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A crush, a meeting then love?? – Chapter 118
Just then the door opens. And Nicole peeks her head in.
“Sorry, I’m gonna go, do you need anything? Call Sarah?” She asks in a soft voice.
Bette looks up and just nods. Nicole exits again.
A few minutes later the doctor enter with another doctor close behind.
“Tina and Bette, this is Doctor Evans, he’s a gynaecologic Oncologist. We are going to do another ultrasound.” Dr. Lee says. Dr. Evans reaches out his hand to Bette. She slowly takes it.
“I know it’s a very difficult time, you’ve just had some very bad news, but we have to do this right away. If it is what Dr. Lee suspect, we have to act fast.
“Off course.” Bette says. She still holds Tina tight. The crying is slowly stopping.
“We’re going to get through this.” Bette whispers to Tina.
“Okay, shall we start?” Dr. Evans asks.
Tina nods. He starts to prepare for the ultrasound machine.
Outside the hospital, Nicole takes out her cell phone. She dials her brothers number.
“Hey, sis.” Ryan answers after he sees the caller ID.
“Hey Ryan, is Sarah there with you?” Nicole asks.
“Yeah, why?” He asks.
“I had lunch with her, and suddenly she got stomach pains. I drove her to the hospital. Bette’s there with her. I think she lost the baby. I told Bette I would call Sarah.” Nicole says.
“Oh my God. Where are they?” Ryan asks.
“At the hospital in the ER.” Nicole replies.
“Okay, we’ll be right there. Thanks Nicki.” Ryan says and hang up.
Over at Ryan’s apartment:
Sarah walks in to the kitchen after being in the bathroom.
She smiles at him, but that fades when she sees his face.
“What’s wrong?” She asks.
“Nicole called. Tina’s in the hospital.” Ryan says.
“No, what happened?” Sarah asks.
“she got stomach pain. Sarah she lost the baby.” Ryan says.
“No” Sarah says as she starts to cry.
Ryan pulls her into a hug.
“Come on, I’ll drive you over there.” He says.
Back at the hospital:
Dr Evans is performing the ultrasound. Bette is holding Tina’s hand and watches closely. He takes several pictures and prints out.
Tina couldn’t bare herself to watch. She wasn’t crying out loud anymore. It is just the tears that is running freely down her cheeks.
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(58 votes, average: 3.86 out of 5)
Sorry, made a mistake with the rating. It has to be a 5 stars of course. SORRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i like this story altho i hve not commented but this chapter seems really sad – golly the things these two have gone thru so far since the start of the story – wonder why all the writers love to weave such melodramatic and hurt and hospitals scenes. I hope that this is the last of tragedies for these two ppl and from now it be happy moments.
I can’t take this anymore TOO..Lauren what the hell was that????? i dont even have str8 to comment..maybe later :o(
This is sad… But I trust you to make it better Lauren….post soon
Why, why why do they have to endure all these hardships? Not to mention it’s excruciating for the readers as well. I do love the story though. I just know you WON’T let there be cancer — please!!!! Looking forward to the next post/chapter.
this should be 10 star – you are so god damn good — i am heart broken but your are brilliant
hey good drama there..sad but those shity stuff always happen..so why not include in your story right? ;) Just dont make it too bad..so Tina can get pregnant again! :) Post soon!.
Lauren…what a really sad chapter. B & T lose the baby and now a possible tumor in her ovaries…what DRAMA !! Let’s hope it’s not too bad. And Al and Dana are right…they need to be there for one another. This is happening to both of them. Thanks for the DRAMA, Lauren.
Oh fuck this is so fucking sad, why all the bad thing happen to them, this is make me cry. Ok post soon please, thanks!
It’s amazing how just written words can conjure up such real feelings, even though we know no it’s fiction. This chapter has caused me to shed some tears for B/T, and while reading it, I’m hoping that somewhere down the road, these two are going to experience happiness, equal to the pain they are feeling now. Please, can these two get a break somewhere?! I’ve been reading all along, just haven’t been commenting, which I’m sorry for. But, please, can we please get these two pregnant….have a happy healthy baby, and have some great family moments? Please, pretty please!!!
Much too sad for a holiday period. Make everything better for them, OK. Thanks for the double posts.
youj said a little drama this is king size drama and it’s the holidays for us there is enough saddness in the world right now to keep us in tears for many years –please let us have some happiness soon- ypur story is great but i don’t think most of us have this many events happening to us in such a short time span- can’t wait for next chapters
So sad, but I enjoy your writing. Looking forward to more chapters.
Love the story… not so sure if I’m liking the drama… but I do trust you!!! Post soon!!! Thank you!!
foofy, how weird is that? same schedule. ally – hi, tink you. lauren – b/t need to come to my hosptal. its one of the premeire cancer hospitals in the world. k? make tina ok. thanks.
they just can’t stay out of the hospital can they. please let it only be a tumor that’s not cancer……please? they’ve already lost a baby, don’t let tina lose her life. keep writing. I’ll be reading.
This is heartbraking but brilliant. Please make it not be cancer
I just goit caught up with this story it’s great!!!!!!!!! now your breakin my heart here don’t let them destory each while trying to deal with the loss of this child!!!!!!!!
catching up…and I can’t take the drama. PMS and all…thanks for the post..