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    Wings of An Angel – Bette and Tina – Chapter 10

    Story written on April 15, 2006 by Leo Paradise.
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    Number of Comments: 17
    Words: 10630
    Story Shortlink: https://mail.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=60478
    Author Notes:

    Just another love story from the beginning.

     

    The universe began to tremble, the trees began to sway, the ground started to deteriorate and the fires of his aura performed a heritage dance of endless hate.  His cloak billowed in the strong hurricane winds and with swift lightning speed he stood before Tina; standing inches outside her secluded circle whereby Tina could feel the coldness of Bettes body and smell the burnt charcoals swimming from her pores.  The faceless creature towered miles above Tina and as he spoke, his words purposely slithered around Tinas body; squeezing the last hushed whisper from her mummified body.  God doesnt live here child.  You will see what she sees and you will feel the pain that pricks through her body.  This is just the beginning of where you will soar into flight and believes me Tina, the landing wont be easy.  With that challenge, he was gone from sight and Tina was returned to the conscious mind of drifting awake.

     

    Tina found herself in a state of waken confusion; nothing was familiar to her.  She didnt know where she was, why she was lying on a couch, why her body was frozen from the inside as if she had suffered some kind of an electric terminal shock.  As seconds ticked casually to indicate the passing of time, her body began to thaw from the warmth of the suns rays penetrating through the barrier of the glass windows.  For anyone that looked upon her, you would have imagined the picture of silent grace; resting peacefully with arms crossed while being caressed with the touch of the superiors holy stroke from head to toe.  As Tinas mind slowly came into focus with her surroundings, she could hear hushed voices, male and female, laced with worry and puzzlement.

     

    Do you have any idea what might have brought this one?

     

    I hope she will be okay.  She is really scared.

     

    If you thought the love of you life was gone from you, how would you react?

     

    Ever since Bette came into her life, Tina has been glowing from the inside out; always happy.

     

    If there was anyone that deserved happiness, its Tina.

     

    I couldnt think of any other couple who deserved each other more.

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    2. I actually have to agree with slipperynipple. I like this story and love how you don’t just rush through things (unlike IC & Co. since they only have a maximum of 60 minutes a week to play with), but I actually had to keep stopping while reading this so I wouldn’t wear myself out. Introducing the supernatural was a good idea seeing as it would take a miracle for someone to come out of an incident like that alive.

    5. I found your story today and spent my afternoon reading it. This is intriguing me. The thing I am most curious about is the little boy, something is weird with that situation. I am wondering if this is going to be an adventure like the movie “What dreams may come.” Will we find the little boy helping Tina face the Angel of Death? This story is also reminding me of Stephen king’s book “Rose Madder.” Although I really enjoy this story and your writing is great I would have to agree with slipperynipple about the length in certain parts. It can take away from the story. other than that I am enjoying it, please continue!

    6. Cool! I seem to be drifting into the dark side of the world lately. The fight between Tina and the Dark Lord was intriguing. The Angel of Life just seemed to stand their and let Tina fight for Bette. The only time that you saw it or it was mentioned was when they were running down the hall and that Angel was running beside Bette. It will take all that Tina can give to Bette to keep her alive. Please post soon.

    7. Good to see you back Leo and this is good chapter. When Tina talk to the Angel of Death is scary, ok glad Bette ok now and hope she will wake up soon. OK post soon please, thanks!

    12. Leo, god damn – you have been gone so long and then you give us the chapter from hell :o)……holy christ this was intense leo – absolutely amazing. Pleas do continue – We so want more, but please not so much drama on the next one eventhought we love it :o) Post soon

    13. Well, so you disappear and then out of nowhere….BANG, after that chapter you once again have our attention…pls don’t ever go away that long again….I will assume that you are busy writing the next, and the next, and the next chapters….as you owe us big time….almost forgot….THANKYOU

    14. Ya know this will be the first time I will write this. The story is good but this was too much. I think I skipped to the ending. The middle took to long and took me along a path I was not very interested in. But believe me this does not mean that the story did not have the desired affect but sometimes less is more. Could of done without some of the death part and the construction site part. Thanks for the story

    15. Three months and thirteen days……..three months and thirteen days is how long you had a woman waiting…(its this how you threat your women)…….LE0, three months and thirteen days………..BUT it was worth the wait………….This chapter by far is your best……The struggle that Tina is going through to keep Bette where she belongs is heart felt…………The fight that she has with the Angel of Death clearly shows how in love she is with Bette and how far she will go to keep her…………..Now PLEASE let Tina win this fight so we can find out the mystery about Bette and Kit………..WE want a happy ending………Now I’ll only waiting THREE HOURS AND THIRTEEN MINUTES this time…………Please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    17. Leo, welcome back although it’s been WAY TOO LONG. What an ambitious and complex chapter, thank you! If you ever feel another writer’s block coming on consider writing a simpler 1 or 2 pager to keep the creative juices flowing and keep in touch with your readers.

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