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C O U N T D O W N: Missing Hours

The man in suit continues, ”So, you have no proof, just theories.”
I shoot back, ”Are you confused perhaps about how theory is applied to research? I’m not using the term theory in the way a man like yourself might dream up a ”theory” — that if you get a burner phone and only call your mistress on it your wife will never find out you’re having an affair. You could mistakenly call that a theory, but you’d be using the word incorrectly, and using it to assuage your guilt, whereby further giving yourself permission to cheat on your wife. In that case, what you’re using is not a theory at all, but a flawed strategy of deceit.”
I must’ve hit a nerve because Agent 2 storms out of the room and another man clears his throat to regain the floor, ”How do you develop your theories Doctor Porter?”
But I’m still having fun mind-fucking Agent 2 so I shout, ”If you’d asked me I could’ve plotted with mathematical certainty if you’d get caught cheating.” I cup my hands around my mouth in a mini megaphone. ”FYI! The key is plugging in more variables than a stupid burner phone.”
”I believe you’ve drilled in your point, Doctor Porter.”
”Have I? Good. Because I’m ready to leave.”
”Not yet.”
”Look, unlike a cut on your finger, or a broken bone that will heal, the human brain does not work that way. The brain is not a bone-knitting type healer for itself. It’s a complicated organ. It has many regions that are constantly doing automatic things, like breathing and beating your heart and creating fluctuations in your body’s endocrine system. The brain does other things, such as, comprehension tasks, as in seeing what’s right in front of you. If it’s healthy it sees what’s actually there. If it’s Trump’s brain it filters real time as a mass hallucination.”
I pause for effect, because this is the most serious problem the President-elect has, whereby making it the most serious problem we all have. ”Let me ask you a question. When everyone watches the same thing, a replay of a video clip for instance, do we see what Donald Trump says he sees? No we do not.”
”What’s the endocring system?” This is his lame follow up.
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You write Bette so well. What a great chapter and very hot! Thanks for posting so soon!
Very kind of you to say! I’m very pleased with the story. Once I tried writing Bette using the third person narrator and the muse refused. She’s either in my ear on headphones, or there’s silence. I do, however, get to pick the pictures.
Command, i am glad that you get to pick the pictures, they are absolutely stunning. Esspecially the picture from Nightingale. I admire horses for their strenght, beauty and kind heart.
The way you write Bette is very interesting and i love it!
One question, the picture from the woman , do you know the real name of her? She seems familiar, but it isn’t Laurel Holleman?
Thank you for the incredible chapter!
The actress Julianne Moore is the TV pundit in this story. Pleased that you enjoy the pictures, so delighted you found the chapter incredible. I’m pleased with it and it was very fun to write!
Hi, Command:
Nice story and nice characterization of Bette Porter, but you left us in the middle of “something”, and in an odd place with someone, I would never guess, isn’t it Julianne Moore? Well anyway, I like your story and I’ll wait for your update. Thanks
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Yes, Bette showed us emotional range in that last chapter, from confidence to vulnerability… and more. In writing its conclusion I’d felt to extend that last scene with conversation between the two lovers would have taken the energy I’d built and brought it too quickly back to reality. To me, I like that we’re still imagining them in Room 303 at the Tabard Inn. In story time, it’s still the middle of the night so, anything is possible.
Loved the chapter and Julianne Moore is a beautiful woman and wonderful actress but, she is no Laurel Holloman. Bette should always be in the arms of Tina Kennard. Will we ever see Tina for Bette, really hope so. Ir would have been wonderful for America and the world if something like this had really happened and none of us would have to be living with what we are in the Presidency. Really enjoy your writing. Thanks for posting.
Let’s get Bette involved in the journalistic world of behind the scenes sources first. She’ll be furious, once Trump gets elected, and I imagine her focus will be directed toward women’s rights, science and technology fund cutting measures, climate denying Cabinet members and reams of their environmental rollbacks and replacement bills. All of this will upset her.
I’d love for Bette to meet Tina at the Women’s March. In story time that march is six days away.
Maria, the TV pundit and journalist, is a wonderful character and companion for Bette – to knock Bette back into the game-on mood for sexual dalliances.
Tina, as a heartful, but nonetheless crafty head of an NGO will be needed, as the story of Docter Porter’s deepening involvement — in what she views as a “nightmare presidency” unfolds.
I hope we all will learn from the backroom intel, she and others will be gathering. Cool themes about medical science, (you know she’ll be hot-headed on the threats of cutbacks to research, the environment and women’s issues.)
This narrative setting of Washington under crisis is target rich for storytelling.
If you can, please enjoy Julianne Moore as a juicy lover for Doctor Porter’s enjoyment at the moment, and let’s what happens…
I truly appreciate your comment.
Let’s get Bette involved in the journalistic world of behind the scenes sources first. She’ll be furious once Trump gets elected and I imagine her fury directed toward women’s rights, science and technology fund cutting measure and, of course, climate denying Cabinet members and reams of devastating environmental rollbacks and replacement bills that appear to insane. I’d love for Bette to meet Tina at the Women’s March. In story time that march is six days away.
Nice update. Thanks