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The King High Killer – (Chapter: Chapter 1 The First of Many)
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As his heart rate slows to a hard race instead of the frantic pound that it was moments ago during his flee, his ears process the constant ringing of the phone that sits on the big wooden desk on the left side of the station.
“That’s odd.” He thinks. “Where is everyone?”
Carefully he walks straight down the narrow hallway where the offices are, bypassing the ringing phone. Two interrogation rooms, the deputy’s office, and finally his father’s. The door is open and before he enters he looks right, down the hallway he had just tiptoed from, and left down the hallway that leads to more offices and the holding cell.
Nothing.
No one.
Weird…and unsettling.
He shrugs and walks into the Sheriff’s office as his heartbeat dulls a little more. He couldn’t help but become relaxed in his father’s office, a place where he practically grew up. He takes a seat in the high-backed wool covered chair and examines the burn and cuts his fall had cost him.
“I guess that’s what I get for wearing shorts and a t-shirt on my jog…or chase is more the appropriate word,” he thinks. But he had won! His late night runs had paid off, despite the off-season, and he was still perfectly conditioned to outrun most of his teammates and apparently stalkers! He chuckles proudly.
He was just about through with his examination of his fresh injuries when he heard the door snap shut.
With panic in his eyes, he looked up and his face immediately relaxed despite his heart late on receiving the memo.
“Oh, hey, where is everyone? Where’s my father, I need to talk to him?” It’s moments like this, the boy thought, he wished his father wasn’t against cell phones. It would have been nice to be able to get a hold of him as he ran in fear of his life!
“Everyone is out on a call. Came in a little more than hour ago. Some girl’s dead.”
“What happened?!”
“Bout 17, slaughtered, we’re here all by ourselves.”
“Oh.” Something didn’t feel right. “What happened to the girl?”
The boy was answered with a slow lazy shrug, one that said, “I don’t care.”
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I had a hard time concentrating on this because its so late and I’m so tired, but it was thoroughly enjoyable! I laughed quite a few times. Post more soon!
babe, i’m on page 6 and i like it so far…cept for the whole first part lol but i have to go to the bar now cause i’m famous but i wanted to let you know that i like it so far : ) imu
stix this is utterly fantastic! you have no idea how excited I am about this story. so love horror! loved spence talking to the cat, why not I talk to my dog, although I don’t think he’s ever read my diary, at least I hope not lol. great start and I can’t wait for more!!
Umm Can you be anymore AMAZING? Seriously!! But I finally got around to read this , okie I HAD ONE CRAZY WEEKEND, WHICH WOULD HAVE NOT ALLOWED ME TO COMPREHEND reading this if i did at the time of inebriation(S) lol.. BUT WOW, I REALLY DIDNT WANT IT TO END.. SO THE KILLER HAVE A COPY OF THE LIST THAT SPENCER HAS hmmmm seems like the killer is going with the purchase list !! ITS GLEN ISNT IT ? BUT MORE MORE MORE..
okay so i love this… i love the mystery/romance thing…. it makes for a WONDERFUL story… but i am trying to figure out who the killer is already… even though i doubt i’ll be able to because its so early in the story… but here we go… its someone that has something to do with the dance, someone that everyone knows, someone that knew that Linda’s son is sick again, and that she was home from work cuz of it, its not all about not going to the dance cuz Patrick was going and had already bought his ticket… hmmm, right now i favor madison, but who knows, its too early…. but i liked where smthngIkike2do was going with it… the “christian life” thing, that makes me think Aunt Marie… dunno, but post super soon please!!!
well i just got done reading and commenting mds boarding school for girls and saw this and was like wow lol but i love the long updtes its def different than your other story even the style of writting lol but i liked it :) and omg is he gonna kill ashley? shes not going whats gonna happen gosh im so intrested you need to post like now lol :) pms please great updates :) keep up the great work :)
oh and i think the killer is spencers cat lol no jking lol i love she talks to her cat lol makes me feel less crazy knowing someone else out there does lol but i think the killer is a cop it has to be i just have a feeling seeing as he got into the police station so easily and the cameras noone would think anything of it if they saw him on there and the girl wow i hope she makes it although im sure she wont :( i just hope someone takes care of her son and he doesnt kill him too cuz that would be a wholenother story line lol :)
I was totally engrossed in that. I’m a coward so the scary movie scenes made me nervous but when the other characters were interacting I was so absorbed I forgot the scary stuff….more of an impact when it reappeared, excellent job. I’m liking the characterisation very much. Although if Linda gets it I may have to skip the next chapter….my friends 2 yr old died of cancer this week so the subjects a bit raw…but reading this has taken my mind off things. What else is there to say except ‘looking forward to the next post’ x
P.S. Def worth 5 stars me thinks…have you noticed just the lack of porn seems to bring ratings down??
love it love it love it. im always up for a little mystery and spashley lovin. good spencer is a bitch but im glad their talking. update soon
Im a big fan of horror movies and books. So I can say i really am intrigue by your story and Im enjoying it as well. But you have to feel sorry for any body who lives in this town who does fit the christian way of life. They seem to be dying off. The Goth chick, The gay young man, and possibly the single mother. The sad part is if she dies what happen’s to her son? Does the killer kill him too? Could the killer be someone the Carlin have come to trust? I cant wait to read the next chapters.pms
*taps fingers together* hmmm… I have to say that I deeply enjoyed this first update and am hoping you post again soon. (I don’t care if I’m cheesy! Cheese is yummy!)
First : Based on this first chapter, there is no need to be nervous. So far i’m digging it. Secondly : I like the slight role reversal. Bitchy Spencer is always interesting. Thirdly : I like how Ashley totally played the cliched diner waitress. Fourthly : I like how the conversation between Spencer and Madison segued from the murders to “You in the mood for a mint mocha frappuccino blend?” hahaha Fifthly : So many funny moments … love “porntastic” and pinky swearing with the cat. And sixly : (yes, i’m going there!) So … the victims know the killer and none of them were planning to go to the dance. Oh no, Ashley needs to get her ticket!!! Once again I am intrigued …
Ok, so I’m liking this so far. At first after the first couple of pages I wouldn’t have minded if the killer killed Spencer, but she might not be that bad. So far I don’t like Madison. I love that spencer is talking to her cat. Spencer and Ash need to make up. Can’t wait to read more. PMS!!!!