looked intently at Bette. “Can I ask what about?”
“Just that… it has taken me too god damn long to listen to what you’re saying…”
“Are you talking about something in particular…?” Tina asked, trying to catch up with Bette.
“I’m sorry I’ve been such a bitch all day… T, please forgive me… I’ll do better tomorrow…” Bette pleaded. She leant in over the table and took Tina’s hand.
“Bette please… there’s no need to apologize. I’m sorry to tell you this… but I had fun today…” Tina said and gently squeezed Bette’s hand.
“At my expense maybe…?” Bette chuckled.
Tina let out a soft laugh, “yes, part of the time…”
“I’m just thinking that I’ve been so selfish… I knew you wanted this type of vacation… I just… right now I’m wondering why we never made it before…” Bette tried to explain.
“I think our hectic schedules made it difficult, Bette… and besides I loved all the times we went away together. But it’s true that I tried to make you come skiing with me… you just never seemed to want to… before now that is,” Tina said.
“But I knew that you wanted to… and that should have been enough…”
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Hey you…your back!**smiling** You have been missed and I will be sad when this story finally wraps up.**pouting** I enjoy the way you write this couple and I always look forward to your post. Hopefully, you’ll post a new story ? Because you don’t want me to pm you constantly until you do. Do you? LOL! Anyways… I’m so like Bette when it comes to skiing. Can’t quite get the balance thing right and then there is that stubborn, competitive streak in me…but we can talk about that later.**wink** I love looking out over the view of snow covered mountains. It’s so peaceful and beautiful. Speaking of beautiful…**smooth, huh?**Your bath scene was beautifully written. It was beyond beautifully written…it was hot and wet! And we all know that nobody writes hot and wet better than you! LOL!**are you blushing?*** You and your very creative mind always manage to write some of the best erotic stories on this site. Now, about that bear skin rug….hmmm…Any thoughts? LOL! Ciao.
that was hottttttttttttttttt bette will have the skiing thing down in no time
Gotta admit it would be pretty funny to see Bette falling on her ass trying to ski. I’m pretty athletic and thats what happened to me, so I opted for the lodge, alchol, and another kind of fun. Wouldn’t mind soaking in a hot tub wiht either one of them.
THAT was GooD! Very good. My wounds have healed nicely Thank you….but I’m feeling a bit diz….THUMP!
Anker, That was so cute and HOT!!! The bear rug next please. I know they will have fun on it. They are so soft and feel like slik. Thanks PPS
Crap boards…LMAO! I know how Bette feels, been there, done that. Such a great chapter. I love their loving. PPS!!
Well…Well…Well!! What can I say but thank you so ever much for that HOT tub scene. When I came home for lunch I saw that you had posted, but knowing your NC-17’s I knew better than to read it then. So after getting home after a fun filled evening with the women at the alley I just had to read this chapter. So now I can go to bed with a big smile on my face and…well just let your imagination figure out the rest. LMAO!! If I ask real nicely again might we get another NC-17 chapter before you go on your vacation?(making a begging puppy dog face) Anker, it is I who should be thanking you for your friendship my dear friend. You shared in my joy when things were going so good and when they fell apart you where there to listen and pick me up. To me that is the true definition of the word “friend”.
I felt like I was sliding down the slope like Bette and then sitting in the tub in the hot water. I love your writings. I feel like I am in the same room watching what they are doing.
Hows my sweet camote on this lovely day?All I can say is DAMN that was hot babe! I might have to try that this winter or sooner! Thanks for keeping me posted on this gem of a story. I always enjoy it, although I had to read it while she is in the shower! LMAO! I can’t wait for our convo and I miss you… my friend xoxo
OMG you had me LAUGHING MY BUTT off in the beginning with Bette and the whole skiing problem, and then you just melted the snow with that HOT HOT HOT NC17 scene. You are a talented writer who has an incredible ability to provide a balance in your storyline between humor, love, drama, and some pretty sultry moments. Bring it on, and whenever you can post it is greatly appreciated. Thanks Anker!
Jeezoh, lass! Whit’re ye spaekin aboot, anker, endin’ the story? Ye cannae end it, even if Tina does get up the duff, ken. Wir Bette cannae dae somethin’ as easy as skiin’, kept fallin’ on her erse? Naw, that cannae be right…Bette’s pure dead brilliant, she disnae hae any faults, skiin’ should be a dawdle, ken. As for the ridin’ in the bath, that wis pure barry, man. Ye’ll huv tae post soon, anker. Like the noo, pal. Cheers! *(First yin tae translate this gets 50 bonus points, ken.)
ummm…..What happens in Aspen stays in Aspen???
Good chapter. Bette’s skiing is funny, good to see they have funny and happy, damn they’re hot and sweet, love them. Please post more, thanks!
I love the idea of Bette and Tina making love in the cold weather. I hope they end up making love in the bearskin rug too, that would be so hot!! PPS!
First…YEEEHAAAA (no thanks to you!!!) LMPO
Hia like some others I see, when I saw your post, I thought I’ll leave that to when I can just lax back and go with u on this loving sensuous journey. You make them so alive, so real, humorous; I can see the images of their interactions; great stuff…yes, the bear rug sounds mmmmmmmmm!!! (oops are there any conservationsits around to berate us for our non-pc thoughts???? but I mean it’s there, no point pretending its not there to be enjoyed…I can’t actually see an end-point for this story…maybe u’ll just have to close with a ‘end of part 1’ and later come back to us with the baby tales etc??? (lol…I live in hope) Its just that you have weaved magic with this couple and I (pouting) don’t want to lose them…great stuff as always…u going on holiday? Good for you. Have fun, have a rest…arohanui.
Good to see you, Anker! Every now and again, you bring us something that subtlely reminds us of the difference in the worlds of B & T. “It’s a classic…not a cliche, Babe.” Loved it! Also liked the skew of balance as Tina excels at a physical activity that proves challenging for Bette. That Bette realized Tina was finally getting her vacation was cute, but the endearing part was that she didn’t book a morning flight to the islands for the rest of the trip! Enjoy your summer, and write when you can. Thank you!
Thanks for the Author note sweetie…made me LMPO, as always. So you want a purple Fidimus next time…hmmm maybe LOL. I don’t like less graphic sex scenes…I LOVE them!!! About this wonderful post…I really liked words like tipsy, whiny, baby and T….hmmm where have I heard those words before????? Another beautiful and amazing post, you keep getting better and better…I can’t find words to describe what your writing means/do to me!! xo
Hey Anker, Am now back to an even keel after mvoing house. Major work but getting there. AS for this delightful drama. I adore it. There is such a sense of playfulness between Bette and Tina. Now this is just the type of scene I would love to be played out on screen. Many Thanks for showing the marvel that Bette and Tina can be. Your Loyal Fan.
Love this story. Looking forward to the baby making.. its such an adorable story. Really romantic. Plus, I totally dig how Bette is actually reflecting on things that she previously did wrong..and trying to improve on them. Learning and growing as a character. PPS.
Oooh just perfect!
Bette doesn’t know what she has been missing with the whole “winter sports” thing! The best part is cuddling inside getting warm with no place to go or the ability to do so! PPS
Bette doesn’t know what she has been missing with the whole “winter sports” thing! The best part is cuddling inside getting warm with no place to go or the ability to do so! PPS