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Wings of An Angel – Bette & Tina – Chapter 7
Bette
Tina has become the center of my whole being; I don’t know where I begin or where I end. In the short time that we have known each other, she calmly strolled into my life and rocked my world right off it’s axis; shattering my concrete pedestal from the strong hold of years ago. I have become hopelessly devoted to Tina for the love that she has freely given to me is absolutely electrifying. I have no control of my emotions where she is concerned because the look of adoration in Tina’s eyes makes me want to completely lose myself; my stomach is twisted in knots. I could listen to the glorious sound of Tina’s voice for the rest of my life as she whispers in my ear, “I will always be there for you. You will always have a home in these arms of mine. I am here with you, to stay”. I knew that with Tina by my side, deeply rooted within my heart, I would never stand alone. Tina’s unique scent wraps itself around me whereby I can still smell her long after she has gone; it is permanently engraved within my skin. As time silently ticks away the ending of the night, I come to the understanding that we are meant to begin the journey of our lives together; for my heart has been captured by her. I didn’t believe I could ever fall in love, but life has a way of surprising you when you at least expect it.
Tina’s Apartment Complex – 3:45 a.m.
A comfortable silence falls between them as they walk hand in hand to Tina’s apartment complex. “Tonight has been wonderful, T. I couldn’t have asked for anything better. Your friends are great too, especially
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(43 votes, average: 3.47 out of 5)
Amazing! You have revived my hope that passion like that really does exist! I think I need to go back to bed now, or maybe a cold shower! *wink, wink*
Hot, Hot super hot!!
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! my computer is on fire you have buy me new one!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wow, I have read this so many times, it was so sweet, esp B telling T “It’s time” and T asking B to “teach her” at the end. Post more soon!!!
dear god in heaven, that was by far one of the best love scenes i have ever read, including books….i literally had my mouth hanging open so long, i have no saliva left….you rock!!!!!
Excellent detail. Very nice. Post again soon for us, please.
WOW that was hot,sexy and beautiful THANKS
Oh my god!!!! I am totally speechless, thankyou for that unexpected pleasure. I don’t even know how to respond to a chapter like that…thankyou..what will you give us from Tina’s turn??
Good God .. that was beautifully sexy. Thank you for your time, the commitment shows and it makes your stories well worth the wait. Thank you. Have a great weekend
Well now, I gotta say that was fucking great, wait no it was….. see look at me not knowing what to say. that doesn’t happen often. Now sneaky hmmm that’s the first time I have been called that. for the record I was just trying to be friendly LMAO. so lessons are expensive?? you don’t give college students any discounts??? LOL
Well I guess if you give us another nc-17 I will forgive you for that mini vacation you just took from writing.
So who’s flirting with who????
can’t wait until next chapter!!!
Just getting in and log on……And look what I find……A long awaited post from Leo Paradise…….Now I can go on and say it took you long enough but you know I like the ANTICIPATION…..so I’m not……Great job…..Now looking forward to Bette teaches Tina how to love her…..Post Soon!
Damn Leo! That was great. Your skills are the bomb! I feel like I read 5 pages of 4play….you go you! Nice…..very nice.
But, I know your not done yet; its now Tina’s turn to pleassure and please Bette which means – say it with me ya’ll….
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Damn so fucking hot and sexy and awesome, love it. Now let see how Bette gonna teach Tina how to show her love. Post soon please, thanks!
OMG..serious the most fucking hot nc-17 ever i dont need just a cold shower i need relieve right now..lol..and that line “i born for you”..priceless..ok cant wait for payback and how great student Tina will be..lol..post soon please
That was so HOT! Can’t wait for Bette to give Tina lessons on how to please her. Next chapter coming soon i hope.
Haha it would literally be Bette’s pleasure! Hehe Yes I must say, Bette definitely pleased Tina in this chapter!! Excellent job, Leo! It was well worth the wait. I love how descriptive your writing style is and how you tie all aspects in, from their emotions to the ambience of the room. Congrats on your first NC-17, very well done! Thank you!!
great, great job, luved it@!!!!!!!!!!