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Wings of An Angel – Bette & Tina – Chapter 7
Previously – Chapter 6
“For now, I just want to forget the events of the day for tonight, okay. I’ll rather talk about it later”. Tina squeezes Bette’s hand for comfort. “Whatever you want, T”. Tina suddenly stops in her tracks and with the most incredible look of hunger in her eyes stares intently at Bette and says, “What I want is for you to make love to me; to feel your luscious body against mine. I’m tired of dreaming about us, Bette. I’m tried of imaging of what you taste like. I’m tired of hearing the sounds of my own pleasure while I fantasy about you kissing me, touching me, molding me to your touch, putting your tongue on my throbbing flesh. I need you”. Bette breath escapes her for the desire to claim Tina as her own is too great to deny any longer. “Is that want you really need, T?” Tina shakes her head yes. “Than let it be so”.
Chapter 7
Tina
This must have been the longest twenty minute drive to my apartment that I have experienced in all of my life. Who would have thought that tonight would be the twilight of new beginnings; a beginning to introduce me to the truest form of everlasting love. Bette is so beautiful; for every time that I mentally devour her inner walls, my body tingles with excitement. The need to be intertwined between the cool sheets of my bed and Bette’s hardened essence caused my impatience to run wild. Bette’s words continue to automatically replay in my aroused stated mind, ‘Than let it be so’. Those were the most compelling five words Bette had ever spoken to me; compelling in that I was blind and deaf to my earthly surroundings, all I saw and heard was the voluptuous artistic form of Bette. The timbre of Bette’s voice as it delicately streamed wantonly across my vibrating mouth, the intoxicating embers of Bette’s desire as it screamed volumes of magnetic ***** appeal, the oral fragrance of her creamy moist portal that anxiously waits to drench my lengthy anchored fingers, and her enflamed temperature threatens to disintegrate the very thread of our clothing. Bette’s reddish aura blackens my vision for all I sense is the spirit of her soul howling out my name at the full moon; whimpering for her love to return. I must have her.
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(43 votes, average: 3.47 out of 5)
Amazing! You have revived my hope that passion like that really does exist! I think I need to go back to bed now, or maybe a cold shower! *wink, wink*
Hot, Hot super hot!!
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! my computer is on fire you have buy me new one!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wow, I have read this so many times, it was so sweet, esp B telling T “It’s time” and T asking B to “teach her” at the end. Post more soon!!!
dear god in heaven, that was by far one of the best love scenes i have ever read, including books….i literally had my mouth hanging open so long, i have no saliva left….you rock!!!!!
Excellent detail. Very nice. Post again soon for us, please.
WOW that was hot,sexy and beautiful THANKS
Oh my god!!!! I am totally speechless, thankyou for that unexpected pleasure. I don’t even know how to respond to a chapter like that…thankyou..what will you give us from Tina’s turn??
Good God .. that was beautifully sexy. Thank you for your time, the commitment shows and it makes your stories well worth the wait. Thank you. Have a great weekend
Well now, I gotta say that was fucking great, wait no it was….. see look at me not knowing what to say. that doesn’t happen often. Now sneaky hmmm that’s the first time I have been called that. for the record I was just trying to be friendly LMAO. so lessons are expensive?? you don’t give college students any discounts??? LOL
Well I guess if you give us another nc-17 I will forgive you for that mini vacation you just took from writing.
So who’s flirting with who????
can’t wait until next chapter!!!
Just getting in and log on……And look what I find……A long awaited post from Leo Paradise…….Now I can go on and say it took you long enough but you know I like the ANTICIPATION…..so I’m not……Great job…..Now looking forward to Bette teaches Tina how to love her…..Post Soon!
Damn Leo! That was great. Your skills are the bomb! I feel like I read 5 pages of 4play….you go you! Nice…..very nice.
But, I know your not done yet; its now Tina’s turn to pleassure and please Bette which means – say it with me ya’ll….
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Damn so fucking hot and sexy and awesome, love it. Now let see how Bette gonna teach Tina how to show her love. Post soon please, thanks!
OMG..serious the most fucking hot nc-17 ever i dont need just a cold shower i need relieve right now..lol..and that line “i born for you”..priceless..ok cant wait for payback and how great student Tina will be..lol..post soon please
That was so HOT! Can’t wait for Bette to give Tina lessons on how to please her. Next chapter coming soon i hope.
Haha it would literally be Bette’s pleasure! Hehe Yes I must say, Bette definitely pleased Tina in this chapter!! Excellent job, Leo! It was well worth the wait. I love how descriptive your writing style is and how you tie all aspects in, from their emotions to the ambience of the room. Congrats on your first NC-17, very well done! Thank you!!
great, great job, luved it@!!!!!!!!!!