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A crush, a meeting then love?? – Chapter 17
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Chapter 17
Bette backs up a little, but shes close enough to hear and see them.
So, Tina how have you been? Whats going on in you life? Lara asks.
Well, Ive met someone. Tina says and smiles.
Bette smiles a little.
What about you? Tina asks.
No, I have had a few relationships lasting for months at a time, but nothing serious. You were the only serious one. Lara says and smiles and gently touch Tinas arm.
Bette froze even more. Did she just say that she dated Tina? Bette thinks to herself.
Yeah, but time has passed, we werent going to last, and you know it. Tina says.
No, not for sure, I loved you Tina, I guess some part of me still do. Lara says and looks at Tina.
I did love you too Lara, but it evolved into friendship for me. Nothing more. Tina replies.
She has loved another woman, she said shed never felt this way before. Bette says to herself. Oh my Im jealous, Tina loves me, she does, so its not a big deal. Ive loved someone before too. Bette keeps thinking to herself.
Then suddenly Bette is shocked.
Lara moved into Tina and kissed her. Tina didnt move. She froze. Bette turns and walks away, she walks back into he office.
Tina breaks away.
Lara, what the ***** are you doing? Tina asks angrily.
I miss you Tina, I just wanted to feel you again. Lara says.
I told you that I am involved with someone. Tina replies.
Is it serious? Lara asks.
Yes, Im in love with her. Tina replies. Bette should be here by now, she said two minutes. Oh no, what if she saw the kiss? Tina thinks to herself as fear took over her calm body.
So who is it? Lara asks.
I have to go. Tina says and leaves. She walks into the restaurant, then out to the tennis area, then to the golf area. Maybe shes in her office? Tina thinks and walks up to the door and softly knocks. Bette didnt answer, so she walked in. There she sees Bette in her chair with her head down on the desk. She is apparently been crying.
Bette? Babe? Whats wrong? Tina asks as she walks up to Bettes side, she kneel next to her and put her arm on Bettes back.
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well written. tho sad
I am very excited. I get home from work and I get to read two chapters….thanks.
Good chapter. Glad Bette and Tina work it out, poor Tina and hope Bette and Lara will help her parent and family to see about Tina. Post soon, thanks!
Whell, so much for Bette being jealous of Lara and moving forward. This Bette is just going to be a hard nut to crack.
i can understan bette and not being ready. and i commend tina for waiting. bette isnt tough and its only so long you can control yourself. i know that when my first time does arrive as much as i want it i would be scared shitless. especially if i am in love with the person. is that weird?
What a delightful surprise : just after I left my last comment, I discover this new chapter ! As always, you are pretty generous with your updates and we are spoiled readers, thanks !
As I already said, I DEEPLY appreciate your so engaging and sweet race as a storyteller. It would have be so easy and so expected to bring an intense drama full of jealousy and misunderstanding right now and I admire the way you decided to depict Bette, Tina and Lara’s reactions with so much delicacy. Just a little prickle of fear and insecurity right before to let confidence and tenderness win the fight. Great.
For me, it’s priceless to see our Bette slowly realize herself. She’s certainly not a “hard nut to crack” but simply a woman who discovers an unexpected and deeply moving chapter of her life, with understanding little fears and new feelings, and Tina is so right to let things happened naturally.
Wonderful job, Lauren, please continue this way !
oh man poor poor Tina parents are important but we have to move on if they not underestand what love is..right?..and about Bette she loves Tina so very much and i hope she realize soon she is ready to show Tina how much she loves her in a special way..lol..and Tina has needs too ohh and please make Dana and Alice be together… not Lara ok?..lol..do i have to say that chapter was really cute? i dont think so.. post real real soon thanks ;o)
Ohh, poor Tina. That sucks that her parents just cut her off like that. This story is great and I look forward to reading more. Please post soon!
thanks for the post. yeah, when it comes to parents… it’s hard.
Lauren,
Nice chapter…Parents are important however, I think back to the marriage vows of old, …”forsaking all others, cleaving only unto him/her for as long as you both shall live” are powerful committment words. Once you have chosen your life partner, they deserve no less than that committment.
Parents that turn their backs on their children, have done so to their own creation. We are who we are because of our up bringing and genetics. Our parents gave us both. What will it take to get people to understand that being gay is not a choice?
I hope that Bette will soon throw caution to the wind and take the plunge to consumate her relationship with Tina.
some parents are just stupid…. how can they hate their children… well its their loss… love this story… and i know bette will be ther for tina… please continue
Hey Lauren Thanks for posted again I just can’t keep up for you LOL! I’m just kidding I love it you’re Awesome writer Please post soon.
Lauren, your writing is a pure joy to read! It’s nice to know that Tina and Bette’s love for each other, though new, is already able to withstand obstacles that life throws them…I’m sure that the one Tina is facing w/her parents will be another one they’ll overcome together. It’s touching how much love Tina has for Bette in that she is willing to go at Bette’s pace. I think it would be awesome if they waited until they had their commitment ceremony! I’m probably alone on that thought, though ~lol~ Thnks
Great chapter..thanks
It’s a shame about Tina’s family, it’s great how supportive Bette is with Tina.