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    Wings of An Angel – Bette and Tina – Chapter 10

    Story written on April 15, 2006 by Leo Paradise.
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    Story Shortlink: https://mail.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=60478
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    Just another love story from the beginning.

     

    As Antoine walked towards Kyle, he asked with his bass voice, What are the stats Nurse Miller?  Without looking in his direction she replied, The boy is in stable but critical condition.  He may have not been badly compressed by the beams, as our lady friend here, but the inhalation of the harmful debris has blocked his air passageway.  He is on an IV drop and will be monitored every half hour for the next twelve hours.  At the moment, we dont know who he is; no one has come to claim him and there have been no reports of a missing young boy fitting his description or age.  Nurse Regina Miller was a new resident of the acclaimed hospital and could be described as a pillar to all women in the medical profession; she gave as much as she took.  Nurse Miller was five feet eight inches tall, covered in the deepest ebony complexion, voluptuous curves in all the right places, the new face of corporate essence; she was the absolute picture of priceless beauty and charm, she was all business.  Antoine specifically requested that Nurse Miller be assigned as his personal aide for many professional reasons, but it was a benefit that her sexual interest in him was totally non-existent.  Its not as if Regina didnt find him very attractive with strong sexual magnetism, she just happened to be into the two legged eccentric creatures that ruled the earth.

     

    Antoine reviewed the chart with confident ease and agreed with Reginas assessment of Kyles health.  Scribbling his authorization signature on the prescribe sheet Antoine confirmed, Have the young man washed up and than take him to recovery room 909 on Chancery Ward.  What about Ms. Porter? Antoine voiced as he retrieved her chart for evaluation.  Critical; shes a fighter.  Ms. Porter was taken to the MRI unit.  She has internal bleeding, left collapsed lung, bruising in the C-4 region of the spine, fractured skull, swelling of the brain and a few cracked bones.  Operating Room six is being prep for immediate surgery as we speak and Doctor Rebecca Falcon will be here in ten minutes.  Ms. Porter will be taken to the trauma center shortly to be cleaned and dressed.  There will be a team of eight and . . BBBBBBEEEEEEEEEEEEPPPPPP, Reginas recital was interrupted by the stopping of Bettes heart as indicated by the warning device.  This signal propelled the nurses into prompt movement in checking the numerous wires connected to Bettes body and examining the state of art mechanisms to determine that the reading was correct.  Nurse Scott relayed the message, Blood pressure 100/50 and breathing has stopped.

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    2. I actually have to agree with slipperynipple. I like this story and love how you don’t just rush through things (unlike IC & Co. since they only have a maximum of 60 minutes a week to play with), but I actually had to keep stopping while reading this so I wouldn’t wear myself out. Introducing the supernatural was a good idea seeing as it would take a miracle for someone to come out of an incident like that alive.

    5. I found your story today and spent my afternoon reading it. This is intriguing me. The thing I am most curious about is the little boy, something is weird with that situation. I am wondering if this is going to be an adventure like the movie “What dreams may come.” Will we find the little boy helping Tina face the Angel of Death? This story is also reminding me of Stephen king’s book “Rose Madder.” Although I really enjoy this story and your writing is great I would have to agree with slipperynipple about the length in certain parts. It can take away from the story. other than that I am enjoying it, please continue!

    6. Cool! I seem to be drifting into the dark side of the world lately. The fight between Tina and the Dark Lord was intriguing. The Angel of Life just seemed to stand their and let Tina fight for Bette. The only time that you saw it or it was mentioned was when they were running down the hall and that Angel was running beside Bette. It will take all that Tina can give to Bette to keep her alive. Please post soon.

    7. Good to see you back Leo and this is good chapter. When Tina talk to the Angel of Death is scary, ok glad Bette ok now and hope she will wake up soon. OK post soon please, thanks!

    12. Leo, god damn – you have been gone so long and then you give us the chapter from hell :o)……holy christ this was intense leo – absolutely amazing. Pleas do continue – We so want more, but please not so much drama on the next one eventhought we love it :o) Post soon

    13. Well, so you disappear and then out of nowhere….BANG, after that chapter you once again have our attention…pls don’t ever go away that long again….I will assume that you are busy writing the next, and the next, and the next chapters….as you owe us big time….almost forgot….THANKYOU

    14. Ya know this will be the first time I will write this. The story is good but this was too much. I think I skipped to the ending. The middle took to long and took me along a path I was not very interested in. But believe me this does not mean that the story did not have the desired affect but sometimes less is more. Could of done without some of the death part and the construction site part. Thanks for the story

    15. Three months and thirteen days……..three months and thirteen days is how long you had a woman waiting…(its this how you threat your women)…….LE0, three months and thirteen days………..BUT it was worth the wait………….This chapter by far is your best……The struggle that Tina is going through to keep Bette where she belongs is heart felt…………The fight that she has with the Angel of Death clearly shows how in love she is with Bette and how far she will go to keep her…………..Now PLEASE let Tina win this fight so we can find out the mystery about Bette and Kit………..WE want a happy ending………Now I’ll only waiting THREE HOURS AND THIRTEEN MINUTES this time…………Please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    17. Leo, welcome back although it’s been WAY TOO LONG. What an ambitious and complex chapter, thank you! If you ever feel another writer’s block coming on consider writing a simpler 1 or 2 pager to keep the creative juices flowing and keep in touch with your readers.

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