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Coming up for air – part forty four
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When Tina finished with both legs Bette looked like she was drifting off to sleep. The sweetest of smiles was caressing her lips and her eyes were closed in peace.
“Come down here….” Bette said, opening her eyes slightly to look at Tina.
Very slowly Tina moved around in the tub, careful not to make the water spill over. She slipped around Bette so that she was sitting between Tina’s legs. Before Bette leant back she slid under the water. She returned to the surface with wet hair and drops of water hanging from her eyelashes. Tina studied her from the side. She raised her hand and let a single finger runs through Bette’s long lashes.
“Those eyes…. I’ve never seen lashes like that ever before… You’re so beautiful….” Tina whispered.
Bette didn’t answer. She just smiled at Tina.
“Can I wash your hair?” Tina asked.
“Of course…”
Tina took the shampoo. She sat up a little to get easy access. With her strong hands she massages the shampoo into Bette’s soft curls. Bette’s moaned in blissful delight as the last tension left her body. Tine let her hands fall to Bette’s shoulders, giving them a loving workout as well. The skin on Bette’s shoulders and chiseled back became rosy under Tina’s touch. She took the showerhead and rinsed out Bette’s hair. Tina couldn’t hold back any longer and let her tongue run from Bette’s shoulder to her earlobe. Bette let out a deep moan at the sensation of Tina’s tongue against her skin.
Tina leant back and scooted down a little so that Bette was virtually lying on top of her. She slid her hands around Bette’s body to her soft and slippery breasts.
“What are you doing, baby?” Bette groaned.
“I’m just enjoying you….” Tina quietly answered, her lips and tongue finding the rim of Bette’s ear.
“Mmmmm… It feels so good….”
“Yeah?”
Tina’s hands continued down Bette’s ribs and stomach. Ever so lightly she let her fingertips slide over Bette’s smooth skin. She continued the journey down between her legs and up her thighs. Bette leant her head back on Tina’s shoulder, letting out small sounds of pleasure. Tina’s hands slipped over Bette’s knees, along the outside on her thighs, up her sides till she once again cupped Bette’s breasts, pinching the hardening nipples tenderly. Tina repeated the slow loving of Bette for another few minutes, making Bette’s tired body come to life again.
“Please baby….” Bette moaned with her face turned up at Tina.
Bette’s plea made Tina stop her journey between Bette’s legs. She let a single finger slip through silky Bette’s folds. Bette gasped loudly when Tina found her clit. Tina’s movements were slow and rhythmic. With her other hands she entered Bette who turned her head a little more and found Tina’s mouth. Their tongues swirled around each other. Bette panted into Tina mouth as her hands started to move faster.
Bette’s entire body started to tremble as her orgasm was approaching. She had to let go of Tina’s lips because her ragged breathing didn’t allow the close proximity. When her orgasm hit, Bette arched her back and found Tina’s hands with her own. She followed the tempo Tina was setting as her the tremors of her orgasm slowly subsided. Tina felt overcome by happiness, just being able to provide her love with that kind of pleasure. She put her arms and legs around Bette’s still tingling body and held her tight as they waited for Bette’s pulse to calm down.
“… you make me so very happy, do you know that?” Bette whispered breathlessly.
“… I hope so….” Tina whispered back.
“I think we’re going to turn into two prunes if we stay in the water much longer…” Bette giggled after a while. “Wanna get up?”
“I guess we have to…” Tina smiled.
TBC
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Hey you…your back!**smiling** You have been missed and I will be sad when this story finally wraps up.**pouting** I enjoy the way you write this couple and I always look forward to your post. Hopefully, you’ll post a new story ? Because you don’t want me to pm you constantly until you do. Do you? LOL! Anyways… I’m so like Bette when it comes to skiing. Can’t quite get the balance thing right and then there is that stubborn, competitive streak in me…but we can talk about that later.**wink** I love looking out over the view of snow covered mountains. It’s so peaceful and beautiful. Speaking of beautiful…**smooth, huh?**Your bath scene was beautifully written. It was beyond beautifully written…it was hot and wet! And we all know that nobody writes hot and wet better than you! LOL!**are you blushing?*** You and your very creative mind always manage to write some of the best erotic stories on this site. Now, about that bear skin rug….hmmm…Any thoughts? LOL! Ciao.
that was hottttttttttttttttt bette will have the skiing thing down in no time
Gotta admit it would be pretty funny to see Bette falling on her ass trying to ski. I’m pretty athletic and thats what happened to me, so I opted for the lodge, alchol, and another kind of fun. Wouldn’t mind soaking in a hot tub wiht either one of them.
THAT was GooD! Very good. My wounds have healed nicely Thank you….but I’m feeling a bit diz….THUMP!
Anker, That was so cute and HOT!!! The bear rug next please. I know they will have fun on it. They are so soft and feel like slik. Thanks PPS
Crap boards…LMAO! I know how Bette feels, been there, done that. Such a great chapter. I love their loving. PPS!!
Well…Well…Well!! What can I say but thank you so ever much for that HOT tub scene. When I came home for lunch I saw that you had posted, but knowing your NC-17’s I knew better than to read it then. So after getting home after a fun filled evening with the women at the alley I just had to read this chapter. So now I can go to bed with a big smile on my face and…well just let your imagination figure out the rest. LMAO!! If I ask real nicely again might we get another NC-17 chapter before you go on your vacation?(making a begging puppy dog face) Anker, it is I who should be thanking you for your friendship my dear friend. You shared in my joy when things were going so good and when they fell apart you where there to listen and pick me up. To me that is the true definition of the word “friend”.
I felt like I was sliding down the slope like Bette and then sitting in the tub in the hot water. I love your writings. I feel like I am in the same room watching what they are doing.
Hows my sweet camote on this lovely day?All I can say is DAMN that was hot babe! I might have to try that this winter or sooner! Thanks for keeping me posted on this gem of a story. I always enjoy it, although I had to read it while she is in the shower! LMAO! I can’t wait for our convo and I miss you… my friend xoxo
OMG you had me LAUGHING MY BUTT off in the beginning with Bette and the whole skiing problem, and then you just melted the snow with that HOT HOT HOT NC17 scene. You are a talented writer who has an incredible ability to provide a balance in your storyline between humor, love, drama, and some pretty sultry moments. Bring it on, and whenever you can post it is greatly appreciated. Thanks Anker!
Jeezoh, lass! Whit’re ye spaekin aboot, anker, endin’ the story? Ye cannae end it, even if Tina does get up the duff, ken. Wir Bette cannae dae somethin’ as easy as skiin’, kept fallin’ on her erse? Naw, that cannae be right…Bette’s pure dead brilliant, she disnae hae any faults, skiin’ should be a dawdle, ken. As for the ridin’ in the bath, that wis pure barry, man. Ye’ll huv tae post soon, anker. Like the noo, pal. Cheers! *(First yin tae translate this gets 50 bonus points, ken.)
ummm…..What happens in Aspen stays in Aspen???
Good chapter. Bette’s skiing is funny, good to see they have funny and happy, damn they’re hot and sweet, love them. Please post more, thanks!
I love the idea of Bette and Tina making love in the cold weather. I hope they end up making love in the bearskin rug too, that would be so hot!! PPS!
First…YEEEHAAAA (no thanks to you!!!) LMPO
Hia like some others I see, when I saw your post, I thought I’ll leave that to when I can just lax back and go with u on this loving sensuous journey. You make them so alive, so real, humorous; I can see the images of their interactions; great stuff…yes, the bear rug sounds mmmmmmmmm!!! (oops are there any conservationsits around to berate us for our non-pc thoughts???? but I mean it’s there, no point pretending its not there to be enjoyed…I can’t actually see an end-point for this story…maybe u’ll just have to close with a ‘end of part 1’ and later come back to us with the baby tales etc??? (lol…I live in hope) Its just that you have weaved magic with this couple and I (pouting) don’t want to lose them…great stuff as always…u going on holiday? Good for you. Have fun, have a rest…arohanui.
Good to see you, Anker! Every now and again, you bring us something that subtlely reminds us of the difference in the worlds of B & T. “It’s a classic…not a cliche, Babe.” Loved it! Also liked the skew of balance as Tina excels at a physical activity that proves challenging for Bette. That Bette realized Tina was finally getting her vacation was cute, but the endearing part was that she didn’t book a morning flight to the islands for the rest of the trip! Enjoy your summer, and write when you can. Thank you!
Thanks for the Author note sweetie…made me LMPO, as always. So you want a purple Fidimus next time…hmmm maybe LOL. I don’t like less graphic sex scenes…I LOVE them!!! About this wonderful post…I really liked words like tipsy, whiny, baby and T….hmmm where have I heard those words before????? Another beautiful and amazing post, you keep getting better and better…I can’t find words to describe what your writing means/do to me!! xo
Hey Anker, Am now back to an even keel after mvoing house. Major work but getting there. AS for this delightful drama. I adore it. There is such a sense of playfulness between Bette and Tina. Now this is just the type of scene I would love to be played out on screen. Many Thanks for showing the marvel that Bette and Tina can be. Your Loyal Fan.
Love this story. Looking forward to the baby making.. its such an adorable story. Really romantic. Plus, I totally dig how Bette is actually reflecting on things that she previously did wrong..and trying to improve on them. Learning and growing as a character. PPS.
Oooh just perfect!
Bette doesn’t know what she has been missing with the whole “winter sports” thing! The best part is cuddling inside getting warm with no place to go or the ability to do so! PPS
Bette doesn’t know what she has been missing with the whole “winter sports” thing! The best part is cuddling inside getting warm with no place to go or the ability to do so! PPS