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    What Hurts The Most

    Tina tilted her head and smiled apologetically.

    “Scott you are a really sweet guy and maybe last week I would have taken you up on that offer….but now….well I’m sorry but your just not my type”

    She pecked him on the cheek and was out of the car before he had a chance to protest.

    The following evening……..

    “Hey girls…and how are you both this fine evening”

    Alice and Dana have their heads buried in Alice’s laptop at their usual table at the Planet.

    “Hey Bette…your very cheery and…. WoW….. onto a promise are we” Alice had looked up and Bette did look particularly hot tonight.

    “Hi Bette…jut ignore her she is a little cranky she has until 10pm to finish the top 10 what….”

    “Can you fucking believe it he rang me at 6 o’clock the moron he wants the top 10 celebrity outfits by tonight, I mean what does a fashion victim like me know about fucking clothes….the only upside I have to spend the next few hours looking through all theses hot pics……why are you so happy anyway”

    “Because my dear little fashion victim friend in about half an hour the girls of my dreams is walking through that door”

    “Fuck me….I hope it’s Jennifer Aniston in this dress” Alice has turned her attention back to the monitor. I have just found my no.1”

    “Fuck Jennifer Aniston….

    “Yes please” pipes in Dana as she stares at the image on the screen.

    “I’ll leave you two to it I’ll just go get a drink”

    “OK”

    If that fucking Peabody doesn’t stop talking shite I’m going to stab her with this fucking pencil you could write all she knows about making movies on the back of a postage stamp.

    Tina looks at her watch again, fuck…..your lucky Peabody they are too many witnesses in this room right now.

    “Ok I think that just about covers it…”

    “Just one more thing Tina before we go”

    She’s dead….I am going to kill her….100 different ways I am going to kill her.

    “Go back one…was that Tina”

    “Was what Tina”

    Bette is now standing directly behind Alice and Dana as she was returning from the bar, her interest in what they where doing was instantly perked at the mention of Tina and Alice goes back a page.

    Comments

    1. me pot? Never!!!If I finish with the book I’m working on, I’ll write a chapter tonight. Can you say the same ;) ? I haven’t reread, because I know I’ll be mighty distracted if I do, but thank you for reposting. You’re giving future generations the honour of reading your whole story, lol. XOXO

    2. This is so good and thanks for posting the story again, Im glad to catch up with your stories and loving it all. Love B&T, they are so cute and sweet and love how they are so jealous. Please post more, thanks!

    3. Skimmer Skimmer Skimmer – wow! wow! wow! It’s even better reading the 2nd time around. Thank you and bring on that chinese Dictionary – 1 billion words I’m so there :) Thank you again for this brilliant story!

    4. Hey Skimmer, glad you are re-posting this story. I loved it then and still love it now! Just to not, one of your early chapters (page 4-8 I think) was a repeat instead of the next chapter so there is a bit of a skip. Hugs…keep up the great work!

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