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A crush, a meeting then love?? – Chapter 17
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I saw you. Bette says as she wipes away her tears.
You saw the kiss? Tina asks.
Yeah. Bette replies.
I told her that I was involved with someone, but she kissed me anyway, she took me by surprise, Bette Im sorry. Shes a friend of my sister and we were together for a year in high school, thats it. We did love each other, but for me she was more like a friend. This situation is exactly the same as when I saw you kiss Greg. You remember? Tina asks, still rubbing her hand on Bettes back.
I love you Bette, I wouldnt risk loosing it for anything or anyone. Tina says softly as she play with Bettes hair and pull it back from her face.
Its just that I I cant please you all the way, and even if you said you would wait, Im still scared that you will miss it to much and start looking elsewhere. Bette says as tears still is running freely down her cheek.
Bette, babe, look at me. Tina says as Bette turns her face towards Tinas. Tina moves her hands up to Bettes face. Didnt you hear me? I love you Bette, only you. You can take as long as you need, Im not going anywhere. And as I said earlier, as long as I see you and are able to kiss you everyday, Im good. So please listen. Take your time. I will still be here when youre ready, okay? I love you Tina says as she leans in and places a loving and soft kiss on Bettes lips. She wipes away Bettes tears and smiles. Do you feel a little better now? Tina asks smiling and stroking Bettes face.
Bette just pulls Tina into a hug.
And Bette, dont be mad at Lara, she was just acting on her feeling, everyone is able to have them. Tina says as she pulls away slightly from the hug to look into Bettes eyes.
Yeah, shes only a person, right? Bette says and smiles.
Yeah. Tina agrees and smiles back. Come on, lets get you freshen up in the bathroom. Tina says and stands up and takes Bettes hand and guides her out of the office and into the bathroom. Bette throws some cold water in her face, Tina hand her a paper towel. When she finished drying up. She leaned in and kisses Tina. Right then Lara enters the room, she stops and just stares. Tina breaks away.
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well written. tho sad
I am very excited. I get home from work and I get to read two chapters….thanks.
Good chapter. Glad Bette and Tina work it out, poor Tina and hope Bette and Lara will help her parent and family to see about Tina. Post soon, thanks!
Whell, so much for Bette being jealous of Lara and moving forward. This Bette is just going to be a hard nut to crack.
i can understan bette and not being ready. and i commend tina for waiting. bette isnt tough and its only so long you can control yourself. i know that when my first time does arrive as much as i want it i would be scared shitless. especially if i am in love with the person. is that weird?
What a delightful surprise : just after I left my last comment, I discover this new chapter ! As always, you are pretty generous with your updates and we are spoiled readers, thanks !
As I already said, I DEEPLY appreciate your so engaging and sweet race as a storyteller. It would have be so easy and so expected to bring an intense drama full of jealousy and misunderstanding right now and I admire the way you decided to depict Bette, Tina and Lara’s reactions with so much delicacy. Just a little prickle of fear and insecurity right before to let confidence and tenderness win the fight. Great.
For me, it’s priceless to see our Bette slowly realize herself. She’s certainly not a “hard nut to crack” but simply a woman who discovers an unexpected and deeply moving chapter of her life, with understanding little fears and new feelings, and Tina is so right to let things happened naturally.
Wonderful job, Lauren, please continue this way !
oh man poor poor Tina parents are important but we have to move on if they not underestand what love is..right?..and about Bette she loves Tina so very much and i hope she realize soon she is ready to show Tina how much she loves her in a special way..lol..and Tina has needs too ohh and please make Dana and Alice be together… not Lara ok?..lol..do i have to say that chapter was really cute? i dont think so.. post real real soon thanks ;o)
Ohh, poor Tina. That sucks that her parents just cut her off like that. This story is great and I look forward to reading more. Please post soon!
thanks for the post. yeah, when it comes to parents… it’s hard.
Lauren,
Nice chapter…Parents are important however, I think back to the marriage vows of old, …”forsaking all others, cleaving only unto him/her for as long as you both shall live” are powerful committment words. Once you have chosen your life partner, they deserve no less than that committment.
Parents that turn their backs on their children, have done so to their own creation. We are who we are because of our up bringing and genetics. Our parents gave us both. What will it take to get people to understand that being gay is not a choice?
I hope that Bette will soon throw caution to the wind and take the plunge to consumate her relationship with Tina.
some parents are just stupid…. how can they hate their children… well its their loss… love this story… and i know bette will be ther for tina… please continue
Hey Lauren Thanks for posted again I just can’t keep up for you LOL! I’m just kidding I love it you’re Awesome writer Please post soon.
Lauren, your writing is a pure joy to read! It’s nice to know that Tina and Bette’s love for each other, though new, is already able to withstand obstacles that life throws them…I’m sure that the one Tina is facing w/her parents will be another one they’ll overcome together. It’s touching how much love Tina has for Bette in that she is willing to go at Bette’s pace. I think it would be awesome if they waited until they had their commitment ceremony! I’m probably alone on that thought, though ~lol~ Thnks
Great chapter..thanks
It’s a shame about Tina’s family, it’s great how supportive Bette is with Tina.